Warhammer: Kratos the Father

I know that most readers are used to reading fanfics in which time travelers are the protagonists. The first fanfic I wrote also had a time traveler as the protagonist, but I didn't know the plot. I wrote the ending in one go based on my passion when I started the game, which ultimately changed the original plot. Later, I read a lot of fanfics from different places, including Japanese-oriented comprehensive comics, unlimited streaming of anime copies, upgrade stories in which the protagonist stepped on other characters to rise to the top, and original fanfics written for love by true fans of the original novels - these basically have no original protagonists, and they all change a certain plot point, similar to the Warhammer Apocrypha. I know which genre is more popular, but I can't bite the bullet and write a plot I don't like, especially when the time traveler uses the plot to take away the resources and halo of the original characters in advance. If you are a true fan of the original works, no one wants to see their favorite characters treated like this, so I will basically focus on the original characters in the future. Just by looking at my avatar, you can tell that my favorite character is Hei from Black Deeds. However, the stories I wrote with Hei as the protagonist are really cold, and combined with other popular elements, they are still cold. But when I am most obsessed with black characters, I can't write other types of protagonists, because I have to like a certain character very much to write for him. Currently, in addition to Hei, there is also Yang Wenli (I admit that I am a double black person). I wrote Warhammer because there are many characters to write about, not just the protagonist and his son. Also, the difference in thinking between men and women is different from that of Shuangdian. I can't write an original male protagonist novel that fully conforms to male psychology. However, I can't write a popular female-driven novel either, so I can only write fan fiction. At least I can still grasp the characters' personalities. I have a problem with my writing. I don't describe unnecessary plot details. Some things are like common sense to me, and I may not necessarily explain them all. Therefore, people who are familiar with the radio wave will enjoy reading it. You can also see relevant discussions and supplements in the paragraph comments, but people who lack the corresponding knowledge reserves will feel incomprehensible. I don't have the ability to do hydrography, so the plot points are relatively tight. If you insist on watching the back, you will understand why I wrote it like that. If you can persist, the second time you read it should be more enjoyable than the first time. Anyway, the feedback I received from readers before was like this. At first, I didn't know what I was writing, but If I can read the plot, I will read it later, and then I will go back and read it again, and I will start to refresh the world view. I am not saying that my writing is so in-depth that people can read it several times. I just want to say that if you don't understand one or two chapters, you can read a few more chapters. The feeling of seeing it yourself will definitely be more satisfying than if I explain it in vernacular. It's normal to not accept my style. I'm not good at catering to the public's tastes. I'm very happy when I can meet a small number of people with similar tastes and discuss the plot with each other. However, if you don't like it, don't criticize people who have different opinions from you. I can tolerate you leaving comments, but it doesn't mean you can bash other people. The Internet is not a place outside the law, and everyone respects it.

It's so painful, the story is good, but the author is still new and his writing skills are lacking, which is a pity. This book gave me the feeling of a novel written by a female porn star. The character interaction is a little stiff. For example, when Kratos and Little Crow first interacted, it felt like the Emperor and the people were just standing around, like a bunch of NPCs. If the Emperor had stopped Kratos in an attempt to talk to Kratos at the beginning, and Kratos had started a fight with Horus who felt he disrespected his father, but Horus was obviously unable to defeat him, and in the end the Little Golden Crow had appeared in time to stop his father, it would not have seemed like the Emperor and others were staking their claim. The subsequent transition is also unnatural, and it suddenly becomes "Guarding our little golden crow." It's understandable that they want to take advantage of it, but the transition is a bit poor. It feels like these people believe it after hearing an "alien"'s speech, and they also plan to "pet" Little Golden Crow. The Emperor and others are silly and sweet, and they believe whatever Little Golden Crow says. The story is quite interesting, but the writing is holding me back. I hope the author can work harder and practice more. This subject matter really attracts me.

Can this novel always be free?

Many people have talked about the issue of writing style. In order to prove that I listened to everyone's opinions, I made adjustments later, but not so quickly. After all, writing habits cannot be changed in a short time. People who don't like it must have quit long ago, but people who like it should also be able to see that I'm making progress, right? Now I'm worried about going too far and driving away the people I like, so if you see any problems, please tell me as soon as possible. Also, different planets have different styles, and I will try different writing methods in different stories. Can everyone understand?

Very well written. I rarely read Warhammer with this theme.