Cultivation of Immortality: Start by Sending Longevity Locks on Death Row
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[1 year lifespan, pig-killing knife technique, basic knife technique experience, evil spirit +3, natural divine power +1] [10 years lifespan, Catkin Sui Feng Shenfa · Proficient, basic footwork · small success, Kung Fu and martial arts experience, breath concentration +5, poison identification · proficiency] [15 Years of life, horizontal iron cloth shirt, fourth level, martial arts and martial arts experience, evil spirit +4, physical fitness +2]... When Zhang Bufan saw the content displayed on the longevity lock he made, he knew that he would be on the road to find his soul in the future and never return. From death row to the world of immortality. From humans to monsters. Ordinary souls, evil souls, main souls in the Ten Thousand Soul Banner, ghost cultivators... Zhang Bufan suddenly discovered that the evil cultivators in the world of immortality who tried their best to strangle, and the ghost cultivators who avoided them like snakes and scorpions, seemed to be weaker than ordinary immortal cultivators in front of him? ... "Are you a human or a ghost?" "A ghost?" "Then why are you so arrogant in front of me?" ... [Gou Dao Immortality] + [Attribute Panel] + [Mortal Cultivation of Immortality]
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Official(1)Scraped 1d ago
The rest of the writing is okay, but the rhythm of the plot is not good enough. Even if I understand that there is nothing wrong with the plot arrangement, it still makes people feel like they are deliberately suppressing the protagonist's golden finger upgrade! The problem mainly lies in the plot arrangement and the personality conflict of the protagonist. If it were written at the beginning that the protagonist has a relatively benevolent personality and is unwilling to take the initiative to kill people and take souls, it would make sense. However, the protagonist written by the author often fishes deliberately, and is obviously willing to take the initiative to obtain souls. As long as he kills someone in the early stage of Qi training, he can immediately upgrade to the Qi training stage. However, he passively went through a Qi training stage in just a year, and was ambushed when he went to collect souls without benefiting from it. This seems to be a deliberate attempt to suppress the level. This kind of plot should not be used during the protagonist's first fishing and Qi training period. If the evil qi-training cultivator encountered in the latest plot fails to win in the end, readers' expectations will definitely be greatly reduced!
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Official(1)Scraped 1d ago
The rest of the writing is okay, but the rhythm of the plot is not good enough. Even if I understand that there is nothing wrong with the plot arrangement, it still makes people feel like they are deliberately suppressing the protagonist's golden finger upgrade! The problem mainly lies in the plot arrangement and the personality conflict of the protagonist. If it were written at the beginning that the protagonist has a relatively benevolent personality and is unwilling to take the initiative to kill people and take souls, it would make sense. However, the protagonist written by the author often fishes deliberately, and is obviously willing to take the initiative to obtain souls. As long as he kills someone in the early stage of Qi training, he can immediately upgrade to the Qi training stage. However, he passively went through a Qi training stage in just a year, and was ambushed when he went to collect souls without benefiting from it. This seems to be a deliberate attempt to suppress the level. This kind of plot should not be used during the protagonist's first fishing and Qi training period. If the evil qi-training cultivator encountered in the latest plot fails to win in the end, readers' expectations will definitely be greatly reduced!
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