Starting from Douluo Marrying the Ice and Snow Empress

I hope the author will change Ye Chen to a girl. I don't like sons very much. I hope the author will introduce the new characters in detail, otherwise it will feel like a bunch of geniuses will appear and it will feel a bit messy.

The author needs to be different. I have seen too many Douluo fandoms and I understand this. This is understandable. Readers say that the plot is messy, probably because the author has insufficient control over the article. What should be explained is not explained, and there is no foreshadowing. For example, the girl who was killed by the Holy Son, at least one foreshadowing, was written directly to death. Who can read this and be confused? As for the emotional scene, Qian Renxue may be an insignificant character in the author's mind, so when she was pregnant, it should have been a process of emotional changes in her heart, or a turning point (Qian Renxue only recognized her love for the protagonist after the protagonist disappeared, I think it would be better to write it when she was pregnant) ) at least requires a few more strokes, but was passed over by the author in two or three sentences. I have read Chapter 79 so far. To be honest, Tang Yuehua's emotional scenes are better than those written by the first three women. The focus is on Tang Yuehua, but Tang Yuehua is a character who develops feelings relatively quickly. We don't understand why... A few words of caution, as a maverick Douluo fan, except for the two ice and snow girls who have no sense of existence in the general setting, all other relationships are due to misunderstandings. This leads to the readers' desire to continue reading. Will there be a good result after the misunderstanding? At least like me, I want to see the result with Bibi Dong. The author may be writing a novel for the first time, and he is quite humble. So what if he is asking for help just to practice his writing? The motivation for writing a novel lies in its popularity, not in a few people. So what if you write about having children? The content is adult-oriented (one adult is not that adult). If you plan for the next book and can afford to pay for it, you can understand that the author will earn more. What's the problem with this? Who writes novels just to show everyone how to watch monkeys? It is not easy to create, so I should give the recommendation vote, because the setting of this Douluo is novel. If you first stick to your own style and combine it with the public's taste, it will get better and better.

First, the protagonist's soul beast transforms into a human being. A level 80 soul Douluo can see it if he looks closely. Titled Douluo can tell that it is a soul beast at a glance. However, the title Douluo of Poseidon Island did not see it, nor did he see that the Ice Emperor and Snow Emperor were a soul beast. Second, the protagonist transformed into 26 levels in one year, which is too fast and too fast. Sisi has seen someone who can practice faster than the protagonist. It's too fake. It should be said that it's impossible. Tang San has just joined Shrek and is only over level 20. If you say that using fairy medicine is better, you say that the protagonist cultivates by himself. Let's not talk about how high the protagonist's talent is. He can practice faster than the protagonist. What kind of talent is this? Third, the soul beast transformed into a human has only one martial soul, which is itself. The soul beast transforms into a human, and the martial soul is what it is. You directly create an extra extreme ice martial soul, and the soul beast transforms into a human, and all the soul rings are derived from it until the sixth or seventh ring. You also mutate the entire Ice Jade Emperor Scorpion martial soul, and the ultimate ice martial soul adds a soul ring. The mutated martial soul automatically adds a soul ring. It can be derived in the first place. What is the meaning of automatic addition? There are indeed a lot of flaws, and the setting is not rigorous at all. I have reason to suspect that you are just writing it for fun.

Will you, a soul beast, qualify for the divine examination? Is it possible that soul beasts can become gods by suppressing them everywhere in the God Realm? When you first read the introduction, you thought it was the key to being anti-god. Why would Bo Saisi not kill you if he knew you were a soul beast? Even if I don't kill you, I will keep you waiting for someone to advance to the Title Douluo level to kill you. Not to my taste bye

Damn it, 666, after chasing him for three thousand years, Ye Han is really determined, right? Anyone else would have given up long ago, but is this Snow Emperor so good-looking? Or is it that Ye Han likes it very much? Otherwise, why would I have been chasing him for three thousand years?

