Start as Feng Yuxiu

Although the author, your writing style is still a bit immature, but I really like this. I won't talk nonsense to you and just kill you. There may be a risk of this book being removed from the shelves later. After all, compared to other books, you have directly brought out violence and bloodshed. As long as it is not removed from the shelves, I will support you. (In addition, it feels a bit lacking and not satisfying. I just saw the climax and it was gone)

It's a good book. I felt that Feng Yuxiu was too nagging in the early stages. He kept deciding between high and low and life and death. Then he didn't kill anyone, and then he killed him later. It felt like eating a fly before a big meal. The most annoying thing is that it was just that in one day. Although it is not considered bad, it is a bit bland. Try to write as little as possible, with more small climaxes and a big climax as appropriate.

So speechless 😒, hundreds of people were killed, hundreds of people were seriously injured. The country has done nothing? Can it still be broadcast live? Don't say it's too late, the book says that you were notified one day in advance. Is the country in the book a waste? ? ? Just to promote the villain and make the country a fool? Later, the protagonist kills the villain to show the protagonist's power. How to do it like this?

It is a matter of life and death, but you are a matter of life and death. As long as you change the character, we can understand it without beating him to death. The country does not allow these things to appear, and we can understand it. You added two words at the beginning, different world, what problem can't be solved? It takes a long time to fight alone without dying. It's a matter of life and death. Brother, what you merged with is Feng Yuxiu's character.

How to say it? The GJ in this book feels corrupt to the extreme. People who commit murder and arson can be the boss, while the younger ones are equally rampant and have no one to control them. You are a rotten GJ who was humiliated and slapped in the face by other GJs and allowed those scum to continue to make a big show. You are not much different from the corrupt dynasties of ancient times. It's so exciting to watch!

Am I right! Carrots and cabbages all have their own preferences. Your subject matter is indeed good, but the writing is immature and only knows how to show off, and it is also very stiff. There is too much nonsense, and the world background settings are all set for the current thing. The next thing will overthrow the previous setting, and there is no pit, and there is probably no outline. I just write wherever I pretend to be. It is a temporary setting. To put it bluntly, I can't even say it is brainless and cool. You can read it if you are a book reader. I have only read half of it so far. It should be better later. Do you have to criticize you like this? Wouldn't it be fair to give you three stars? Is it wrong to say that your writing skills are not very good? ? ? So your writing is good? ? Are you forcing people to give you one star? Keep deleting and I will comment once a day

This is really a high-quality urban acting book. I hope the author can update more. At the same time, I also hope that the author can create a group. Have time to chat with the author. If the author was not busy, he could actually make a few more pictures.

The author is great, please update it soon, update it soon, I haven't read a good book for a long time, it is decisive and decisive, not so mother-in-law, the only shortcoming is that I am too slow to thank you, come on.

This is a good book, with a five-star rating and an installment plan.

For Invincible Shuangwen, it is considered qualified. Every fight, ahem, battle is victorious, so it can be said to be invincible. The downfall is the settings. Yeah, even though the settings were bad, I still passed the test. It's really because I feel good after winning. The relationship between the country and martial arts in the setting is too fake. The martial arts (secular martial arts) here feels like it can dominate the world, not to mention the three perverted killer organizations, one is weak at the beginning, but it feels more and more outrageous later on. And it is very cliche that there are very few first-rate players when they are second-level players. After the first-level players get to the first-level players, there are as many first-level players as dogs. Grandmasters begin to appear. After reaching the first-level players, everyone becomes a grandmaster. They become speechless and frantically fight monsters to upgrade, and the monsters that appear become more and more outrageous. Just like the Ten Thousand Sects, the Ten Thousand Sects branch on a mountaintop was swept away by the protagonist at the Grandmaster level. At that time, there were only one or two masters who could be regarded as Grandmasters. Then, they were able to overwhelm more than a hundred local sects and couldn't hold their heads up. When you think about it, the other sects are really rubbish. Who would have thought that one of the hundred sects would have several Grandmasters? ? ? What the hell kind of setting is this? ? ? . The background is even more incapable of complaining. I'm not a professional book reviewer, I'm very poor at writing, but it's good that everyone knows what I mean. No need for me to summarize, brothers 😘