Jiejiao Duobao, Swallowing Pangu Chalcedony at the Beginning

Very well written Mainly because I haven't seen enough, I hope there will be more updates

There are a lot of typos. There are typos in every picture.

Didn't Hongmeng Ziqi and the recruitment of disciples happen in the third lecture?

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the rawness of the writing will be complained about. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

Isn't chalcedony an ownerless thing? Why did the ancestral witch come to find the hind legs just after the front legs were eaten?

Personal perception: more in line with my personal taste Don't make too many typos, come on

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Too many typos and name errors

Very well written. I haven't read enough. Please update a lot.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, Feifei is very good-looking