
Outrageous, There Are Real Time Travellers!
by Black Cannon
About This Novel
In the evening self-study class of her freshman year, Su Mu met an authoritative female friend who claimed to have traveled to another world. She wanted to ask him to help take care of her daughter on Earth. He also promised to give him a bottle of genetic enhancement fluid as reward. Su Mu thought it was a joke and agreed. Then, he saw a bottle of genetic enhancement potion on the desk...
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Official(41)Scraped 2d ago
The plot is good! It's just written in such a way that the protagonist sometimes looks like an idiot! IQ performance fluctuates high and low! Sometimes it feels like the city is quite deep! Sometimes he looks like a pure novice!
The subject matter is very good, and the writing at the beginning is also good, but then it starts to become intellectually depressing. Why do you have to open that crappy milk tea shop? Are you short of money? Moreover, if you don't solve the problem quickly if you offend someone, why don't you just use some animals to solve the problem for the Xu family? Moreover, you got one billion for treating an overseas Chinese. If you pay less, let them settle the matter for you. The Xu family will be settled. The same goes for those four gangsters. Wouldn't it be over if you just kill them?
Where did this 8.5 Come from? I only saw episode 6 and couldn't stand it any longer. All kinds of poison and too many stupid points.
This book is a good idea, but the author can be more careful when writing the book. Take that otherworld song, you didn't even apply for copyright yourself, but you sold it to others, aren't you afraid of disputes?
The author will update soon
Very nice! Update it quickly, why aren't you updating it?
After reading some, I can see that the author's mentality is still very young.
Come on come on. The more you go out and read, the more stories you write will be more relevant to public values, and readers will naturally be able to relate to them. 😘
Studio article, purely disgusting
Whose parents would tell everything about their daughter, and what's worse, they would tell others about her private parts of the body the next day. It's disgusting.
A eunuch? Why hasn't it been updated? Isn't it good?
My IQ is not on the line. I have such a good start and end up playing like this. I keep pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger.
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Official(41)Scraped 2d ago
The plot is good! It's just written in such a way that the protagonist sometimes looks like an idiot! IQ performance fluctuates high and low! Sometimes it feels like the city is quite deep! Sometimes he looks like a pure novice!
The subject matter is very good, and the writing at the beginning is also good, but then it starts to become intellectually depressing. Why do you have to open that crappy milk tea shop? Are you short of money? Moreover, if you don't solve the problem quickly if you offend someone, why don't you just use some animals to solve the problem for the Xu family? Moreover, you got one billion for treating an overseas Chinese. If you pay less, let them settle the matter for you. The Xu family will be settled. The same goes for those four gangsters. Wouldn't it be over if you just kill them?
Where did this 8.5 Come from? I only saw episode 6 and couldn't stand it any longer. All kinds of poison and too many stupid points.
This book is a good idea, but the author can be more careful when writing the book. Take that otherworld song, you didn't even apply for copyright yourself, but you sold it to others, aren't you afraid of disputes?
The author will update soon
Very nice! Update it quickly, why aren't you updating it?
After reading some, I can see that the author's mentality is still very young.
Come on come on. The more you go out and read, the more stories you write will be more relevant to public values, and readers will naturally be able to relate to them. 😘
Studio article, purely disgusting
Whose parents would tell everything about their daughter, and what's worse, they would tell others about her private parts of the body the next day. It's disgusting.
A eunuch? Why hasn't it been updated? Isn't it good?
My IQ is not on the line. I have such a good start and end up playing like this. I keep pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger.
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Cool article, fulfill the traveler's last wish, and harvest otherworldly items*1



A modern tycoon wearing the skin of teleportation across time and space? The subject matter is good, the creativity is good, and the author's writing skills are good. It can be regarded as a little weed in the current book shortage period, but it can still be cultivated. This kind of subject matter can easily collapse if you are not careful, and the richest man in the universe will not be able to accommodate the protagonist. I hope the author will not fail to write, and must make it logical and self-consistent to form a closed loop, and it must be down-to-earth and close to reality.




OK, the system is relatively weak. Overall it's a good food. The plot is interesting and humorous, and it is a very good urban story. There are various time-travelers interspersed in the article, and there are various descriptions of human nature in relatively detailed ways. Although the description of love is slightly lacking, it is of a good level. And due to setting problems, its system power will be relatively weak. Overall, it is a book that will never fail. As long as the author is not too careful, he can keep reading until the end. In theory, there is no problem in writing 2 million words.














