The Origin of Douluo

Orchid-like heart, bright eyes and white teeth, elegant face, clear words and beautiful music, Qihua Yaocao, curved eyebrows and plump cheeks, moth eyebrows, clear water and wood, refreshing and pleasing to the eye, natural beauty, heavenly fragrance and national color, I feel pity when I see it, the eyebrows are turning, the rays are all over the place, Xiaojia Jasper, apricot face and peach cheeks, warm color Shaoguang, apricot cheeks and peach face, apricot rain and pear clouds, saliva jade Mozhu, Yan Chi's likes and dislikes, fish sinking and wild geese falling, it is better to be angry and happy, the beautiful scenery, the hibiscus in the distant mountains, the color is peerless, the lingering clouds are beautiful, it is suitable to be happy and angry, the jade is buried with fragrance, Bright purple and red, willows in Zhangtai, the flowers are ashamed of the moon, showing off their beauty, the spring is warm and fragrant, the garden is full of spring colors, the spring is as deep as the sea, the colorful clouds are easy to disperse, the colorful purples and reds are beautiful and gorgeous

I even suspected that there was a delay. Of course, I didn't give the negative review because of the high rating. I really felt that there was some delay in it to push up the rating. There are also some bad things, and I would say it is very messy. Some people may say no, but I'm not talking about the plot being messy. But his paragraphs. Others write a person's words in this "". Then there was the conversation with him. It's okay not to fight. But he put these two symbols in brackets and then. It's a dialogue, I'm really convinced. Moreover, this way of traveling is extremely old-fashioned and very restrictive. Limitations on growth.

Just don't lick Tang San and worship Master. Unzip. 😜😜

This book can only be described as a cool novel. The protagonist is either being teased or on the way to being teased. It is suitable for book lovers who are not obsessed with the plot of the original book. If you don't accept the plot, please take my advice. If you really can't help but want to read it, don't bother reading it, otherwise it will make you embarrassed and cancerous. The author's writing style is not very good yet. I believe that if he becomes more proficient, this book will definitely be better than it is now. (I've only read about a hundred and ten chapters, but I'm sure I'll be "teased" in the same way in the follow-up.) It's not my fault, it's my own feelings.

Indeed, the male protagonist is exactly the same as his sister

Author, please don't update for now. Please solve the punctuation problem first, otherwise it will be difficult to change these things later.

I found that many Douluo fans would be scolded for licking Tang San if they had a slightly better relationship with Tang San, but the most poisonous thing is for licking the Spirit Hall without thinking. Gu Yuena's younger brother is almost equal to the prince in the Star Dou Forest. With this status, even the seven ferocious beasts of Star Dou and the Three Kings of the Far North will respect you. With this level of status, you don't want to go to the God Realm to seek justice for Gu Yuena and Di Tian, ​​but you still go to lick the Spirit Hall? There are also two other parts, one with the protagonist being the son of the Dragon God, and the other with the protagonist being the eighth ferocious beast of the Star Dou Forest. They are both Xiao Wu's childhood sweethearts. After learning that Bibi Dong killed Xiao Wu's mother, they both left Xiao Wu to Tang San to take care of. He immediately abandoned Gu Yuena, Ditian and the others and ran to lick the Spirit Hall. Just because of Bibi Dong? That day a beautiful woman killed your whole family and you went to lick her?

The writing quality of this book can be ranked among the top three. I personally like it very much. The author will report faster.

As long as you don't lick Tang San, don't worship Yu Xiaogang, and don't join Shrek, it's fine.

After only reading the first chapter, I felt that there was no logic at all. The scene connection was a bit stiff, the character description was too deliberate, and the biggest problem was punctuation and typos. Maybe the author is not a full-time online writer, but since he became an author, he must have the responsibilities. The use of punctuation and the control of typo rate should be the author's mission. But from the story point of view, it is a good story. As a novice author, my writing skills need to be improved a lot, so come on! ! !