All the Female Apprentices Want to Kill Me

This book is generally good, and its subject matter is a funny harem. If it is imaginary, why is it so careful and restrained? Since it's just imagination, let's make it more gorgeous and grand.

There is a shortage of books. This book was randomly recommended by the system. When I looked at the name, I lost the desire to continue reading. I read it patiently for a while, but unexpectedly I found that it was quite good. Although there are some flaws, they are innocuous and can be read by friends who are book lovers. In the end, I still felt that the name was a bit out of place. When I read it as a whole, the title of the work did not match the content. Although it was similar, it still felt inconsistent.

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It's refreshing and immersive, but the reason why the female character likes the protagonist is not clearly explained, which makes it a bit baffling. Also, let me explain to the author, he probably didn't delete the comment. Actual number of comments = number of displayed comments – number of rewards 27-7=20

Depending on the topic, I'll get in. The type of question indicates that I have seen it before. Then, I tried to look at it. I found the system's presence too weak. And when I went to Xiao Ruoqing's burning ancestral grave, I felt an urge to express my true feelings: It's really starting to look more and more like him, like the type where only the male protagonist in the world acts like a fool and doesn't know he's very strong. Xiao Ruoqing's appropriate imagination adds interest, but too much imagination will only make people disgusted. Really, that was my first feeling at that time. Although it seems that her memory before reincarnation is that the male protagonist persecutes her, we didn't see it... Just based on her few words, it doesn't make me feel the same way, so it seems like it is too much imagination. The text gives me the feeling that the pace is too slow. It seems that it has been around twenty or thirty chapters since burning the ancestral graves, and the reward feedback has only been given once. The key is that the reward is still... Maybe I want to set the stage, maybe I want to describe it more vividly, but if the pace is too slow, I feel that it is easy to cause visual fatigue. Also, the content shown in your title, feedback and rewards for recruiting disciples, should be focused on this as much as possible. Therefore, as you currently write, the male protagonist's strength improves very slowly. It would be better if it could be made a little faster. Therefore, here are some suggestions for the author: speed up the pace a little, and don't make the heroine seem to be overly imagining. Then, the character of the male protagonist... (I don't care about this) Oh, these settings before the heroine's reincarnation should be supplemented as soon as possible in a reasonable and sensational way, but don't add poison, otherwise the whole book will be over. Then about the heroine's two or three things with the hero before reincarnation, my guess is: Why does the male protagonist deprive the female protagonist of her innate body, sword heart and other things? In fact, you can be a little more sensational here. Without being poisonous, you can stir up the reader's heart, and it is best to make the reader shed tears of emotion. For example, it's because of something... For them or something... And then use this method... In short, the heroine's emotions will have a big reversal. She thought the male protagonist was harming her, but actually... Well, although this setting development may sound quite cliché, as long as the setting arrangement is clever and the author's excellent writing style can touch the emotional chord, it must be very nice. Oh, finally, quickly transform into a tentacle monster and become a crazy codeword girl~ Above, thank you! (I'm sorry if I said something wrong!)

There is no rating below eight in the comment area, which makes people think of something

You can't do it, author, the real author is like this

In 2015, Shennong was poisoned to death by the settings of 211 and 985. It is really unacceptable to cultivate immortals and cultivate 211 and 985. Shennong has died to show future generations that the poison should not be allowed to enter.

The protagonist understands the state of selflessness. Even if he relies on the system, he should have some understanding, but he always talks nonsense. It can only be interesting in the first few chapters.

After viewing more than 50 photos, I feel like they are selling sheep over dogs.