Invincible Start

Ye Xin knew very well that even if he said that he didn't have the treasure, others wouldn't believe it. It was better to let them think that he had the treasure so that others wouldn't worry about it. He could have just wiped out the others, but after all, this continent is his "home"

First of all, you have to set up the invincible text. The upper realm is invincible. If the lower realm is missing, the strength is sealed. If the strength is sealed, the secret method cannot be used. Is the invincible IQ in the upper realm unnecessary? Or the IQ is also sealed along with the strength. Even if Ji Ba does that kind of thing, don't just kill him directly, at least give him a general direction. If he says to put it aside, then put it aside. If the strength drops in the lower realm, and the IQ drops, then the mind is good! Are you going to be a Ninja Turtle? If Ji Ba belongs to the first volume, then the author should at least explain it later. It would not look comfortable for readers to just leave it aside. The above is just my personal opinion.

Ding Xiu was really miserable. Originally, there was nothing wrong with him snatching treasures like this. Who among the cultivators would not rely on their strength~ Just like those old men, but the old men were lucky enough to see his terrifying strength. They knew they were outmatched and quickly withdrew.

The protagonist looks a little unhappy at first. He seems to be decisive in killing and has a high reputation. However, he was betrayed by his apprentice and his son was also killed. He has not found the other party to take revenge. He has to seal his own cultivation. He pretends to be cool in a low-level continent. He also likes to meddle in other people's business. He says he doesn't care about other people's business. He gets slapped in the face very quickly. It's like he can't walk when he sees a woman. After meeting a woman, he is an old friend. After more than one woman is an old friend, are they your daughters? He likes to take care of women so much, and is looked down upon by some ants. He is always taunting and provoking. Who would like to watch such a frustrating story? However, the author seems to have listened to some people's suggestions, and later showed the protagonist's invincible side, and there is not so much nonsense. This book Come on, I am stronger than the opponent, and I still have to fight with the enemy for a long time before making a move. Now I feel that I am the protagonist of the truly invincible and cool article. The chapter of killing Ji Ba is really a relief. I like this kind of feeling of killing the opponent. I hope the next time will be like this. Keep up the good work.

It's so long-winded. The author's positioning is wrong. He shouldn't write about Invincible. Invincible seals himself. It's a joke. Invincible takes his family away and doesn't care what he does in this continent. Don't use the few chapters written by Invincible as an excuse. Other authors also write about Invincible. Why do they write more than you? Why do they read so much? It's always a slap in the face, and any random person will look down on the protagonist. It feels like I'm back to the era of two years ago when the online literary world pretended to be a slap in the face, just pretending. On the one hand, I want to show that the protagonist is invincible, but on the other hand, I want to pretend to be slapped in the face, which is out of place. The introduction is good, but the content is too bad. An invincible strong person should be indifferent. The author writes about indifference at one moment, and then talks nonsense like a child. It is very uncomfortable to read. The author also said that the protagonist is invincible only in one plane, so you are still there. Wasting time on a small continent? Find that bitch and Ji Ba early, wipe out the Ji family, and leave with your descendants. The target is all the worlds. You have to waste time in this land of ants, otherwise don't write about being invincible. It seems useless.

Shit is invincible. . . Just a small map that is invincible. Later, he became manipulated again. Selling dog meat on sheep's heads

Fellow Taoists, the poison test is completed. Suitable for novices and not too poisonous. Well, what does the writing say? It should be pretty good! Although it's okay, the score is too outrageous. I suspect it's a fake. (Although it's okay, I felt weird and uncomfortable after watching it. I don't know why🤐, this is just my personal opinion, don't criticize me)

So awesome. The universe is invincible. Everyone looked down upon him when he returned to Novice Village. All provocative. This ancestor is your younger brother. That ancestor is your younger brother. This is after your old friend. That one is after your old friend. We all met on the first day back. He talks trash about ancient gods and demons at every turn. I know you are strong and don't have to stress all the time. 😂

If you write like this, it will give me a headache. A strong person should have the strength of a strong person. Wouldn't it be enough to find your apprentice? Don't you claim to be the strongest in both worlds of gods and demons? ?

How can I put it, everything else is acceptable, except that the protagonist was cheated by his apprentice. For someone like me who has a strong sense of substitution, this point is too uncomfortable. This is a failure. I hope that revenge will not take too long, otherwise readers with a strong sense of substitution will give up.