Lords of All Heavens

Are you kidding me? A quasi-immortal emperor couldn't even stop a group of immortal kings. He was blocked by dozens of emperor light immortal kings.

I don't know how to put it, it's like writing a composition, without any passion. From beginning to end, apart from attaining enlightenment and becoming an emperor, and living a few more lives, unfortunately I didn't take part in it at all. Then what are you doing by traveling across the sky? Do you think you are just a bystander playing your own game? Then I see how good the original work is, it's the same with and without you. The tragic death of the Holy Body, the ruthless people, and the void are all the same as in the original.

The poison has been tested. The strongest material of Zhetian is divine gold. You have also come up with several types that are stronger than divine gold. The divine gold of Zhetian world view is the strongest. In the ancient world of immortals, it is completely fairy gold. The upper limit of the Xuanhuang mother energy is the imperial weapon. Ye Fan also gathered nine kinds of divine gold and added the Heavenly Emperor realm to become an immortal weapon.

Works copied mechanically It feels like the author is a high school student and has packed all the high school politics into it

For a person with no background, it's good that he traveled to Kunlun and was not suppressed by the formation spirits. If he just casually comprehended it, he could realize that the ancient emperor's sutra pattern of Tianzun was overthinking. Cheating is not random cheating. You must at least find a master before you can embark on the path of cultivation. The protagonist Ye Fan came out of the ancient forbidden land and was qualified to open up the sea of ​​suffering. Then he was taken into Lingxu Cave and was taught by the elders and piled on with a lot of resources. You are a time-traveler who knows nothing, but you can comprehend the Tianzun scriptures just by enlightening you. I would like to ask you, are the Tianzun scriptures so cheap?

Would a Sendai dare to take the Hangu Pass road? Can Xian Er see the Great Emperor overcome the tribulation? The great emperors are always on the edge of the universe when they go through tribulations. You, the great emperor, are serious about going through tribulations on the Ziwei star. When the thunder comes, are you afraid that the Ziwei star will be gone?

Just writing nonsense, a giant Immortal King fought a mortal Immortal and fought fiercely. He said that it was almost the same as a fierce fight with the Supreme Immortal King. In Immortal Ancient, he treated the Spirit King with respect like a junior. Do you understand that the strong ones in the spiritual world are respected?

Although I didn't watch it, I will spray it with the big army.

It's purely nonsense. I suspect it was written using AI or some other intelligent writing software. It's full of nonsense and you don't understand Zhetian at all. If you want to write a fanfic, you should at least read the original work! The setting should also respect the original work a little bit! A saint can defeat a great saint, that's fucking bullshit

In fact, this story line is quite good, but you have written it as a dead book, just like a beautiful flower that blooms, without color, it is also an ordinary flower. If a book has no embellishment, your book is useless. A book without passers-by is not a book.