Chaotic Martial Arts Begins with Joining the Martial Arts Gym

It does seem a bit drawn out and lengthy at the moment. A small low-level martial artist has everything in detail. In the martial arts examination, he has to write about himself, others, and the fellow villagers. If everything is important, then nothing is important. It's very simple. In life, if you think everyone around you is your friend, it means you don't have any friends.

The handling is too blunt. The most abstract thing is that there are two gangs. One is going to attack and kill the protagonist for 16 taels of silver, and the other is investigating inexplicably. The first one can completely depict the gap between Ming and Jin to promote the rationality of the attack. In fact, when combined with the subsequent gang fights, it becomes more abstract, but the author does not describe it at all; the other is even more abstract and boundless. The protagonist has a self-centered delusion of being victimized, and repeatedly emphasizes that there is no leakage. The gang's eyes are clear and the goal is clear, and there is no lubrication or portrayal at all. In the beginning, the Ning family episode was quite good, not stiff and reasonable, but then it started to create such abstract contradictions after only ten or twenty chapters, which was really difficult to deal with.

The whole family eats glutinous rice bran, but you, a person who has just traveled through time, generously give meat to others? You say he's your cousin?

It's boring, and it deliberately creates conflict. You could have watched it 10 years ago.

It's too watery. It can be so watery in the early stage, but in the middle and late stages, you're still watery. A beginner repeatedly emphasizes writing dozens of pictures

It's really average, the supporting characters are very different and have the same ideas. The plot is blunt, and the designs to attract hatred are the same and unreasonable. It's just a fun read with a faster pace, but this book is slow-paced. The previous design is in vain.

It's been more than ten days and I still haven't broken through to the state of Naqi. It's useless to write a lot of nonsense and even have no golden fingers. I'm ready to quit.

Later on, I felt that the writing became more and more detailed. One page was thirty or forty points. After reading it, I felt that there was no actual content written. It was just a piece of cake and I lost interest in further subscriptions!

I have been so poisonous recently, what kind of half-step can I do? Later, I will reach the peak of half-step, the limit of half-step, the perfection of half-step, and the great perfection of half-step.

The novel has a very poisonous point! The main character is a soul traveler, but as soon as he time travels, he immediately becomes closer to the original owner's relatives than we readers are to our own relatives. He has never met the original owner's father, but he is willing to give everything for the original owner's father. His feelings for the original owner's father, whom he has never met, are more powerful than the feelings all readers have for their biological fathers! This is super poisonous! I'm also a little too much for my cousin. This cousin is more like the protagonist's son! I suggest the author change it to the protagonist having a fetal transmutation and awakening his memory! What's more, whatever the author has to do is written in the subscription chapter, such as replying to readers' comments, thanking them for their rewards, etc. Isn't this simply asking readers to spend "extra" money? Can't I write a free chapter for a word that has nothing to do with the content of the novel? Pay attention to your eating habits! Finally, apart from the above problems, this book has few other flaws and is worth reading! Overall I give it an eighty.