
Great Overlord: Emperor of the Void, Starting from Signing In
by Yue Bai Qian
About This Novel
Ji Xuanyuan dreamed of waking up in the world and became a student of Beiling Academy. Bind the god-level sign-in system and obtain the ninth-level divine vein. The Spiritual Road Trial kills everyone everywhere, and no one respects him! After encountering injustice, he returned to Beiling. Sign in at Bei Ling Yuan and get the Jidao Emperor Sutra "Void Sutra"! The great road is like measuring, the origin of all things. Take control of the extreme realm of space and be in the eternal immortality. Sign in at Heimingyuan and get the Jidao Emperor Weapon Void Mirror! Chaos permeates the air, and the fairy light is like a sword. The star field evolves and the void oscillates. Riding Jiuyou, destroying Liuyu and pacifying Beiling. Enter Beicang and continue the journey! Hong Ling, Tang Qian'er, Luo Li, Ling Xi, Su Xuan, Wen Qingxuan, Wu Yingying, Mandala, Lin Jing, Xiao Xiao... Ji Xuanyuan: I will never be weaker than anyone in my entire life! Even if the Evil God comes, he must kneel down and bow his head! This emperor should be the great master of this vast world!
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Official(119)Scraped 5d ago
If you don't practice the system of covering the sky, don't talk about covering the sky. The techniques of covering the sky are specially created for the secret realm of the human body. There are five major chapters: the wheel and sea scroll, the Tao palace scroll, the four poles scroll, the dragon transformation scroll, and the sentai scroll.
Nonsense
It's not like you haven't written this kind of fanfic before and it's pretty good. Why is it that when you re-open a new book, it's just like a primary school student writing an essay, only saying harsh words and full of nonsense. If you want to fight, you can just fight. Why don't you feel guilty? Two families who are life-and-death enemies still feel guilty. The protagonist is SB, right? A person was eliminated earlier. Did that person have any space in the original work? When I meet a character who has a lot of space in the original work, it's the same as SB. Why can't I write without the original work? You can write five or six chapters in a fight. You can just finish it in seconds if you talk nonsense. It's so frustrating to write in such a big game. I don't know how you got 8.3 Points.
Speechless, this writing is too invincible. The sign-in stuff is so cool. But he himself couldn't show it. This kind of invincible article is probably cut off halfway. I can't write at all. Just care about having fun. But he doesn't care about his brain. The ten evil magic techniques were revealed, and I was really speechless. Originally, Zhetian's combat power was outrageous. He also signed out all the Immortal King's treasures. Could this really be written by a human being? What is the difference between this and those who wrote about Chaos Qinglian and Pangu Ax in Douluo?
Take away all the wives of Lin Dong and Xiao Yan
I'll take Qing Yanjing away too, and I'll give you five stars.
Feeling average. When you get Zhetian's secret technique and use it without changing it, how do you use it? You can definitely write something behind each sign-in reward, such as Void Emperor Sutra (Great Master Edition).
I learned the techniques of the Great Emperor of the Void, and I linked to a Nine Nether Bird. Is this what anyone can think of? Even a weak-minded person cannot come up with such a weak-minded idea. Put shackles on yourself?
There is something wrong with the protagonist here. You are a multi-heroine. Where is your emotional line?
It feels like the protagonist is like a succubus, attracting the women around him without any emotional line. Is this really good? It's like a group of soulless puppets who only fall in love with the male protagonist. When you talk about their feelings at a certain point in time, it feels so awkward. And the protagonist is so powerful, but there is no companionship from weak to strong. It feels very strange. It's like other women are puppets. They have no soul and only like the male protagonist. And those female protagonists must be at least a little arrogant. I admit that the male protagonist you wrote is indeed excellent. Other women cannot monopolize the male protagonist, but they will at least be jealous and have a Shura field. But you don't have these, so you have big emotional problems. Now that the protagonist's strength can be said to be at the top of the world, how can you write the subsequent female protagonists?
Your level is well written, and your sign-in is very good, but the level pressure is too low.
Do you dare to write about snatching away the women of Emperor Yan and Emperor Wu?
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Official(119)Scraped 5d ago
If you don't practice the system of covering the sky, don't talk about covering the sky. The techniques of covering the sky are specially created for the secret realm of the human body. There are five major chapters: the wheel and sea scroll, the Tao palace scroll, the four poles scroll, the dragon transformation scroll, and the sentai scroll.
Nonsense
It's not like you haven't written this kind of fanfic before and it's pretty good. Why is it that when you re-open a new book, it's just like a primary school student writing an essay, only saying harsh words and full of nonsense. If you want to fight, you can just fight. Why don't you feel guilty? Two families who are life-and-death enemies still feel guilty. The protagonist is SB, right? A person was eliminated earlier. Did that person have any space in the original work? When I meet a character who has a lot of space in the original work, it's the same as SB. Why can't I write without the original work? You can write five or six chapters in a fight. You can just finish it in seconds if you talk nonsense. It's so frustrating to write in such a big game. I don't know how you got 8.3 Points.
Speechless, this writing is too invincible. The sign-in stuff is so cool. But he himself couldn't show it. This kind of invincible article is probably cut off halfway. I can't write at all. Just care about having fun. But he doesn't care about his brain. The ten evil magic techniques were revealed, and I was really speechless. Originally, Zhetian's combat power was outrageous. He also signed out all the Immortal King's treasures. Could this really be written by a human being? What is the difference between this and those who wrote about Chaos Qinglian and Pangu Ax in Douluo?
Take away all the wives of Lin Dong and Xiao Yan
I'll take Qing Yanjing away too, and I'll give you five stars.
Feeling average. When you get Zhetian's secret technique and use it without changing it, how do you use it? You can definitely write something behind each sign-in reward, such as Void Emperor Sutra (Great Master Edition).
I learned the techniques of the Great Emperor of the Void, and I linked to a Nine Nether Bird. Is this what anyone can think of? Even a weak-minded person cannot come up with such a weak-minded idea. Put shackles on yourself?
There is something wrong with the protagonist here. You are a multi-heroine. Where is your emotional line?
It feels like the protagonist is like a succubus, attracting the women around him without any emotional line. Is this really good? It's like a group of soulless puppets who only fall in love with the male protagonist. When you talk about their feelings at a certain point in time, it feels so awkward. And the protagonist is so powerful, but there is no companionship from weak to strong. It feels very strange. It's like other women are puppets. They have no soul and only like the male protagonist. And those female protagonists must be at least a little arrogant. I admit that the male protagonist you wrote is indeed excellent. Other women cannot monopolize the male protagonist, but they will at least be jealous and have a Shura field. But you don't have these, so you have big emotional problems. Now that the protagonist's strength can be said to be at the top of the world, how can you write the subsequent female protagonists?
Your level is well written, and your sign-in is very good, but the level pressure is too low.
Do you dare to write about snatching away the women of Emperor Yan and Emperor Wu?









