You Can Master This Technique at a Glance, What Else is There to Practice?

After reading ten chapters, everyone is numb and mentally ill. No one, including the protagonist, is normal.

If I don't like it, I have to spray it. Not to mention all the previous pressures on the protagonist, after all, it's time to get up after arriving at the temple celebration. Although Bang Wu'er also feels inexplicable, Wu'er's grandfather helped the protagonist before, so Bang Wu'er can understand. Even if he helps Zhuang Xian, even if he gives the five ghosts magic, he can actually write a ridiculous plot that puts him in a bear's belly and secretly gives it to Zhuang Xian without telling Zhuang Xian and then forgets it (it took him a month to remember it, but he didn't care when he remembered it, and the protagonist guessed it) Zhuang Xian's mother may be refined), the protagonist said: Hey, I just don't remember, I just don't say that I gave it to him, hey, even if Zhuang Xian makes his mother and his cousin a ghost, I don't care, hey, even if Zhuang Xian bares his teeth in front of me and wants to fuck me, it doesn't matter. Author, your brother is really better than the biological father and mother in your novel. The protagonist has traveled through time, and these two are brothers from the previous life. Author, are you writing the protagonist according to yourself? If so, then I am your brother in the past life. Can you transfer a few million to me? I won't pick hundreds of thousands. And don't say that you transferred it to me, just say that I won the lottery. And if I report your novel, you won't be angry, after all, I am your brother in the previous life (I will not report you, I just hope that Zhuang Xian in the back will be offline soon, and then the protagonist will not write like this again)

I can't stand it any longer. It's a waste of time reading coins. There are still dozens of chapters left to read. I can barely read the errors and omissions. The author likes to write about sworn brothers, and then inexplicably, one village player and one paragraph are written, which makes people uncomfortable and does not help the protagonist. But the protagonist insists on helping. Will there be sworn brothers at every stage in the future?

The protagonist is a good person, he behaves as a nanny, and he also subdues his wits, but the one who subdues him is still the protagonist. The most important thing is that the protagonist is a time traveler. It is not obvious at all. It has the same background as Dou Po.

Such a good book has to be cut off so quickly, which is very uncomfortable. There is still a lot to write about about Chenghuang City and the New World! If you stop, let me, who haven't found a good book, tell me what to read! They are all books, so the difference is not big! Those disgusting trolls gave your book so many bad reviews, it's so fucking disgusting

The first 4 stars on the shelves are quite attractive. The next three stars are like matryoshka dolls. When you reach a certain level, you will be told that it is difficult to find the exercises, that there is no way to practice, and that life is as difficult as a beggar, forcing people to be like dogs. Once the realm is raised, it becomes a roadside road again. Later, when I get to Xianmen, it's like shit. It's either written by someone else or written by AI. What does the long alchemy have to do with the first half of the book? It's not just that the protagonist just does whatever others ask him to do, without any ideas of his own. The protagonist is like a fool, and has all kinds of dark officialdom and sophistication from two hundred chapters ago. After reading several chapters, there is no actual content at all.

It took me two days to read it. Overall, the writing is remarkable. It has its own ideas. It is much better than those that blindly borrow from the immortal biography of mortals. It has written something of its own. Although it feels weird that there are always people helping one after another in the article, there is nothing wrong with excessiveness. It is a good masterpiece of a novel about immortality, and will be continued later. Keep up the good work, don't leave it unfinished, and don't over-exaggerate the combat power. There are many novels written about over-exaggerating the combat power, such as building the foundation and defeating the Jindan Yuanying, golden elixir slaughtering the gods, Jindan Yuanying being as numerous as dogs, etc. Even in the later period of Celestial Candou Tudou (Fights Breaking the Sphere), this kind of combat power was as numerous as dogs, and then the book was hastily finished.

It's well written, but I don't like the style, so I'm leaving it behind

Each chapter is too expensive, I can't stand it, I can't stand it

The writing style is good, and all kinds of jokes are readily available. But the plot is really bad, just for the sake of making trouble. Can't figure out how to advance the plot? It's so insanely written.