Stop Pretending, What You Are Talking About is the Autobiography of the Heavenly Master!

I quite like the idea of ​​this book, it's pretty good, but the protagonist's portrayal is a bit unsatisfactory, and the supporting characters are also a bit naive. I don't know if it's my own imagination. It stands to reason that the protagonist has shown unusual behavior in every case. As a member of the Zero One Bureau, after experiencing such a thing, he will definitely come to find out. After all, this is a weird world, and the Zero One Bureau does not have any way to deal with the weirdness. As the captain and deputy captain of the team, Bai Chen and Zhao Yong are a bit irresponsible, and the connection is a bit stretched. For example, the part where Chu Renmei fucks Zhao Yong is actually a bit broken. Storytellers tell stories very slowly, and it is impossible to tell stories in a short time. So much has been said in time, and if it is really deduced this way, in fact, Zhao Yong cannot survive the time when the protagonist finishes saying this and Bai Chen goes to rescue Zhao Yong. This must be a critical moment, so the protagonist's opening time is a bit short. There is also the episode about Uncle Ninth, things have already happened, Bai Chen and Zhao Yong are still concealing their purpose of coming, and they said earlier that they want the protagonist to be the chief, which is a bit intriguing here, and the setting of the protagonist is also silly, whether it is the Chu Renmei or the Five Prisons episode, the most silly part is especially the episode about Uncle Ninth. Overall, it's pretty good. It's just that the protagonist and supporting characters are a bit stretched. The idea is pretty good. I like it. The writing and logic are a bit weak. But as a novel, logic is secondary, and the main thing is that it's enjoyable. The key is that it doesn't look like this. It's cool, but it's also a bit silly. The real cool bits probably haven't come out yet. It's recommended that the cool bits be released as soon as possible, so that there will be more first-order orders after it's released. Otherwise, readers will not only feel uncomfortable watching it, but they may even feel that the protagonist is a fool and have no sense of involvement at all. The author needs to work harder and not let the protagonist hide and tuck it away any longer. If he hides it and tucks it in, no one will read the book.

Doing something that others have never done is better than imitating others. Lin Ye discovered that there are no ghost stories in this world, so he started from this aspect.

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The censorship is too harsh. I'm a bit afraid that the introduction will be completely deleted.

It's getting more and more deviated from logic. No Taoist priest can do it. Since he even knows the gossip, he doesn't know about a profession similar to that of a Taoist priest? What else can you do besides watching the live broadcast? Is this world really so exaggerated? Don't you even have a little knowledge of it, especially ordinary people, and don't you have any folk tales? The setting of this world is both reasonable and illogical. Reasonableness in the world is created by the author. Lack of logic is also created by the author. It is self-contradictory. Good stories are conceived slowly. Without logic, it would be strange if it is not told.

Good guy, the rewards of this system are quite generous. It's hard not to love the reward of ten years of life. Lin Ye has to complete the task well. The rewards are still very generous.

Alas, it's pig's feet pretending to be crazy and buying stupid people again? ? ?

Just take it as encouragement. To be honest, there are so many poisonous points and slots that you can read them at a glance. To be honest, I always feel that these people who write books are all "why not eat minced meat" guys who don't eat the fireworks of the world, and write about the poisonous points that everyone knows. Later I felt that there might be other ways.

Forced intelligence reduction, many unnecessary words have to be written down, I can't stand it anymore

Author, how about we talk about a mysterious recovery (evil smile)