My Father Liu Jinu

Write less about war and more about political struggles

I don't know what to say, I really like the old Liu family, but Liu Song is too high-minded and has gone low.

The writing style needs to be improved, and it's a bit tiring to read.

Food and grass, it's a pity that I came too early

The rhythm is good, there is still room for improvement, please encourage me, few people write about Liu Song

I subscribed to Baidu and read all the first 400 chapters. I felt it was okay. I skipped to read the rest. It doesn't matter if there are many emotional lines. The daily life is too many and cumbersome (and as long as it is daily life, it is all emotional lines). When this woman Xue Yuyao comes out, I feel that something is wrong in the plot. I know this woman in everything I do. Is the author really a strict wife? So this book has no taste at all when written, and it feels like an industrial assembly line. Looking at high-scoring novels such as Shao Song and Han Gaozu, I don't understand that I can't write a book without a woman? There is also almost no ink about the recovery of horse-producing lands in Liangzhou that should have been rewritten. I read Shuchen not long ago, and now I am pursuing Kuo Jin. I would like the author to take a good look at the excellent works on the market before writing a new book, and understand what the real needs of us readers are. As for the mixture of classical Chinese and vernacular, it does not matter. Works with good content will not be scored too low because of this

Looks pretty good, fresh subject matter

The writing is well written and the history is sophisticated. It is a rare good book.

It's rare, I'm looking forward to it and hope to work hard.

The book is a good book, but in the first few volumes, everything is detailed and half-text is used. There are too many connections and too dense connections, which affects the smoothness of reading. In the later years, the author restrained himself and the smoothness was much better.