Rebirth of Journey to the East

Can't stand it. Although the protagonist has a halo. But when you come out, you are a mortal and an immortal. Thousand-year demon. Start. Encountered the city guard. As cowardly as a grandson. I remember your home is a general's residence. You are the master, and then you imagine that you will be offering wine in the future. It feels like. It feels like my father is the commander of the military region, and when he encounters the police on the street at night, he will. I almost shouted for help. Really adults. Not an ignorant little brat

The writing is so rubbish, I am speechless. . . . ,,

This is too watery. A little water here, a little water there. Most of the chapters are watery. What the hell is this? Who is the protagonist? Zhao Donglai talks about it, the Eight Immortals talk about it, and the other gods talk about nearly a hundred chapters as soon as they appear. Every time a little demon appears, the protagonist changes. Wow, it's so difficult. What is it about? It has nothing to do with the title of the novel. Just change the name of the novel and call it Fairy Tales. This name is okay.

Does a thousand-year-old dragon have no spiritual consciousness? Why can't I even remember a person's appearance? There is also a fight between Jiaolong and Dongyang. This is just like a martial arts scene. You'd better stop writing about fairy tales. In the TV series, the Xianxia drama was made into a martial arts drama. That's not enough technology. As a novelist, how can you write a fairy tale into a martial arts world?

No, the author, I would like to ask Zhao Donglai if he is not a time traveler. I feel that he showed it when he was in Chang'an, but it didn't work out later. He also often watches mythological TV, etc. He should have seen this Journey to the East. How could it be so miserable later on? (Some personal thoughts)

The protagonist's role is too small, it's all the other supporting roles' business, so what's the point of having you as the protagonist?

According to the above, it can be judged that Journey to the West has been completed. Around Chapter 200, there was also a discussion about becoming a god. Taiyi Zhenren was Taiyi Jinxian when he became a god. During this period, Taiyi Zhenren was at least Daluo Jinxian. What's more, Taiyi was a character who existed at the time of the Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors. The protagonist was impatient to live. The protagonist was very cautious and rational in the early stage. When he got to the goat spirit, he took the initiative to sacrifice. It was so obvious that he would die without the demon pill. He was about to die, and he was sold to help count the money. Not only is my sanity gone, I'm also drifting away. The early and late stages are very contradictory, and I feel like I can't stand it anymore.

Lure the wolf into the house, unite with outsiders, and treat your own brothers. Equivalent to what we now commonly call a traitor

In my personal opinion, the author should not mention Singaporean TV dramas in the future, as it is easy to get lost in novels with a fairy-tale flavor.

After reading the first three chapters, they all say that the first three chapters are crucial to the quality of a book. The saying that there are three golden chapters is indeed true. Being born in 1987, I can hardly remember the plot of the TV series Journey to the East, but I still remember there was He Xiangu, and I liked her very much at that time. The author should write well.