The Douluo Continent Filled with Heroic Spirits
About This Novel
Wuhun Palace "Zhaixiu, who allowed you to look directly at me!" Although he is only a teenager, his temperament as a king has already been revealed. Star Luo Empire "From now on, I will be your dog, and I will tear apart all your enemies for you!" A red gun, with reversed cause and effect, pierces the enemy's heart Heaven Dou Empire "A true hero can kill with one glance!" The golden spear in the hand of the white-haired Son of the Sun burned with fire. Tiandou Empire Academy "The evil dragon has fallen, and the world is ushering in dusk!" The young dragon slayer slays the giant dragon and bathes in its blood. Shrek Academy "If a person is killed, he will die!" The red-haired boy wants to become a messenger of justice.
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Official(32)Scraped 20d ago
An exercise novel.
A novel that tries too hard to integrate various elements and is full of confusion. The characters with the same name and surname are still acceptable in comics and animations because the author can distinguish them by their voices, clothes and various characteristics. But when it appears in a novel, it's a disaster. The fusion of elements is not the more the better. The style must be taken care of and unified so that readers can read happily. It is actually good to use more than ten chapters to introduce the appearance and encounters of various heroic spirits. When it comes to the Emiya family and Illya, the style changes drastically, and it is not like the two novels at all. If the appearance of each heroic spirit is written down, and why the heroic spirit appears here, Xiao Xiao reveals the existence of the unknown mastermind behind the scenes. You can continue the battle started by the original Douluo characters because of the extra people.
You might add a protagonist and let them come from behind the scenes. Well, I think it will be a very good novel. The main reason is that what you are writing is too messy now. You need a protagonist to collect them and it will be more comfortable to read. Well, my suggestion is to restart it. The plot can remain the same, but you have to have a protagonist. Well, let them connect these heroic spirits together. Otherwise, you are too messy here and there, and you really don't know what you are writing? And there are two Emiyas here, which is a big poisonous point
I read seven or eight chapters, but I didn't understand what was being written.
I entered the moon not long ago and don't know much about heroic spirits. The author's writing in capital letters is quite good so far. Come on😹😹😹
Can Douluo withstand the powerful kick from his big sister with her Noble Phantasm fully activated and the spell amplified?
Don't you think no one has watched the Holy Grail War?
Emmmmm, the author doesn't think that no one has watched the Holy Grail War, right? Adding Douluo and the Holy Grail War together, the Heroic Spirits are of course detailed. That's because the plot of the Holy Grail War is copied from the original way. If some people find it confusing and illogical, just watch the Holy Grail War and you will know😐😐😐😐
It's so well written 🐮🐴
My evaluation is outrageous
The author describes the heroic spirits well and updates them quickly. Keep it up💪💪💪
The writing style needs to be improved, and what the hell is the plot of a heroic spirit Emiya and an ordinary Shirou. The author's own pleasure belongs to
The author has not followed me for two days. Is there something wrong? Still thinking of some better content?
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Community(0)
Official(32)Scraped 20d ago
An exercise novel.
A novel that tries too hard to integrate various elements and is full of confusion. The characters with the same name and surname are still acceptable in comics and animations because the author can distinguish them by their voices, clothes and various characteristics. But when it appears in a novel, it's a disaster. The fusion of elements is not the more the better. The style must be taken care of and unified so that readers can read happily. It is actually good to use more than ten chapters to introduce the appearance and encounters of various heroic spirits. When it comes to the Emiya family and Illya, the style changes drastically, and it is not like the two novels at all. If the appearance of each heroic spirit is written down, and why the heroic spirit appears here, Xiao Xiao reveals the existence of the unknown mastermind behind the scenes. You can continue the battle started by the original Douluo characters because of the extra people.
You might add a protagonist and let them come from behind the scenes. Well, I think it will be a very good novel. The main reason is that what you are writing is too messy now. You need a protagonist to collect them and it will be more comfortable to read. Well, my suggestion is to restart it. The plot can remain the same, but you have to have a protagonist. Well, let them connect these heroic spirits together. Otherwise, you are too messy here and there, and you really don't know what you are writing? And there are two Emiyas here, which is a big poisonous point
I read seven or eight chapters, but I didn't understand what was being written.
I entered the moon not long ago and don't know much about heroic spirits. The author's writing in capital letters is quite good so far. Come on😹😹😹
Can Douluo withstand the powerful kick from his big sister with her Noble Phantasm fully activated and the spell amplified?
Don't you think no one has watched the Holy Grail War?
Emmmmm, the author doesn't think that no one has watched the Holy Grail War, right? Adding Douluo and the Holy Grail War together, the Heroic Spirits are of course detailed. That's because the plot of the Holy Grail War is copied from the original way. If some people find it confusing and illogical, just watch the Holy Grail War and you will know😐😐😐😐
It's so well written 🐮🐴
My evaluation is outrageous
The author describes the heroic spirits well and updates them quickly. Keep it up💪💪💪
The writing style needs to be improved, and what the hell is the plot of a heroic spirit Emiya and an ordinary Shirou. The author's own pleasure belongs to
The author has not followed me for two days. Is there something wrong? Still thinking of some better content?
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