First let me ask, is this book really bad? Why did I get a 7.2 Rating with only 24 ratings? Then, if you guys have any suggestions for this book, such as traveling through the world and which heroines you want, you can leave a message on this page! Finally, the most important thing is, you don't have to love me, please don't hurt me. Dear brothers and sisters, please be merciful when giving ratings. After all, you are a new kid, so don't be so cruel! ! ! Thanks! Thanks! Thanks!

In fact, for me, this book is quite good. In fact, there are some brothers who may not understand it. I read two or three comments about this book. I started reading this book with more than 200 chapters, two pages a day. The things defined in the fanfic are different from the original work. Don't compare it with the original work. If you want to compare it with the original work, don't read the fanfic. Go directly to the original work and make up your own mind. I just saw a comment and I feel very angry about Bo Saixi and Snow Emperor. I feel like that comment was posted by someone without thinking, and you basically need to evaluate it after reading it, otherwise your evaluation will not be perfect, and you cannot be said to be wrong. There is also one person who said that it is difficult to level 26 soul power? Is it really difficult to rebuild a soul beast to level 26? Even if it is really difficult, the key point is that the definition of this novel is here, people are just 26, and the comments that are different from the original work will stop here. There may be many shortcomings, I rarely comment. Then say another thing. In fact, I haven't been reading QQ for very long. But I have been reading novels for two or three years, and then suddenly I wanted to join some groups. Then talk about voting and so on. I also know how to give monthly votes and likes. But I haven't learned much about this software. I just want to read and don't care about anything else. I still know the basic recharge system. To be honest, there were times when this book disappointed me. After all, I didn't like every aspect, but you get through the things you don't like, and you like most of them. So now that I've read it, I don't know if my review is right. But what I want to say is that at least I don't want to denigrate this novel. Not here to spray. The author or other readers feel that I have slandered it, and then what happens? Then you add it below, okay. If there is anything wrong, I will change it. After all, this is the first time I have said so much in this review. In fact, it's just a bunch of nonsense. My academic qualifications are limited. At 12:20, I said a few words and fell asleep. Actually, I think. If I were to read it from the beginning now, I would definitely not be able to finish it because it is a bit too much, and some people don't like reading it, so if I read it again, I would not be able to finish it. But now I like the author to update quickly. Why? That is to say, I want to know the plot below quickly, because I am looking forward to it, you know? I think about it every time I go to make an update. If I were asked to write it, could I write it? In fact, I sometimes want to be an author, but when I think of such a big story being connected in series, I feel that I don't have the literary talent to update novels. It's a wonderful thing, so I basically don't rush for updates, and I won't ask for anything. For example, if the writing here or there is not good, just change it. Because I know that will affect the author's thinking. The author has already thought about how to write it. If you suddenly say something, it will have some impact. Although some authors may say, it's okay. But okay I went to bed.

No. This book can still get a score of 6.6. This is too high, right?

This book is not a scumbag, it is a scumbag. He has amnesia and forcibly recruits girls. It is written about the blood of a giant dog. It is too brainless. This method of recruiting girls was popular in the past few years. Now it is really inappropriate. You are the author and we are the readers. You should write with a reader's mentality. Go and read your book. You cannot recruit girls without brains. If you are just shining for love and writing just for fun, then I can't say anything.

Why does a hundred-thousand-year-old soul beast change its shape? Is it because the calamity that follows is too terrifying and cannot be endured? But the Heavenly Tribulation is obviously not normal. The 900,000-year-old Golden-Eyed Black Dragon King Di Tian, ​​who has almost the combat power of a true god, still cannot withstand the 900,000-year-old Heavenly Tribulation. This shows that the Heavenly Tribulation at least has the power of a relatively strong third-level god. Is this in the river? O_o! This is unreasonable! If the pure-blooded true dragon Emperor Tian cannot become a god, then which spirit beast can become a god! This shows from the side that the heavenly tribulation is not a natural formation at all, but a method used by God to restrict the soul beast to become a god. Maybe he secretly used some super artifact to mark the soul beast's breakthrough, and once it breaks through, it will kill it with thunder.