I Chose Twelve Talismans at the Beginning and Was Scolded for Breaking Stones
by Delusion
About This Novel
The boss behind the scenes, the role in the heavens, the twelve talismans. Vicious beasts, monsters, demons, zombies, undead, etc. Appear in secret realms and invade the city. If you obtain awakened objects and gain superpowers, you can become a psychic practitioner. When the Burning Fruit and the Scorching Escape ability are placed in front of you, which one will you choose? "No! I don't choose either one. I just want these two broken rocks, and no one can stop me." Monkey Talisman: Transform all animal forms, Rat Spell: Gives life to still objects. "Give these two charms when you come up? That's good..." "Rat Charm! Gourd King Kong, Pikachu, Payne, show up!" Qin Lang was assigned to the failing class, but he was happier than anyone else. Relying on his superb clay figurine craftsmanship, characters that could not appear in this world were reborn here.
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Official(30)Scraped 19d ago
Isn't it good for the protagonist to be alone? I have to write about a friend, and every day I am either saving my friend or on the way to save my friend. Even though I can be free and comfortable on my own, I have to put a burden on myself!
The protagonist participates in the awakening ceremony and doesn't even wear underwear properly? It was done unwillingly and the quality was too low.
I thought it was about leveling up monsters. What about the underworld in the first few dozen pictures of Momojiji? So boring
Just look at the introduction and you will know it is a studio.
The layout is too small
Saiyan, Freeze Demon, God of Destruction, Angel, King of All, Broly, Dragon Ball Shenron Wishes, Magic Lamp Wishes, Black Qi Wizard Sword Dragon, Righteous Wizard Dad, Eight Demons, Nine Masks, Vampires, Werewolves and so on.
The smell in this room is too strong.
When I read the title introduction and the name of the first chapter, I was immediately speechless. Why does the main character have to be ridiculed by countless people?
It's like the cerebellum has atrophied, what the hell🤐
The system is crappy, I'll write it later if I think about it
Do you understand the power of the Holy Lord? There is no problem if you want to follow the upgrade stream, but the ability of the spell is weakened, and then the plot is forced to act like a pig and eat the tiger to show off. Can you think about it before writing it? The subject matter is good, but the plot seems to be crappy now. Perhaps you would have been a good writer ten years earlier!
Let me ask, is this the protagonist's story or Payne's story? Why are these pictures all about Payne? You want to say foreshadowing, but I can't see what it is foreshadowing at all?
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Community(0)
Official(30)Scraped 19d ago
Isn't it good for the protagonist to be alone? I have to write about a friend, and every day I am either saving my friend or on the way to save my friend. Even though I can be free and comfortable on my own, I have to put a burden on myself!
The protagonist participates in the awakening ceremony and doesn't even wear underwear properly? It was done unwillingly and the quality was too low.
I thought it was about leveling up monsters. What about the underworld in the first few dozen pictures of Momojiji? So boring
Just look at the introduction and you will know it is a studio.
The layout is too small
Saiyan, Freeze Demon, God of Destruction, Angel, King of All, Broly, Dragon Ball Shenron Wishes, Magic Lamp Wishes, Black Qi Wizard Sword Dragon, Righteous Wizard Dad, Eight Demons, Nine Masks, Vampires, Werewolves and so on.
The smell in this room is too strong.
When I read the title introduction and the name of the first chapter, I was immediately speechless. Why does the main character have to be ridiculed by countless people?
It's like the cerebellum has atrophied, what the hell🤐
The system is crappy, I'll write it later if I think about it
Do you understand the power of the Holy Lord? There is no problem if you want to follow the upgrade stream, but the ability of the spell is weakened, and then the plot is forced to act like a pig and eat the tiger to show off. Can you think about it before writing it? The subject matter is good, but the plot seems to be crappy now. Perhaps you would have been a good writer ten years earlier!
Let me ask, is this the protagonist's story or Payne's story? Why are these pictures all about Payne? You want to say foreshadowing, but I can't see what it is foreshadowing at all?
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