Marvel: the Beginning Awakens the Small Universe

You have been writing American comics, what have you written? 🌶🌶🌶🌶🌶🌶 Giving one star does not mean that this book is unreadable, but that this author has written so many books, and this is it? That's it? After the protagonist awakens to the small universe, it expands very much. He looks down upon this and this. What the hell are you entering into the Marvel worldview? Just one American team, whether it's comics or movies, their heroic halo will torture you. You don't even have a Saint Cloth to pretend to be a Saint. Forcibly demoralizing Gwen, I don't know how Gwen fell in love with this protagonist. I didn't understand it at all. Then he wrote the plot of The Amazing Spider-Man and used the first-generation Spider-Man as a spider. It was very funny. It was said that the protagonist had no relatives and no connections, and suddenly a sister appeared. Then he said that this sister died in the aftermath of the battle between the Hulk and the Abomination. The protagonist wants revenge... Shouting, revenge, I will give up here. Oh, the protagonist awakens just in time for the Avengers to fight for the first time, and the fight between the protagonist and the soldier almost disgusts me to death. I don't understand how an alien soldier can get so many lines that are mentally retarded. Also, when the lizard man comes out of the cesspit, a passerby from the school next to him shouts, Mom, I don't want to go to school anymore.... X, I have come across several mentally retarded novels with this kind of plot. How can a passerby make so many retarded remarks? When a normal person encounters them, he either freezes or runs and shouts. It is a biological instinct to fear the big brother. What's more, all kinds of retarded remarks will come out and he is drunk. You have written so many books, can you not write so retarded, can you make some progress? If you want to follow the plot of the movie, it is best to think about the character transformation and logic of other people's movies. As for comics, I guess you haven't read a few books. The Marvel world view is not a cool text, it is very dark, there are too many kinds of bts, and the abilities are all kinds of weird. When writing about Marvel, you always want to pretend to be invincible, so there is no need to write about Marvel fans. This setting is basically third-rate.

The protagonist wants a woman, but doesn't want to take the initiative himself, like a bitch! So I arranged for Gwen to be like a ghost behind the scenes, appearing next to the protagonist all the time, and licking her in reverse. The writing was really disgusting.

The more I write, the more I come back. I keep calling you Eunuch Mi because your previous books were good at least at the beginning, but you always wrote eunuchs in the later ones. What about now? There were a lot of bad points at the beginning, especially the emotional line. What the writing was like, it was not as good as before. Gwen seemed to have been deceived. She fell in love with the protagonist out of nowhere, and there was no emotional development at all. There is also the main storyline, which is inexplicable and the plot advancement is also very strong. Have you sold your account? Why is the writing so slow?

I keep repeating that I have no relatives and no one who cares about it, and yet I forcefully give it away. I'm so fucking speechless. I'm really becoming more and more stupid as I read.

The protagonist is extremely hypocritical and always talks about morality and other nonsense. Every chapter is full of moisture. And the so-called "smart" question – did you have your phone with you during the robbery? Aren't you afraid of being positioned? There is a possibility of being tracked even if the phone is turned off. In the Marvel world, black technology is everywhere and omnipotent. Are you still planning to build a "killing field" to fight against the army? Do you think people will let you go if they can't do anything to you? If ordinary people can't handle you, the Avengers or other superheroes will definitely take action, because what you do is what a villain would do. And if you choose to fight in the forest - missiles and even nuclear bombs can hit you directly. If you are in the city, you may hesitate, but in the forest, you have no worries at all. As for Gwen following you into the forest, I have no problem with it, but the protagonist is so stupid that he doesn't know how she followed her. Normal people should be able to imagine that if you don't bring any equipment in the forest, the only thing that can be tracked is your mobile phone. But the protagonist still knows nothing and is extremely stupid. I'm not asking the protagonist to be smart enough to create an artificial sun with a flashlight, but at least he can't be so stupid, right? I can accept it if you lower the IQ of the supporting characters to make the protagonist more relaxed. But if you also lower the IQ of the protagonist, it's unwatchable. Forget it, I gave up.

I felt the plot was a little dragged out. Also a little awkward. The whole process is supported by revenge, and his main plot is to always take revenge.

It's hard to explain in one sentence. You should write about the urban warrior king and the dragon king with a crooked mouth. I really can't stand seeing Hell Hulk. It's even more outrageous that Nick Fury is treated like a bastard by you.

When the Kirita soldier was fighting with the protagonist, he kept shouting ants, and I endured all the verbal fights. But the number of words "water" in the back is too excessive.

Every white person has body odor, whether he or she is a man or a woman. Even if she is very beautiful, she has to spray medicine to eliminate body odor every day. This is the reality. If you don't believe me, you can check it out.

The Kirita invasion ended after the protagonist fought a few minions for a few minutes. The protagonist is a saint warrior.