Kai Dad in Xiongbing Company

Do you know why the heroine is Qilin (a typo)? Because she is a shooter🔫, and she also keeps promises😛

Let me first say that as far as Linglong World is concerned, it is a serious shortcoming (only my personal opinion). Since you are already unstoppable in Linglong World Lighthouse Then just grab the inner part of your protagonist's heart and give it to the city boss. Otherwise, don't write out that inner description. This is a very, very uncomfortable point. After watching it, I want to just keep it. Whenever I take a look at it, I will cut it and delete it. Secondly, since I am a police academy student, I should have the basic combat uniform skills! , It is recommended not to just write down the skills of Kai. After all, the protagonist is not an idiot who can only use skills. At one point, please make the protagonist's words and deeds consistent with his personality and his words and one mind. Instead of talking about conquering the world, thinking that he should be able to do so, the result is that the body is doing the most unpleasant thing for readers. It is similar to the so-called lamp. The rubbish rules of the tower can at least crush a few fleas and tell the city lord of the lighthouse that the strength of the king-level devouring beast cannot be compared with a few broken scraping guns. This is the part that makes the readers excited and easy to feel a sense of substitution, instead of making me feel unable to get out of it. I want to go in and replace the protagonist, and directly kill the group of light and shadow cultists. (The above is just my personal opinion, don't wash it or spray it. I don't have any dissatisfaction with the author. I just feel that the handling of the matter is not very appropriate in terms of Linglong's vision. My writing skills need to be strengthened. I hope the author will take a look at my small comments.｡◕‿◕｡)

The author could actually make Shuguang and Qinglong into branches. The evolution of Qinglong into Shuguang would offend people who like Qinglong a bit.

In the early stage, the protagonist is about to die and still wants to hide the truth. Protagonist: Hey, I won't summon the magic armor if I have it. Protagonist: I want me to summon the armor and kill the opponent in a second. If you don't want to be a bear, I will use it for decoration.

Isn't it true that Cai Wenji has hellfire? Could it be that the king I played was fake?

The protagonist is too much of a dog licker. It is obvious that he is bound to Kai, an aloof male god, but he is completely destroyed by the protagonist. . Bye

Does Cai Wenji really have hellfire? Why haven't I heard that hellfire doesn't come from monkeys?

After reading the first few chapters, I was thinking about how education is conducted in the police academy and how ideological education work is carried out?

The character abilities in Honor of Kings are best given to soldiers or some original new characters, and not wasted on the people in the Xiongbing Company. Their genetic abilities are already very powerful, and for example, Ge Xiaolun is too involved with the angels, and he is timid in the early stage. It would be better to give him to a purebred Chinese.

Tim Gou article: Kai, a cold male god, was written as Tim Gou.