Under One Person: I Can Turn the Magnetic Field!

The protagonist is portrayed as too greedy, curious about everything, and wants to learn everything. His behavior is also inconsistent. The first time he went to Jishi Hall, others asked him to teach him, but he said he didn't want to learn. Then the second time he went there, he actively wanted to learn. He didn't have much strength and kept going to Quanxing. Quanxing ignored the advice of the Ghost Hand King and insisted on going to the party. Tsk.

I passed one trick in the preliminary round, and the rest were just audience conversations. They were always so cool, and everyone said one thing. This is not how the group portraits were done. There are more than one saying that a certain genius will not lose to the protagonist. While talking about monsters, he also said that he can fight a dozen of them. He has killed several of the older generations, and even said they are comparable to the older generations. During the fight between life and death, the supporting character said, "It's so interesting. I want to make friends with him, but he still does it every time. It's very embarrassing."

This book has been piling up skills for the protagonist, and the timeline is basically the same. The development of the plot cannot only rely on learning skills, 60 It's been many chapters and I'm still learning. What the reader wants to read is the story of the protagonist pretending to be cool after learning the skills. Are you preparing the protagonist to learn all the alien skills and grow up? Hundreds of meals are not eaten in one go. Skills need to be learned as the plot progresses, which will be discussed later. I really can't bear to pile up skills like this without following the plot flow. A lot of skills you have learned can be broken by just one god spirit, not to mention there is a source of Qi body. Anyway, you should write the plot well in the future and push forward the timeline. The protagonist has learned too many skills at this age.

The plot is so slow, more than 200 chapters in, the Lu family's birthday has not come yet, and the protagonist is still a child...

I know how to play tricks all day long and treat others as fools. If it weren't for the rotation of the magnetic field, I wouldn't have clicked in.

The first three chapters! ! ! I want to learn to reverse the eight directions. I want to learn to reverse the eight directions. I will learn to reverse the eight directions even if I try hard to get. If I don't learn, it will be useless to learn to reverse the eight directions! The first three chapters are basically what these sentences mean. Real ** ink marks

I won't go into the general principle. The writing is pretty good, but there is one shortcoming. I know that the author's cheats for the protagonist are generally the kind of cheats that have excellent qualifications and can learn everything quickly. This is not very good. But the most important thing for a person is to cultivate both life and life. The protagonist is indeed on the road to dual cultivation of life and life, but to be honest, I personally feel that the protagonist is on the right path before learning the first level of reverse Bafang, Bajiquan, and reverse life, but after that, he loses all his nature. If other people use other people's methods, then the protagonist has already deviated from the right path and has to learn whatever he sees. Author, the heart of the protagonist you have portrayed is too fast. If the author is really a fan of one person, then he should seriously understand what is the true dual cultivation of life. There's nothing wrong with the protagonist's character of wanting to learn whatever he sees, but you should at least practice your own basics well before you go on to practice other things.

The author must not cheat too much. Later, you can learn to fight step by step, a low-end version of the Liuku Immortal Thief.

It's too slow, why bother writing about your dam? . . . Ha ha ha ha

The plot is okay, but it's too watery. The same sentence from a group of people can make a whole chapter. This is not a group portrait, everyone has a role.