Stay Till the End and Have Everything You Need!

After reading Chapter 28, I really shouldn't be coy. If I'm already being noticed, then I'll make trouble. If I'm not being noticed, I can still coy, or I can do something secretly. If I coy and coy, I really turn into a dog in the end, that won't look good. The author should change his thinking

What is the setting of this protagonist? Useless. There is no advantage at all. Just a piece of trash

In the world of martial arts, what is the significance of schools? I'll teach you how to cultivate for free, and I'll help you with your cultivation for free, and then you'll study for three years and walk away. What's the school picture?

Urge more, Urge more, Urge more, Urge more, Urge more

I really can't stand it, I'm just trying to get along and make trouble at the same time. Really speechless

Watching the anchor read novels is great. It feels pretty good for a ten-year-old bookworm. It's written with great feeling. Just a little bit of writing skills. I wrote it too quickly. The upper line is left a bit low. It's almost reaching the ceiling at this stage. Moreover, adding a little attribute points in the early stage is okay, but in the later stage, it is too high. The most important attribute points are a bit confusing. Not sure what level to add a little bit. For example, one point of formation makes the formation invincible. The writing is still great.

First of all, the description of the female character is very annoying. She hit the protagonist with her car, and then the protagonist asked her for 500. After she turned around, the protagonist did not say thank you to her. She felt that the protagonist was not good. I was really confused. She hit someone with the car. It is good that the protagonist did not blackmail her. This woman made me feel physically uncomfortable as soon as she appeared. The protagonist traveled to the past because the original owner was hit and killed by this woman's car. Then the protagonist wondered why he was hit and killed by the car, and then led to a group of people who did not want the girl to enter the school because she was very talented and did not want her to grow up. Then when she accidentally hit the protagonist with her car, she killed the protagonist. I wonder. S talent can grow even if she doesn't go to school. After all, the girl's family is also a powerful family, not a commoner, and she really doesn't want the girl to go to school. There are too many methods, but she chose this option with high risk of exposure, difficulty in operation, and high cost. How can she not hit someone while driving? Even if he didn't hit anyone, he still had a broken bone. The protagonist just walked away like a normal person. Wouldn't anyone be suspicious? The woman who hit you with the car should be suspicious, and the person who killed you should be suspicious. There is no doubt about the result. Isn't this obviously reduced? The last thing that disgusts me the most is that the option all allows the protagonist to get S-level talents by going to a certain place, but then they don't give it to them and they have to give it to the protagonist after completing one. It's better to write this option as a series of tasks, and just say that if you complete this task without saying anything, you can get S-level talents, and then you don't give it to you, and you have to complete another one to give it.

1. The basic elements of a normal person's IQ. 2. Are the attributes normal? 3. What about comparison? At the very least, you have to say what the average physique in this world is. Look, for example, if you say that he runs for 14 seconds and adds a little more, it becomes 13 seconds. Then you can make a comparison. The average speed of young people is about 14 seconds or more. It is easier to understand how much it will cost if you add a little more.

Doesn't it seem heroic to forcefully deliver the plot here without any investigation?

This novel is quite good, but it's not suitable for people to read.