
Wrong System, Pretending to Be an Immortal in the City
by Red Bean And Taro Ball Soufflé
About This Novel
[At the age of 100, you reached perfection in cultivation, but when you ascended, you were brutally suppressed by the seven major sects outside the world, and eventually died. ][Thousands of years later, you will reshape your body with a wisp of your remaining soul, and then take the path of cultivating immortality. You vow to take back everything that belongs to you! ][Mission "Start Over": Retrieve your first wooden sword! ] Lu Yuan looked at the flashing LED screen not far away and was stunned. Where did this system come from? Is this still a city? Let's not talk about Wanjian Pavilion for now. What are the seven major sects? Are you going to use the sword of the city to become an immortal in another world? "Stop talking, I don't have a wooden sword, but I just have a peach wood sword!" [Mission accomplished! ]"?" He has since embarked on a prosperous road! [Task: Learn the Nine Heavens Thunder Sword Technique] "Pigeon, do you have any extra Tesla coils?" [Task: Reestablish the Sect] "Uncle, I am really not an X cultist! We don't teach martial arts, it's all science!" "Ah, you ask me why I jumped from the seventh floor unscathed? Can a concealed weapon hit accurately from a hundred meters away?" "No, I am an UP master in the manual area, and I know how to do light kung fu and moves. I should be very good, right?" This book is also called "Cultivation of Immortality?" What cultivation? Believe in science! " "Urban Cultivation of Immortality: Take my chance to return to the clan" "After ten years of cultivating immortality, I finally ascended on a rocket! "I just started cultivating immortality in the city, and they came here?" >>
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Official(12)Scraped 21d ago
To tell a joke, the immortal power given by the system cannot improve one's physical condition, and it actually costs one's physical strength and life after using it once. Can be read as a joke
Now that I've been discovered, I won't act anymore~
The author is currently in kindergarten, but has no choice but to awaken to the literary system 30 years later. In order to become a top student, he stepped on the milk dragon and punched the small robot, and was eventually forced to perform as an entertainer and write books. But the rewards in this system are too sloppy, and all the classics given out have been distributed by predecessors. My ability is limited and I cannot cut out a copy of "Listening to the Fireworks at the Red Dust Inn Outside Qingming Mountain at Night", so I can only translate it manually... Regarding the widely circulated comments about middle school students writing books in the comment area, I would like to declare that they are purely fictional! [This author clearly did not graduate from elementary school...] [Don't praise me, I really think I'm at the middle school level~]
The creativity is okay, but the writing and rationality are a mess.
I originally thought there was another book on this subject, but it turned out that the more I read, the worse it became. The writing was too messy.
It's ugly, ugly and very boring.
Flaws do not cover up strengths.
I'll order them all! Although in the later period, due to the objective flaws of the invincible novel, I jumped to read it, with some small flaws in the details, but the overall logic is self-consistent, the plot is smooth, and the thoughts are sunny and positive, without forcing intelligence. It contains refreshing content that reflects and satirizes some bad phenomena in reality. The world view and background structure are also integrated and innovative, and there is novelty. The outline is also completed from beginning to end.
If cultivating immortals can't strengthen your body and increase your lifespan, then what kind of immortality can you practice?
Too much talk, too poor. No focus for half a day
How many female protagonists will we accept in the future? Are there more than twenty?
I would like to see if there are any recommendations for novels with a high concentration of urban two-dimensional elements. It's like comic convention or cosplay or something like that
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Official(12)Scraped 21d ago
To tell a joke, the immortal power given by the system cannot improve one's physical condition, and it actually costs one's physical strength and life after using it once. Can be read as a joke
Now that I've been discovered, I won't act anymore~
The author is currently in kindergarten, but has no choice but to awaken to the literary system 30 years later. In order to become a top student, he stepped on the milk dragon and punched the small robot, and was eventually forced to perform as an entertainer and write books. But the rewards in this system are too sloppy, and all the classics given out have been distributed by predecessors. My ability is limited and I cannot cut out a copy of "Listening to the Fireworks at the Red Dust Inn Outside Qingming Mountain at Night", so I can only translate it manually... Regarding the widely circulated comments about middle school students writing books in the comment area, I would like to declare that they are purely fictional! [This author clearly did not graduate from elementary school...] [Don't praise me, I really think I'm at the middle school level~]
The creativity is okay, but the writing and rationality are a mess.
I originally thought there was another book on this subject, but it turned out that the more I read, the worse it became. The writing was too messy.
It's ugly, ugly and very boring.
Flaws do not cover up strengths.
I'll order them all! Although in the later period, due to the objective flaws of the invincible novel, I jumped to read it, with some small flaws in the details, but the overall logic is self-consistent, the plot is smooth, and the thoughts are sunny and positive, without forcing intelligence. It contains refreshing content that reflects and satirizes some bad phenomena in reality. The world view and background structure are also integrated and innovative, and there is novelty. The outline is also completed from beginning to end.
If cultivating immortals can't strengthen your body and increase your lifespan, then what kind of immortality can you practice?
Too much talk, too poor. No focus for half a day
How many female protagonists will we accept in the future? Are there more than twenty?
I would like to see if there are any recommendations for novels with a high concentration of urban two-dimensional elements. It's like comic convention or cosplay or something like that













