Civilian Snake Soul Master in Douluo World

It's okay in fanfics, and there aren't many bad points so far, but you've only started charging for more than 80 fanfics? ? ? I have no intention of reading any more🤐

The protagonist's soul power reached level 10 a year ago. He has been practicing for more than a year and the first soul ring in more than 700 years has broken through the soul power level 12. He is really useless. When he encounters gangsters, he grabs money and kills decisively. When he encounters Zhu Zhuqing, he tries to kill the protagonist by pretending to be more present. After defeating Zhu Zhuqing, he still needs a few thousand gold soul coins as a thank you fee. What I want to say is that if you kill her, everything is yours.

Reference development direction 1 snake (swallowing, size, strong body) 2 Yamata no Orochi (immortality, disaster, poison) 3 Feathered Serpent (Death, Undead, Styx) 4 dragon 5 Medusa (cursed, petrified) 6 Earth Mother Goddess (most mythological Earth Mother Goddess are related to snakes) 7 Yig (Snake Father of Cthulhu Mythos)

To be honest, in terms of emotional lines, I think the author's writing is very average, and can even be said to be a bit poor. Secondly, if you are pursuing Dugu Yan for the sake of fairy grass, you can definitely enter the Tiandou Royal Team to get close to her based on your strength. But you approach her like a thief, which makes me very uncomfortable. Although I have only read Chapter 64, I don't know what the rest of the plot will be like. But I can already guess two points: First, the protagonist and Dugu Yan are both snake martial souls, so they should be able to use martial soul fusion skills. If you write in this aspect, you will almost certainly succeed in Dugu Yan's strategy. Second, the protagonist acts like a thief, using the people around Duguyan to drive a wedge between her and Yu Tianheng, and then Yu Tianheng maintains the pride of his family, and finally succeeds in estrangement. At this time, it will definitely be divided into three directions. Write in one of them: 1. The protagonist obtains fairy grass and walks together with Dugu Yan 2. The protagonist obtained the fairy grass but did not go together with Dugu Yan 3. The protagonist got the fairy grass and walked together with Dugu Yan for a short time. Later, Dugu Yan knew the protagonist's purpose of approaching her and used the people around her to alienate her and broke up. Of these three points, I think the first point is the most likely, but what I want to see is the second point. The third point is too difficult to write than the first and second points.

After reading a little bit, I knew that the subsequent plot would be difficult to control and the score would not be particularly high. The author has been very careful, but the author made a mistake in choosing the topic at the beginning. When writing about civilians with innate soul power level three or below, try not to be the same age as Tang San. The difference must be at least six years or more, otherwise the protagonist must be greatly strengthened. It's difficult to control the weak Tang San. Generally, many of the high scorers are Kaidian Xiaogua, who is about the same age as Qian Renxue or Hu Liena, or even Bibi Dong. They use their age and cultivation advantage to defeat Tang San with great difficulty. The original protagonists are like idiots without forcibly reducing their intelligence. But the author also paid attention and gave it a five points.

The author designs all kinds of small conflicts very carefully, but when it comes to the emotional line, well... The writing is like being high. Can you imagine that feeling? It's like a little boy who is not yet in love will blush when he sees a little girl. In the first grade of elementary school, he starts to peek at girls writing diaries. He makes fun of others but hopes to be spat on... It's hard to describe.

Generally, the protagonist cannot distinguish priorities, always does useless things, is not in a hurry at all, and starts to overwhelm the combat power in the fourth ring.

I suggest you leave as soon as possible. There is a long section of unclear meaning, and it feels like you have confused yourself by copying a book without fully copying the content. It's a little interesting, but most of it is probably copied, because the front and back are out of place, just like when you eat vegetables, it feels like you pinched a piece of raw meat out of the stir-fry. Then the update is super, super, super slow. I won't complain about the above. The update is too slow, and the plot is very dry and boring. There is only one interesting paragraph, but most of it is rubbish content and purely useless text.

The subject matter is good, the quality is acceptable, and the protagonist is reasonably intelligent. It's just that the relationship line is not very good, either sincere or just for use, the mother-in-law and mother's are not very good.

Why don't you choose a sub-dragon species with dual attributes of water and thunder if you have the third soul ring?