I Use Tiangang and Earth to Prove My Immortality

In the past, it was popular to pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger, or the law of the dark forest, which caused the protagonist to desperately hide his cultivation. He had no brains to think about how stupid it was in the eyes of senior seniors, and how much he didn't trust the master to do this. Can this thing feed back the master in the future? If you cultivate this thing, it won't backfire, right? And even if you exclude these things, what kind of future will a person like this who doesn't even have the temperament to compete with others have in the future? If the normal protagonist hadn't been the author's brainless aura, he would have been lost to everyone a long time ago. After all, the teacher doesn't know what you have accomplished, and he still gives you some guidance; and even if the protagonist really doesn't need anyone's guidance, it is a waste of time to play with others, it is better to play alone... The routine of writing in this way is so boring that even though some stories are indeed better than before, the impression is not good, so I gave them up.

Just like that, the realm of cultivation is messed up and the chapters are messed up.

The writing is okay, I can read it when I have more patience. The elder master has been working as the Riddler, and the protagonist has been trying to figure it out, just like in a suspense mystery novel. After reading the latest chapter, I actually want to say that these things have nothing to do with the protagonist. I don't understand why the protagonist wants to go to this trouble. For dozens of chapters, the protagonist has been writing about the past and secrets of the master and elder. It's because your master and elder don't want to tell you, so you have to find out something. It makes people tired to watch and exhausts their patience. Even if you figure it out, it won't do you any good. There are no treasures or techniques waiting for you. The plot completely leaves readers with no expectations and is completely thankless. I know that you want to unravel a corner of the world from the perspective of the protagonist, such as the various forces, the good and the bad, the division of strength, and the layout of the continent, but it is a bit too long. In the middle, it is appropriate to write some protagonists doing other things. They can go shopping, practice elixirs, collect herbs, and have adventures. You don't write about women. The protagonist just plants lotus flowers, treats diseases, and practices every day.

Don't want to take care of things? You weren't in charge that time, ****, you were selling dog meat with a sheep's head under the pretext of being a recluse. When people begged you, you had to help. Hey, you are so tired. The more you look at it, the more uncomfortable you become.

There are too many shortcomings, and a bunch of ordinary people form a poisonous person who is timid. As well as the collapse of the power system, the protagonist in the Qi training period is all pretending to be cool, and the others are all tool men, with serious facial makeup.

I think it's okay. Why don't you update it?

Update, update, update quickly, update quickly, update quickly

What is it? The suspense you wrote, put it aside to investigate the case.

People who are not well versed in reading can read it, it's quite good.

The way out for online writing is to be innovative and have fun, not to be hodgepodge and depressive. This novel is for dogs, and even dogs won't read it.