I Seek Immortality in the Wind and Moon
About This Novel
The new book "Eternal Life Begins from Jiangnan Painted Boat" has been released, I want to avenge my shame! Small ones are hidden in the fields, big ones are hidden in the city. As time goes by, dynasties change. I am also drunk and lying in the wind and moon, forever green. ------- I have nothing to do today, but I want to enjoy dancing.
What Readers Think
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Official(13)Scraped 10d ago
A bit weak
The setting is too weak. This is the fourth-grade Taoist Nascent Soul. Is your Nascent Soul too weak? He was poisoned so casually. He is so weak, let alone a cultivator.
Feeling average
I feel like the protagonists of books about immortality are all very handsome, but in ancient times, if they were so handsome that people would be jealous, they might be killed by others, or what if they were attracted by homosexuals? If you are too ugly, others will not like it, so I personally feel that when writing immortality articles, you should not be too handsome, nor too ugly, but above average, and then low-key, and then your luck should not be too bad, so that you have a chance to develop! Personal feeling, don't spray if you don't like it
Almost all plot lines are about clones. This kind of plot line about immortals who are not strong enough and go out to wander around seems to be uninteresting, even if it is a clone going out to wander. The protagonist is an immortal guest, and he is involved in so many things, so it doesn't mean much, and the plot is not interesting to read!
maid
It was well written, but the two maids beside me became more and more awkward the more I thought about it. In the beginning, didn't both sides get what they needed? But later on, they just didn't want to fight anymore and found the protagonist as a maid. Why did they open the realm of immortality to them? (Don't say it's an experiment, judging from your writing, it should be a supporting role with some drama) It sounds like they are two oirans, but in fact they are just chickens! (Is it the female supporting role in the early stage, or are you really planning to be a maid?)
You have no strength, you are not honest, you just wander around, the capital is full of imperial court bosses, I believe any second generation ancestor can make you die a hundred times with just one disapproval
It feels a bit low-end and a big service.
I don't know if it's my imagination, but it feels a bit like Da Feng's watch. The plot, history, and martial arts system are generally okay.
I have read several books like this, and without exception they all collapsed! It feels like they are all produced by a studio, and the soup does not change the medicine!
The content is exciting and pretty good, just don't be a bad saint, otherwise it would be a pity
Immortals should be well developed, wandering around, investigating and solving crimes, and causing trouble?
I just saw that there has been no update for many days. Is this a cut?
Rating
Community(0)
Official(13)Scraped 10d ago
A bit weak
The setting is too weak. This is the fourth-grade Taoist Nascent Soul. Is your Nascent Soul too weak? He was poisoned so casually. He is so weak, let alone a cultivator.
Feeling average
I feel like the protagonists of books about immortality are all very handsome, but in ancient times, if they were so handsome that people would be jealous, they might be killed by others, or what if they were attracted by homosexuals? If you are too ugly, others will not like it, so I personally feel that when writing immortality articles, you should not be too handsome, nor too ugly, but above average, and then low-key, and then your luck should not be too bad, so that you have a chance to develop! Personal feeling, don't spray if you don't like it
Almost all plot lines are about clones. This kind of plot line about immortals who are not strong enough and go out to wander around seems to be uninteresting, even if it is a clone going out to wander. The protagonist is an immortal guest, and he is involved in so many things, so it doesn't mean much, and the plot is not interesting to read!
maid
It was well written, but the two maids beside me became more and more awkward the more I thought about it. In the beginning, didn't both sides get what they needed? But later on, they just didn't want to fight anymore and found the protagonist as a maid. Why did they open the realm of immortality to them? (Don't say it's an experiment, judging from your writing, it should be a supporting role with some drama) It sounds like they are two oirans, but in fact they are just chickens! (Is it the female supporting role in the early stage, or are you really planning to be a maid?)
You have no strength, you are not honest, you just wander around, the capital is full of imperial court bosses, I believe any second generation ancestor can make you die a hundred times with just one disapproval
It feels a bit low-end and a big service.
I don't know if it's my imagination, but it feels a bit like Da Feng's watch. The plot, history, and martial arts system are generally okay.
I have read several books like this, and without exception they all collapsed! It feels like they are all produced by a studio, and the soup does not change the medicine!
The content is exciting and pretty good, just don't be a bad saint, otherwise it would be a pity
Immortals should be well developed, wandering around, investigating and solving crimes, and causing trouble?
I just saw that there has been no update for many days. Is this a cut?
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