
Warhammer: When the Wolf King Adopted a Saiyan
by Free Time
About This Novel
Before Leman Russ met his father, the Emperor, a small eyeball-shaped spaceship landed on the planet Fenris. Ruth found a little boy with a tail inside. Because the boy had the same experience as himself, Ruth decided to adopt him. Many years later, this child was revered as the strongest warrior of mankind, the Order of Humanoid Extermination, and the Planet Annihilator. The xenos call him the God of Destruction, the Eldar call him the Human God of War, the Necrons call him the scourge of the galaxy, and Khorne vows to get him. Until one day, a dazzling golden light burst out from all over his body, making the entire universe tremble. The strongest warrior in the universe! Was born!
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Official(42)Scraped 23d ago
When I saw the protagonist calling out his name while using his skills, I came up with the idea of the protagonist standing in a funny pose and shouting out the name of his skills in the center of a battlefield where millions of people were fighting, with only the sound of gunfire and curses. Learn why the names of skills are called out in anime and comics. In anime and comics, it is to let the audience know what skills he is using. What is the main character doing? Is it possible that, like Curse, knowing the spell can increase the power? Moreover, some people say that I don't let the protagonist fight. Did I say I don't let the protagonist fight? Is it okay to distinguish between priorities? I just said that it feels awkward for the protagonist to call out the name of the skill. Did I say anything else? You took it out of context and it was obvious to you. I feel like the protagonist's IQ is worrying.
Just a good idea
But the plot and writing are too stretched and too watery. First of all, in this cesspit of Warhammer, you write a heroine who has a love story. What do you want to do? You should try to find a female channel as soon as possible and get a job. You use your own genes to clone a bunch of sons, you improve and cultivate people, you use your own energy to make power banks for others most of the day, and you waste so much time to strengthen the bodies of your subordinates. I thought you were here to be a nanny? You work as a nanny for others in 95 of the 100 chapters, so your word count doesn't have to be so disgusting, right? You can kill tens of thousands of people with just a raise of your hand. You go and be a father to support and make selfless sacrifices. You waste most of your time every day on this group of trash.
If you want a heroine, this is a failure. The Warhammer world is a cesspool and does not deserve a heroine.
The author has a good idea, but the writing style is too good
I spent nearly 12 yuan to read the latest chapter, so I should be able to evaluate it. The ideas are good, but the writing is poor. Many plots are too watery and do not highlight the grandeur of the Warhammer worldview at all. The Emperor and Primarch are also poorly portrayed. The power of the Saiyans is also too plainly described. Have you ever thought about describing the power of the protagonist from a small character? There is another point that makes me really want to complain. Some of the words are really too old-fashioned. It feels like reading online articles from ten years ago, which is so nostalgic. The plots of the current chapters could obviously be optimized and refined, and adding more chapters could enrich the plots and characters, but there is none, it's too plain.
The Emperor couldn't recognize the Saiyans? ? ? When the emperor sees the protagonist, he should be able to guess his origin instantly.
This book improves your strength very quickly, but the time span is too long.
Saiyans do not look at so-called talents and semi-ideal existences. In 15 years, if the transformation increased by dozens of times, then the combat power would be only a few W, and then after more than ten years, it would become a mimetic super. In other words, the basic combat power would increase by at least 60 times without training in more than ten years. If you didn't transform before, make a 1000 times gravity chamber and start training directly, every day Beat yourself to a serious disability and then go to the medical bay to regenerate blood. After more than ten years, you will have at least a few million combat power. Then the accumulated S-cells of more than ten years will easily become a Super Saiyan. After more than ten years to stabilize Super Three, you will become Super Three. You can just stop eating beef in Warhammer and let the four false gods give you children. Besides, the Super Sailor's mentality is strong enough and the basic combat power is sufficient. With the addition of S-cells, you don't need to be angry at all to become a normal Super Sailor. Only Super Three and GT's Super Four need to be angry, but Super Two can directly jump to Super Red. I don't know what the author is afraid of. He dares to seduce the protagonist's soul just like the King of Hell seduces the Great Sage. The main character transforms into a metamorphosis and explodes stars with super full power and then collapses. It's no different from 2w combat power. It's better to write that Vegeta has 1.8W combat power and explodes stars with one finger ray without any consumption. The performance of ordinary super games is already super stellar or even star system level. The performance of super two is based on the boss Broly and galaxy level.
