
Cultivation in a Desert Oasis Was Exposed by the Archaeological Team
by Stormy Deer
About This Novel
Immortal cultivator Ye Lin left his body when his Nascent Soul was about to die, accidentally traveled through the Blue Star Dragon Kingdom, bound to the [Sign-in System], and opened an oasis inn in the desert. In the past few years, he has saved countless people and signed treasures. During a special rescue, they met an archaeological team looking for the ancient country of Loulan. Because he didn't like the repeated confessions of a certain rich lady, he embarked on a journey to find the ruins of the ancient Blue Star Immortal, setting foot in deserts, mountains, rivers and even the sea of stars.
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Do you think it would be popular without a heroine?
Without a heroine, do you think it would be popular? If it's a war article or an e-sports article, I think it's okay. But this depends on your writing. Now I find that new people and new readers are very disgusted. Thinking about death
Do you always write about women to disgust people?
Did the author want to make a twist?
Quick update, can't sleep at night
It's so beautiful. I've never seen such a beautiful book.
The world view is unclear,
Looking at it, I can't tell whether it's in a desert or a city. Shouldn't the area around the territory have been raided long ago? Why are there still mines?
It's not good-looking, it's a short story, the characters are too rigid, the relationships between the characters are illogical, and it's hard to read.
Writing about this woman is a failure, she is too long-winded, she doesn't take the protagonist seriously when she speaks, she doesn't talk about pig's feet, and her temper is gone.
When you write, don't include such disgusting girls who are stalking, unreasonable and annoying. Wouldn't it be smoother?
Why do I feel like the writing in this book is so bad?
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Community(0)
Official(9)Scraped 2mo ago
Do you think it would be popular without a heroine?
Without a heroine, do you think it would be popular? If it's a war article or an e-sports article, I think it's okay. But this depends on your writing. Now I find that new people and new readers are very disgusted. Thinking about death
Do you always write about women to disgust people?
Did the author want to make a twist?
Quick update, can't sleep at night
It's so beautiful. I've never seen such a beautiful book.
The world view is unclear,
Looking at it, I can't tell whether it's in a desert or a city. Shouldn't the area around the territory have been raided long ago? Why are there still mines?
It's not good-looking, it's a short story, the characters are too rigid, the relationships between the characters are illogical, and it's hard to read.
Writing about this woman is a failure, she is too long-winded, she doesn't take the protagonist seriously when she speaks, she doesn't talk about pig's feet, and her temper is gone.
When you write, don't include such disgusting girls who are stalking, unreasonable and annoying. Wouldn't it be smoother?
Why do I feel like the writing in this book is so bad?










