Covering the Sky: Tao Begins in Ancient Times

Very well written. Let me ask a question, what is the upper limit of the protagonist? Is it above the level of sacrifice?

Author, you have made the protagonist suffer three times. Ordinary people can do it once or twice, but this is the third time for you, and you still don't let the protagonist realize the truth. The Great Way of Emperor Buddha is not that strong either. It's not like the protagonist failed to succeed in the right way three times. This last time must be successful, otherwise it would be boring to watch. Even the immortals appear in the protagonist's catastrophe. It doesn't allow the protagonist to take the right path. Also, have you decided who to write as the heroine in the back? Never write about the Western Emperor and the Ruthless Emperor. There are still many great emperors who have not appeared in the future, and one of them must be the female great emperor who has attained enlightenment. Or maybe it would be okay to write a female Holy Spirit as the heroine. It would also be fine to write a female five-color fairy golden holy spirit for the protagonist. Also, the protagonist's dojo will receive some money from the back, and will it contain some allies? Or cultivate some alternative enlightened persons yourself. Invite some destined people into your dojo. I hope the protagonist can let his children take part in some plots later. Experience it in Ye Fan's era. By the time of Ye Fan, the protagonist will almost be able to live to his 6th or 7th life. Come on, author, write well and try to get signed as soon as possible. Try to update more after signing the contract. 10,000 To 20,000 words updated a day is not too little. I hope your book can be written with several million words. Write about the finale of Holy Ruins. You can also write about the perfect world, where the protagonist crosses the river of time and goes upstream to get to the perfect world. The protagonist can study the laws of time and space in the later stage

An SB article. The first few chapters were so embarrassing and disgusting.

What the hell, members can't see it yet. And you're asking for money. How many pictures do you only have if you haven't seen it?

The stupid pig in the first few chapters can still score so high at the beginning, invincible brothers

After surviving the tribulation of attaining enlightenment, you were besieged by the Supreme Being, devouring your flesh and blood, and injuring your origin. In ten years, you have returned to your peak. You are better than the void. He was killed all over the house, came to the door to argue, was almost beaten to death with three punches, and still had to be a dog, like hundreds of thousands of people, waiting to save people from Ye Fan. It's so poisonous, the first two chapters can be so poisonous.

This is my first time criticizing a novel, and your writing is really not that good.

I'm really speechless. Why doesn't the author stop updating it at all?

You can't escape the bad customs of accepting a disciple for no reason. You will give all good things to your disciples. Will all the disciples become emperors in the end? What do you think the emperor is? Are you still making excuses that you can't let the protagonist do it himself? Can the efficiency of the emperor and the people under the emperor be the same? What it takes others ten thousand years to do, the Emperor can do for you in one year, and doing it is not considered a human experience. Do you plan to have the protagonist stay in seclusion and never go out to see the world? How is it possible to transform?

Update quickly, the number of chapters is too few, don't stop updating, just vote monthly if you come back and continue writing.