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Official(42)Scraped 23d ago
When I saw the protagonist calling out his name while using his skills, I came up with the idea of the protagonist standing in a funny pose and shouting out the name of his skills in the center of a battlefield where millions of people were fighting, with only the sound of gunfire and curses. Learn why the names of skills are called out in anime and comics. In anime and comics, it is to let the audience know what skills he is using. What is the main character doing? Is it possible that, like Curse, knowing the spell can increase the power? Moreover, some people say that I don't let the protagonist fight. Did I say I don't let the protagonist fight? Is it okay to distinguish between priorities? I just said that it feels awkward for the protagonist to call out the name of the skill. Did I say anything else? You took it out of context and it was obvious to you. I feel like the protagonist's IQ is worrying.
Just a good idea
But the plot and writing are too stretched and too watery. First of all, in this cesspit of Warhammer, you write a heroine who has a love story. What do you want to do? You should try to find a female channel as soon as possible and get a job. You use your own genes to clone a bunch of sons, you improve and cultivate people, you use your own energy to make power banks for others most of the day, and you waste so much time to strengthen the bodies of your subordinates. I thought you were here to be a nanny? You work as a nanny for others in 95 of the 100 chapters, so your word count doesn't have to be so disgusting, right? You can kill tens of thousands of people with just a raise of your hand. You go and be a father to support and make selfless sacrifices. You waste most of your time every day on this group of trash.
If you want a heroine, this is a failure. The Warhammer world is a cesspool and does not deserve a heroine.
The author has a good idea, but the writing style is too good
I spent nearly 12 yuan to read the latest chapter, so I should be able to evaluate it. The ideas are good, but the writing is poor. Many plots are too watery and do not highlight the grandeur of the Warhammer worldview at all. The Emperor and Primarch are also poorly portrayed. The power of the Saiyans is also too plainly described. Have you ever thought about describing the power of the protagonist from a small character? There is another point that makes me really want to complain. Some of the words are really too old-fashioned. It feels like reading online articles from ten years ago, which is so nostalgic. The plots of the current chapters could obviously be optimized and refined, and adding more chapters could enrich the plots and characters, but there is none, it's too plain.
The Emperor couldn't recognize the Saiyans? ? ? When the emperor sees the protagonist, he should be able to guess his origin instantly.
This book improves your strength very quickly, but the time span is too long.
Saiyans do not look at so-called talents and semi-ideal existences. In 15 years, if the transformation increased by dozens of times, then the combat power would be only a few W, and then after more than ten years, it would become a mimetic super. In other words, the basic combat power would increase by at least 60 times without training in more than ten years. If you didn't transform before, make a 1000 times gravity chamber and start training directly, every day Beat yourself to a serious disability and then go to the medical bay to regenerate blood. After more than ten years, you will have at least a few million combat power. Then the accumulated S-cells of more than ten years will easily become a Super Saiyan. After more than ten years to stabilize Super Three, you will become Super Three. You can just stop eating beef in Warhammer and let the four false gods give you children. Besides, the Super Sailor's mentality is strong enough and the basic combat power is sufficient. With the addition of S-cells, you don't need to be angry at all to become a normal Super Sailor. Only Super Three and GT's Super Four need to be angry, but Super Two can directly jump to Super Red. I don't know what the author is afraid of. He dares to seduce the protagonist's soul just like the King of Hell seduces the Great Sage. The main character transforms into a metamorphosis and explodes stars with super full power and then collapses. It's no different from 2w combat power. It's better to write that Vegeta has 1.8W combat power and explodes stars with one finger ray without any consumption. The performance of ordinary super games is already super stellar or even star system level. The performance of super two is based on the boss Broly and galaxy level.
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How do you make The Lion King sound like a dick?
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How can it be genetically modified if energy is not universal?
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This idea is interesting. Warhammer combines Dragon Ball's Saiyans, games + anime. This is a cross-border fanfic, it reminds me of the popular book "Pirate Galen" a long time ago. Anyone who has played Warhammer and is familiar with Dragon Ball can take a look~




The protagonist travels to the Warhammer world as a Saiyan, travels to the Wolf Star at the beginning, and is adopted as an adopted son by the Wolf King. Later, with the arrival of the Emperor, he joins the Empire and participates in the Great Crusade of Mankind. Goldfinger: The Saiyan bloodline cooperates with the Emperor's transformation to directly become a Super Saiyan like Broly. It has now evolved to Super Level 4. In addition, there are cultivator seeds and spiritual tree seeds brought with the spaceship. Advantages: The Saiyan bloodline is used, and the plot development feels pretty good, including the emperor's emphasis on the protagonist, and the four evil gods' coveting of the protagonist, the strongest warrior in the universe, are reasonable, and the Saiyan feeling is inexplicably consistent with the background of Warhammer. Disadvantages: The middle and later stages are obviously not as interesting as the early stages. The author may have coded phonetic characters, and the writing style seems very colloquial and a bit white.













