The Beginning of Douluo Begins with Qian Xunji
About This Novel
The new book sets sail "The Harmful Douluo, who was killed in the Conferred Gods Battlefield at the beginning" Recommended book: Douluo falls in love with Qian Renxue at first sight. The soul travels to another world, vigorously develops magic tools, and forms the Sun and Moon Empire. Each thing is either causing obstacles for Tang San, or it is going further and further on the road to causing obstacles. Xiao Wu pointed at Yang Zizheng: "It's him, it's him. He's the devil!" Yang Zizheng: "Oh, you are a rabbit spirit beast, where is the other one? Tang San: "Our Tang Sect will definitely prosper! " Within a few years, two or three cats and kittens in the entire Tang Sect were all using magic weapons, and no one cared about the hidden weapons of the Tang Sect! Tang San: "The Sun and Moon Empire must be renamed the Tiandou Empire! " A few years later, a group of people rushed into the palace and shouted: "Kill the Demon Queen, kill Orange, and restore the Sun and Moon Empire. Everyone is responsible!" " This book is also called the prequel of Douluo, and it is also called "I am fixing the pits of Douluo". Some people joked that people in Douluo are cultivating immortals, slashing Qian Daoliu with swords, stepping on Tang Shang, saying I miss you to A Yin, watching Bibi Dong bring medicine to Qian Xunji, and saying: "Dalang, it's time to take medicine!" " How did Bibi Dong kill Qian Xunji, why Qian Daoliu didn't avenge his son, why Bibi Dong wanted to destroy the Blue Lightning Tyrannosaurus Rex family, why the Sun and Moon Empire was so powerful ten thousand years later, and why Tang San's path to becoming a god was so easy, all will be deciphered here. Five secrets: "I have a sword that can break the sky! " "I have a sword that can kill gods! " "I have a sword to kill all enemies! " "I have a sword to see good and evil! " "Refreshing Ice Sword! " The introduction is short and weak, please read the text!
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Official(33)Scraped 10d ago
Driving is very stable, belongs to an experienced driver
The driving is very stable, I belong to an experienced driver, I hope it can be maintained forever, I will always pay attention to it, some places are described delicately, some places are vaguely described, and some places need to be savored carefully to understand. For example, a little red lip and cheek print will make you feel refreshed by the fragrant breeze. This sentence describes a woman who smells a man's fragrance. What is the author's consideration in writing this way? Fortunately, I know an allusion before I know it. Otherwise, I would not know what it means. Not everyone knows such an allusion v. Thousands of people have tasted a little red lip, how can it match me, the number one scholar!
Well enough
I haven't seen such a bad book in many years. Your book ranks among the top 10 bad books I have read.
Will the comments be deleted?
Keep deleting it, what kind of author is this? You can't let others comment if you don't write well.
The story is compact and logical,
I have been reading novels for seven or eight years. I have read many fan novels. This is the first time I have seen the author write in this way. When I read it carefully, my eyes lit up. It was really surprising. Many fans only have two or three chapters for a simple fight, but this book does not. It focuses on the story structure, just like reading a story, one small story after another, and then these small stories are combined into a whole, showing a strong story framing ability. Finally, let me talk about the overall feeling. There is a long-lost ancient dragon style. Through various signs, it can be seen that the author is also a good drinker, and his ideas are unconstrained and unconstrained. Here is a small suggestion to the author. Although it is a fan fiction, it can also appropriately describe its own world.
The author and the readers seem to suggest that the male protagonist should follow Hai Bodong's path to pretend to be cool and slap the goddess in the face.
The author, the reader seems to suggest, let the male protagonist go later, Hai Bodong's road, pretending to slap the face of the goddess, Hai Bodong's unique skills, fighting skills, Xuan Ice Shield, and fighting spirit into wings, which are also useful, condensed cold air, a square sky painted halberd, and Hai Futong's move in the desert with Xiao Yan, Xuan Ice Spin Kill, and a classic trick, refreshing, the ice dragon came out, the crew cried bitterly, Xuan Bing Long Xiang
Mature?
God, you have been exposed to strong winds since you were a child. You have seen Zhi Neng, right? Didn't you read the information when you were 8 years old? , Fairy hands... I feel like I haven't seen the world, it's too lame
joint
Author, would you like to ask if the two of them are going to join forces to kill Qian Xunji? The heroine is Bibi Dong?
It's so beautiful, but there are so many. Come on, author.
Such a person can also write a novel. I feel that if I were to write it, I would be better than him. I can't stand it in the early stage, but it will make no sense at the end. It's not as good as a composition written by a primary school student.
I always offer sacrifices, can you give me a beating?
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Official(33)Scraped 10d ago
Driving is very stable, belongs to an experienced driver
The driving is very stable, I belong to an experienced driver, I hope it can be maintained forever, I will always pay attention to it, some places are described delicately, some places are vaguely described, and some places need to be savored carefully to understand. For example, a little red lip and cheek print will make you feel refreshed by the fragrant breeze. This sentence describes a woman who smells a man's fragrance. What is the author's consideration in writing this way? Fortunately, I know an allusion before I know it. Otherwise, I would not know what it means. Not everyone knows such an allusion v. Thousands of people have tasted a little red lip, how can it match me, the number one scholar!
Well enough
I haven't seen such a bad book in many years. Your book ranks among the top 10 bad books I have read.
Will the comments be deleted?
Keep deleting it, what kind of author is this? You can't let others comment if you don't write well.
The story is compact and logical,
I have been reading novels for seven or eight years. I have read many fan novels. This is the first time I have seen the author write in this way. When I read it carefully, my eyes lit up. It was really surprising. Many fans only have two or three chapters for a simple fight, but this book does not. It focuses on the story structure, just like reading a story, one small story after another, and then these small stories are combined into a whole, showing a strong story framing ability. Finally, let me talk about the overall feeling. There is a long-lost ancient dragon style. Through various signs, it can be seen that the author is also a good drinker, and his ideas are unconstrained and unconstrained. Here is a small suggestion to the author. Although it is a fan fiction, it can also appropriately describe its own world.
The author and the readers seem to suggest that the male protagonist should follow Hai Bodong's path to pretend to be cool and slap the goddess in the face.
The author, the reader seems to suggest, let the male protagonist go later, Hai Bodong's road, pretending to slap the face of the goddess, Hai Bodong's unique skills, fighting skills, Xuan Ice Shield, and fighting spirit into wings, which are also useful, condensed cold air, a square sky painted halberd, and Hai Futong's move in the desert with Xiao Yan, Xuan Ice Spin Kill, and a classic trick, refreshing, the ice dragon came out, the crew cried bitterly, Xuan Bing Long Xiang
Mature?
God, you have been exposed to strong winds since you were a child. You have seen Zhi Neng, right? Didn't you read the information when you were 8 years old? , Fairy hands... I feel like I haven't seen the world, it's too lame
joint
Author, would you like to ask if the two of them are going to join forces to kill Qian Xunji? The heroine is Bibi Dong?
It's so beautiful, but there are so many. Come on, author.
Such a person can also write a novel. I feel that if I were to write it, I would be better than him. I can't stand it in the early stage, but it will make no sense at the end. It's not as good as a composition written by a primary school student.
I always offer sacrifices, can you give me a beating?
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