
Xing Yue, Joins the Lion King at the Beginning
by My Virginity
About This Novel
Thank you for the invitation. I just traveled through time and am now a member of the Crusaders. There is someone called the Lion King coming from outside. ------ Li Ye never thought that The Order of Destiny was not an imaginary world, but a documentary. Humanity is burned, the earth is turned into ashes, humanity is frozen-- The eight unique points that distort human history, the strange news born from differences-- The Mecha fleet descending on the Atlantic Ocean, the emperor who became the only real person, the star-eating monster sleeping in South America-- In an unknown corner, the Holy Grail War of the Moon and the Holy Grail War are quietly taking place.
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Official(60)Scraped 24d ago
The comment section was all five stars. I thought it was something, but this is what happened.
If the author has a female protagonist, can it be a single female protagonist in The Lion King?
It looks good at the beginning
Except for the very beginning, it has been going downhill. Although there have been signs of rising, it is indeed going downhill. The protagonist has been let off many times, and the villains Sieg and Zheng are not killed but they keep their bodies? Anyway, it's just a parallel world, and that chapter is ugly and watery. I also remember that the protagonist is a time traveler. What do you think of the Lion King after the protagonist has only been working for a few years? It's a bit like Tang San and Yu Xiaogang? You have always talked about King Arthur, and you want to be the last Knight of the Round Table, but you have not summoned any servants related to King Arthur in the Holy Grail War since then. If you ask me, it would be better to just let the protagonist kill randomly in other parallel worlds. After becoming a complete beast, it is not a problem for the protagonist to wander again. And this can be said to cover up some shortcomings.
It gets worse and worse from now on, the plot is a bit boring
Why have you stopped updating? Urging for more. Urging for more.
Nice looking, quick sketch
The protagonist's position is a bit abstract
I feel like there's something wrong with the writing. I'm not crazy about it. If you really want to be crazy, just give it to me.
It was fine at the beginning, but as I went on it became more and more boring. I felt like the protagonist was not making any progress. He was either dying or on the way to death. He was always playing off, no one could defeat him, and he was still the Riddler. After the protagonist was over, there was no use for him. It would be better not to write a plot about the protagonist.
In my hometown, we generally judge people like you as too lazy to burn snakes and eat them! ! ! As an author, do you know how difficult it is for your readers every day? ? ?
Update quickly, follow your outline and ideas, don't be upset, it's not easy to write a good Xingyue fanfic, and the most important thing is to update it quickly, if it's not enough, update it quickly.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(60)Scraped 24d ago
The comment section was all five stars. I thought it was something, but this is what happened.
If the author has a female protagonist, can it be a single female protagonist in The Lion King?
It looks good at the beginning
Except for the very beginning, it has been going downhill. Although there have been signs of rising, it is indeed going downhill. The protagonist has been let off many times, and the villains Sieg and Zheng are not killed but they keep their bodies? Anyway, it's just a parallel world, and that chapter is ugly and watery. I also remember that the protagonist is a time traveler. What do you think of the Lion King after the protagonist has only been working for a few years? It's a bit like Tang San and Yu Xiaogang? You have always talked about King Arthur, and you want to be the last Knight of the Round Table, but you have not summoned any servants related to King Arthur in the Holy Grail War since then. If you ask me, it would be better to just let the protagonist kill randomly in other parallel worlds. After becoming a complete beast, it is not a problem for the protagonist to wander again. And this can be said to cover up some shortcomings.
It gets worse and worse from now on, the plot is a bit boring
Why have you stopped updating? Urging for more. Urging for more.
Nice looking, quick sketch
The protagonist's position is a bit abstract
I feel like there's something wrong with the writing. I'm not crazy about it. If you really want to be crazy, just give it to me.
It was fine at the beginning, but as I went on it became more and more boring. I felt like the protagonist was not making any progress. He was either dying or on the way to death. He was always playing off, no one could defeat him, and he was still the Riddler. After the protagonist was over, there was no use for him. It would be better not to write a plot about the protagonist.
In my hometown, we generally judge people like you as too lazy to burn snakes and eat them! ! ! As an author, do you know how difficult it is for your readers every day? ? ?
Update quickly, follow your outline and ideas, don't be upset, it's not easy to write a good Xingyue fanfic, and the most important thing is to update it quickly, if it's not enough, update it quickly.













