I Have Traveled Through Time and Come Back Again

Fate dictated that I browse through the recommended books, and the two I browsed were written by him.

I have only written more than 50 books so far, and there are only two reviews. Give up. The author's book is terrible. I'm not trying to be mean, but I just want to advise the author not to waste time writing. Your grades are basically terrible.

I would rate it as average. I have watched 20 pictures. The plot progress is relatively slow and the two worlds are back and forth. It is too casual. The first two sentences are still on the earth, and the next few sentences return to the martial arts world. There is no process and it looks a bit awkward.

Write an outline well, and read what you have written before each update. When you have time, always look at the content before you update. Read the updated content yourself first. Put yourself in the position of finding faults and read it twice more. If you find loopholes, typos, writing style, character design, etc., Make timely changes. , There are some things you don't understand, such as the protagonist's career or life that you have never had any experience with. You can either look up the information on Baidu or go and observe carefully by yourself. First try writing some short articles or essays. If you write more, even if you are not a great master, you will make progress. Come on!

Generally speaking, the content and subject matter are good, and I probably know the meaning, but it doesn't feel smooth, it looks a bit awkward, and the main character is a bit wandering. He even talks about time travel when walking, and tells his brothers and girlfriends about martial arts. Even his parents don't know about it. Also, since you can travel through time every day, I don't know whether it's soul time travel or flesh time travel, why did you start all over again after studying in a different world for 16 years when you returned to modern times?

After reading the full text, it looks good at first glance. But there are too many redundant plots in it! For example, the Qingcheng Gate, the imperial court, and all aspects of the characters and plots can be completely omitted, just mention them. Now that it is written in such detail, it seems like another book. To grasp the plot of a novel, one must either write it from the perspective of the protagonist, or write it with multiple protagonists and multiple aspects. Although the author has this ambition, it's a pity that his writing skills are not good enough and he looks unhappy.

I looked at a few, it was a waste of my time

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This book has too many characters, the story develops too slowly, and there are no interesting features. The story is a good story, and the writing style is better than the many novice novels nowadays that cannot even describe the characters clearly. The author must first write some interesting features before writing a book, otherwise no one will read it.

How should I put it? It's pretty good, but it's developed too slowly. After writing more than 30 chapters, it's still a small existence. In the main world, it has no sense of existence like the others.