
Preparing Idols to Slay Dragons Online
by Prosperity Comes To An End And There Is Nothing But Regret
About This Novel
In 2009, my life, which had been peaceful for eighteen years after time travel, became no longer peaceful. Why? Because I discovered that the world I traveled through was not the ordinary everyday world I imagined at first. This world... Had dragons!
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Official(50)Scraped 2d ago
I really don't recommend novels where the system has independent thinking.
No matter what novel you write, the independent thinking system is basically a failure. Your protagonist doesn't even know what it is, and then says, "I won't hurt you. You have to listen to me. How will I arrange the tasks? What will you do?" ? ? Finally, there is a battle between the system and the protagonist, or a battle between the protagonist in the background behind the system. It makes me laugh. Every time I read this kind of novel, I complain about it. It has no characteristics at all. A system is really low. You can give him an old grandfather, which is what Battle Breaks the Sky is like, or you can arrange a few points on his body or soul for him, and then just do the same thing as King Spare His Life, Lord of Nine Stars. The protagonist is directly an independent individual. This is not easy to write. Why add a system to act as a puppet? ? ?
This is the first time I've seen a Dragon Clan fan written like this. I think it's very well written. Come on.
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The system is too poisonous
In Chapter 17.18, I can still bargain with the system. I was also drunk. I obviously wrote very well before, but suddenly I started to become addicted.
There have always been ghosts in the Eight Snakes and Ki family, and it was mentioned in the original text that it was Tachibana Masamune who developed the ghosts to the point where they could barely compete with the main family after Masamune arrived in Japan, and the power of the Eight Snakes and Kis was stolen from Hakuo, and when they use Hakuo's power, they also have something similar to Hakuo's curse.
The character design of the protagonist could be better, overall it's pretty good
Personally, I think Yanling Time Zero is the most practical.
Very interesting, the subject matter is very novel
The author did not set the protagonist to be a student of Shilan Middle School like other Longtong authors, but a trainee of Johnny's. This is indeed eye-catching and novel. However, I think the portrayal of the protagonist's character should be more distinct and three-dimensional. It should not make people feel too vague and should have a specific image. For example, when Chu Zihang is mentioned, the first reaction is When I think of the cold-faced murderer, when it comes to Caesar, the stubborn and arrogant noble son is very clear, but the protagonist is a bit unclear. His position is vague. I hope the author can imagine the protagonist well and portray it in detail. Except for the protagonist's character, it feels a bit vague. There is really nothing wrong with this book. Whether it is an emotional scene or a fight scene, it does not seem stiff. Highly recommended! There is also the voice spirit of the protagonist. I think the word spirit of commandment is good, but its role becomes limited when facing ordinary people, or hybrids who rely on thermal weapons. I hope the author will add a word spirit such as Time Zero to the protagonist. In short, I highly recommend it, don't be a eunuch.
Does the author have no outline?
The details are not handled well, the writing is stiff and awkward, especially in Chapter 52-3, where three big mouthfuls of poison hit your throat.
It was okay at first
It was okay at first, but since I saw it and found out it was Dragon Clan, I questioned the system and forcefully sensationalized a few chapters. I couldn't stand it because it said it wasn't suitable. It was awkward to write sensational stuff because of my poor writing skills. My desire to read it was instantly shattered.
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Official(50)Scraped 2d ago
I really don't recommend novels where the system has independent thinking.
No matter what novel you write, the independent thinking system is basically a failure. Your protagonist doesn't even know what it is, and then says, "I won't hurt you. You have to listen to me. How will I arrange the tasks? What will you do?" ? ? Finally, there is a battle between the system and the protagonist, or a battle between the protagonist in the background behind the system. It makes me laugh. Every time I read this kind of novel, I complain about it. It has no characteristics at all. A system is really low. You can give him an old grandfather, which is what Battle Breaks the Sky is like, or you can arrange a few points on his body or soul for him, and then just do the same thing as King Spare His Life, Lord of Nine Stars. The protagonist is directly an independent individual. This is not easy to write. Why add a system to act as a puppet? ? ?
This is the first time I've seen a Dragon Clan fan written like this. I think it's very well written. Come on.
Update update update 😘 Update your recommended tickets every day Monthly tickets are no longer available this month
The system is too poisonous
In Chapter 17.18, I can still bargain with the system. I was also drunk. I obviously wrote very well before, but suddenly I started to become addicted.
There have always been ghosts in the Eight Snakes and Ki family, and it was mentioned in the original text that it was Tachibana Masamune who developed the ghosts to the point where they could barely compete with the main family after Masamune arrived in Japan, and the power of the Eight Snakes and Kis was stolen from Hakuo, and when they use Hakuo's power, they also have something similar to Hakuo's curse.
The character design of the protagonist could be better, overall it's pretty good
Personally, I think Yanling Time Zero is the most practical.
Very interesting, the subject matter is very novel
The author did not set the protagonist to be a student of Shilan Middle School like other Longtong authors, but a trainee of Johnny's. This is indeed eye-catching and novel. However, I think the portrayal of the protagonist's character should be more distinct and three-dimensional. It should not make people feel too vague and should have a specific image. For example, when Chu Zihang is mentioned, the first reaction is When I think of the cold-faced murderer, when it comes to Caesar, the stubborn and arrogant noble son is very clear, but the protagonist is a bit unclear. His position is vague. I hope the author can imagine the protagonist well and portray it in detail. Except for the protagonist's character, it feels a bit vague. There is really nothing wrong with this book. Whether it is an emotional scene or a fight scene, it does not seem stiff. Highly recommended! There is also the voice spirit of the protagonist. I think the word spirit of commandment is good, but its role becomes limited when facing ordinary people, or hybrids who rely on thermal weapons. I hope the author will add a word spirit such as Time Zero to the protagonist. In short, I highly recommend it, don't be a eunuch.
Does the author have no outline?
The details are not handled well, the writing is stiff and awkward, especially in Chapter 52-3, where three big mouthfuls of poison hit your throat.
It was okay at first
It was okay at first, but since I saw it and found out it was Dragon Clan, I questioned the system and forcefully sensationalized a few chapters. I couldn't stand it because it said it wasn't suitable. It was awkward to write sensational stuff because of my poor writing skills. My desire to read it was instantly shattered.












