Wood Bamboo

Give some comments to the author 1. The introduction is weird. I feel like the author didn't write it seriously at all, as if he wrote it for himself. At the very least, people must know that this is a martial arts novel for a game. 2. Paragraphs can actually be divided into more paragraphs. For example, this one in capital letters can actually be divided into three paragraphs. Otherwise, it will be quite uncomfortable to read. 3. There is no need to be so formal when writing background and worldview. If I hadn't found the background introduction in the first chapter that was similar to the background of Skeleton King, I wouldn't have been able to understand it. 4. There is no need to add "" to the name of the character. It is good to call NPC directly. It was good to write Skeleton King before, and it was divided into foreigners and locals, which almost confused me.