
Pirate: Son-in-law, I'm Determined!
by Lost Pigeon
About This Novel
On the road of growth, you often need a little help. "Keya, go get a cup of tea." "Lieutenant General Dole, rub your shoulders." "Shalulia Palace, my feet are a little sore." "Yamato, forget it, go and play..." Half an hour later. Luo Ya stretched his body and said righteously: "I, Luo Ya, can be where I am today thanks to my own efforts!" PS: The 1.65 Million-word masterpiece "One Piece: Famous Teacher Kaido, Online Teaching" has been completed. Please feel free to read it.
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Official(25)Scraped 19d ago
The person I dislike the most in the entire One Piece world is Kirby
Sometimes you can't see the pirate setting. If you can surpass many people by working 200 times harder than ordinary people, then I want to ask how you can work 200 times harder. Ordinary navy trains for seven or eight hours a day. How can you train more than 1,000 hours a day without talent?
generally
Two points. Before the time travel, the mind of the first protagonist still existed. No fewer than a hundred people died at the hands of masters of Zan. Do you think he could live an ordinary life as a civilian? He also behaved well after coming out of the court. It really made me laugh. The second rhythm was too slow.
A batch of water is still inexplicable
Trouble, do you want to be a warrior, go to the track and field team, or go to Koshien? The reflection of hard work is how well you compare with others. To put it bluntly, it means how much stronger you become, dancing and racing. If you are doing this passionate sport... What are you going to do...
My brain feels worse
If there is a space where you can practice 200 times without being tired and without worrying about food and drink. If you practice sword-drawing and slashing for a year, you will have 200 times the skill. You have surpassed Fu Hongxue, Tai Chi, you have surpassed Zhang Sanfeng, and I think you can become a god in broadcasting gymnastics. You are a time traveler. You only have plot in your mind, and you can't do anything else?
It's clearly written that the main character smokes, and the whole book is full of water. It's unbelievable that they charge a fee for this kind of thing.
It's not as good as the famous teacher Kaiduo, it shouldn't be. The famous teacher Kaido is really happy to watch. After all, Kaiduo is basically a very strong character, and his casual style is very comfortable. Now he has a weak soldier and a hard-working talent, but Kaido's style is still the same, and there is nothing special except the world. How can a person with strong talent become a strong person? I can only say that the style looks uncomfortable. Personally, I think that weak people have no talent. A golden finger who works hard to become strong should just practice hard. I have seen similar things. I can't wait for 25 hours a day. Before I am strong, I can't stick to anything. The author writes well, but the style falls behind.
Very nice
If this book is written like this, as long as you don't lose your wits, you can become a god and compete with retired generals.
The forces in the pirate world are all ruined.
I haven't read it carefully yet, so I just left a comment. Pirates are a piece of shit. The revolutionary army has been on the move. The latest episode of One Piece reveals that he acquiesced in the massacre of the Celestial Dragons and even took action against them.
The navy is a clown now
You're still in the navy←_← Dashachun, what are you going to do?
a good book
Let me declare in advance that I am 23 years old and already working. The bottom line is that it is too exaggerated to say that it is a god. I can only say that it is pretty good. There are certain shortcomings in many places, such as the handling of Nami and Aaron, including Garp's answers, which are unnatural. The good part is the overall style, the character's personality is well grasped, and overall it doesn't feel like a cover-up novel. What makes people like it more is the character of the protagonist. The plot does not make everything smooth sailing for the protagonist. Some disgusting novels are system lottery flows. The number of draws is saved. Every time the protagonist encounters a problem, he will draw out something he needs urgently. This is really disgusting. This novel does not have this problem. The plot is not brainless and the protagonist Long Aotian is clever. Especially the protagonist cannot defeat the red dog, so he uses his navy identity to protect himself. He apologizes to Sengoku as a joke and takes Yamato away temporarily. Even his identity is still a navy. This part is really good. Very few protagonists have this kind of brain (in fact, the protagonist's brain level depends on the author's brain). Another important point is that the author's treatment of female characters is very poor. He describes a lot of female characters, but there is almost no description of the progress of the relationship between the protagonists and them, and in-depth communication. This makes me feel that the work is very dry. Even if it is briefly mentioned, it is much better than the current situation, which only describes the female characters and does not describe the relationship between the protagonist and them. And as for Nami, after finishing Arlong, there is no further description. There is a feeling of reluctance. After all, Nami, the Robin Queen, is also the face of One Piece, so let's give it a little bit.
