Douluo Dragon of Time

If the protagonist is a girl, don't put it on a male channel to gain popularity. Most boys read novels because they like the main character to be a boy. If you want to write about a girl, just put it on a female channel. Thank you.

After reading a few chapters, first, the author writes about a female protagonist in a male channel. First, he labels the introduction as not married or as a couple. Second, there is too little background information. How old was the protagonist in his previous life? No wait Third, the points added to the protagonist's martial spirit should at least be added to the basic value of the martial spirit, right? (If it weren't for the basic points, with the current addition, no one would be able to beat the protagonist at level 99) Fourth, the protagonist has such wonderful thoughts. He can still have such a beautiful mentality after traveling 12 years. I don't know what kind of environment he grew up in. Fifth, the combat power is forcibly suppressed. The data panel and actual combat are not equal, and endurance and strength are not directly proportional. The most basic values ​​are unknown.

The protagonist is too Holy Mother and a bit stupid. With a soul beast background, you don't have to force yourself to fight the Titled Douluo at level 42. Although he won the battle, he let people go. Although he was afraid of the stronger people from Wuhun Palace, who could do it in Douyi? In this era of Emperor Tian, ​​there is not even a soul core at level 99. Even Sendaoliu has the power of an angel and the Dragon God Claw. It's not something that can be said to make people laugh, but the writing is still very good.

1. Why write a female protagonist in a male channel? Answer: Because I didn't say I couldn't write. 2. Is it necessary to join this Shrek Academy? Answer: I joined to beat people up and take advantage of others, and I know how to run away. 3. Single marriage? Answer: The current style is light, but the focus is on plot.

The first 130 chapters can be said to be the best of Douluo fan fiction, until the protagonist fights against Kikui, and his combat power collapses into a mess. How about level 40 plus a level 30 auxiliary to fight two level 95s? Interesting. The emotions of the first 130 chapters were completely wasted. Not recommended for anyone to watch. Evaluated as cancer.

Please update more, it's very nice, please update more.

It can be seen that he is a new author. His writing was a bit immature at the beginning, but it got better and better later on.

To be honest, if it was really written by a boy, I would just throw him in the trash can 8 points because this is a female channel, love and face will not give a low score The system is very good, just like Japanese food The master arrived at Shrek at the wrong time, and Tang San's level was wrong too. In the early stage, it was very much like reading the original work. It has been changed but not completely. The foot angle is optional.

Is the heroine Gu Yuena? Is it single or multiple?

Let's not talk about skipping challenges and so on. After all, the next few games are also a batch of broken battles. Now that I have read Chapter 374, let me tell you my feelings. To me, the protagonist is the ultimate invincible Holy Mother. You crippled Tang Hao and thought you were going to kill him. But he was still kept beside the Lake of Life. There were still several ferocious beasts who packed Tang Hao and sent him outside the Star Dou Forest before the Spirit Hall picked him up and You divided all of Tang Hao's soul bones as the championship prize of the competition. Chrysanthemum Ghost Douluo in the Sunset Forest was about to kill you. However, Chrysanthemum Douluo was spared because of Ghost Douluo's plea. Later, after killing Poseidon, he clearly wanted to rule Poseidon Island and even gave Bo Saixi advice to save Tang Chen. Why are you such a holy mother? What good will it do you to give your enemy a last bit of tenderness? Are you sure Tang Chen won't target you for Tang Hao after he comes out? Since you regard the people in the fief so important, why do you want to cause trouble for yourself? After the competition, Bibi Dong tried his best to fight against you. You killed Bibi Dong several times but failed to kill her completely. Later, Bibi Dong used Dai Mubai and the Xingluo Empire as puppets and sent troops to your fiefdom to beat you. At first, I saw that you acted decisively and killed the three Titled Douluo sent by the Wuhun Palace and a lot of Soul Saint Soul Douluo. I thought you were no longer a saint, but after the battle, Dai Mubai had more than before. I jumped in your face so many times and tried to kill you, but you didn't kill me. Even if you didn't kill your people even if they came to attack your territory and kill your people, I accepted it. Later, Dai Mubai was not killed by you yourself or by order, but was killed by the captured White Tiger Legion in the name of martyrdom. How come your Holy Mother has reached this point and still allows this B to have a good reputation even after his death? Another thing I have to complain about is that the protagonist is already a level 99 ultimate Douluo numerically when he is in the seventh ring. However, to kill three titled Douluo, he still has to activate the martial spirit avatar to pile up the numerical value to the 109th level of God before killing him. Anyway, I can't stand such a virgin protagonist, and I don't ask you to kill decisively and decisively. But I also can't accept the character who jumped in your face in the early stage. Except for Tang Hao and Dai Mubai, no one else has died, and you didn't kill these two, so you have to have others grow up and jump in your face like crazy before you are willing to kill them? Shrek's gang of students, let's not talk about it. You don't care if Flanders and Yu Xiaogang targeted you so much before, and you don't care if Bibi Dong tried to commit suicide twice. It's not a problem that you want to write the protagonist of Wei Guangzheng. The problem is that no matter how Wei Guangzheng is, he will not let his enemies grow crazily and constantly add obstacles to you and become a highlight, so he withdrew.