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Official(25)Scraped 19d ago
The person I dislike the most in the entire One Piece world is Kirby
Sometimes you can't see the pirate setting. If you can surpass many people by working 200 times harder than ordinary people, then I want to ask how you can work 200 times harder. Ordinary navy trains for seven or eight hours a day. How can you train more than 1,000 hours a day without talent?
generally
Two points. Before the time travel, the mind of the first protagonist still existed. No fewer than a hundred people died at the hands of masters of Zan. Do you think he could live an ordinary life as a civilian? He also behaved well after coming out of the court. It really made me laugh. The second rhythm was too slow.
A batch of water is still inexplicable
Trouble, do you want to be a warrior, go to the track and field team, or go to Koshien? The reflection of hard work is how well you compare with others. To put it bluntly, it means how much stronger you become, dancing and racing. If you are doing this passionate sport... What are you going to do...
My brain feels worse
If there is a space where you can practice 200 times without being tired and without worrying about food and drink. If you practice sword-drawing and slashing for a year, you will have 200 times the skill. You have surpassed Fu Hongxue, Tai Chi, you have surpassed Zhang Sanfeng, and I think you can become a god in broadcasting gymnastics. You are a time traveler. You only have plot in your mind, and you can't do anything else?
It's clearly written that the main character smokes, and the whole book is full of water. It's unbelievable that they charge a fee for this kind of thing.
It's not as good as the famous teacher Kaiduo, it shouldn't be. The famous teacher Kaido is really happy to watch. After all, Kaiduo is basically a very strong character, and his casual style is very comfortable. Now he has a weak soldier and a hard-working talent, but Kaido's style is still the same, and there is nothing special except the world. How can a person with strong talent become a strong person? I can only say that the style looks uncomfortable. Personally, I think that weak people have no talent. A golden finger who works hard to become strong should just practice hard. I have seen similar things. I can't wait for 25 hours a day. Before I am strong, I can't stick to anything. The author writes well, but the style falls behind.
Very nice
If this book is written like this, as long as you don't lose your wits, you can become a god and compete with retired generals.
The forces in the pirate world are all ruined.
I haven't read it carefully yet, so I just left a comment. Pirates are a piece of shit. The revolutionary army has been on the move. The latest episode of One Piece reveals that he acquiesced in the massacre of the Celestial Dragons and even took action against them.
The navy is a clown now
You're still in the navy←_← Dashachun, what are you going to do?
a good book
Let me declare in advance that I am 23 years old and already working. The bottom line is that it is too exaggerated to say that it is a god. I can only say that it is pretty good. There are certain shortcomings in many places, such as the handling of Nami and Aaron, including Garp's answers, which are unnatural. The good part is the overall style, the character's personality is well grasped, and overall it doesn't feel like a cover-up novel. What makes people like it more is the character of the protagonist. The plot does not make everything smooth sailing for the protagonist. Some disgusting novels are system lottery flows. The number of draws is saved. Every time the protagonist encounters a problem, he will draw out something he needs urgently. This is really disgusting. This novel does not have this problem. The plot is not brainless and the protagonist Long Aotian is clever. Especially the protagonist cannot defeat the red dog, so he uses his navy identity to protect himself. He apologizes to Sengoku as a joke and takes Yamato away temporarily. Even his identity is still a navy. This part is really good. Very few protagonists have this kind of brain (in fact, the protagonist's brain level depends on the author's brain). Another important point is that the author's treatment of female characters is very poor. He describes a lot of female characters, but there is almost no description of the progress of the relationship between the protagonists and them, and in-depth communication. This makes me feel that the work is very dry. Even if it is briefly mentioned, it is much better than the current situation, which only describes the female characters and does not describe the relationship between the protagonist and them. And as for Nami, after finishing Arlong, there is no further description. There is a feeling of reluctance. After all, Nami, the Robin Queen, is also the face of One Piece, so let's give it a little bit.













