Douluo: the Martial Spirit Moyunteng Possesses Bibi Dong!

Wuhun Palace line! Wuhun Palace line! Wuhun Palace line! Master Chong's Rebellious Disciple + Little Sister Fox + Little Angel In order of priority, Senior Sister Little Fox is the fastest, the rest depends on the plot, and the author has not thought about it yet. Hu Liena's age is set to be twelve years old, six years older than Tang San. (I don't know exactly how big it is... I just set it according to what I wrote.) Xieyue and Yan seemed to be almost two years older than Hu Liena. The protagonist of this book, Ling Feng, is six years old (originally my protagonist's name was directly written as Luo Feng, but I felt a little uncomfortable, so I changed it), the same age as Tang San.

No one can write this content. Author, can you take a look at it yourself after you finish writing it? Give it four stars first and see what happens next. I want to see what kind of poison can poison me, the best Shennong in the world.

Look at what this is? Insulting people's intelligence

You, it feels like your brain is on your butt! You've lived two lifetimes, and when you see a beautiful woman and you say she's so beautiful, it doesn't matter as long as you think about it in your mind, but then you say it out loud, damn, that's awesome! And what's even more ridiculous? Those conversations and content of yours, damn it, it makes me look like I'm embarrassing others, why should I pay attention to it? Damn it, it's so embarrassing! And most people who read novels now are adults! A few years ago, your way of writing would have probably survived for a while, but now! It's hard to comment. I can only say that it costs a lot of money to get this score! Moreover, I know you want to describe the characters more vividly! But you can't stray too far from the original work, right? One of the biggest attractions of fan fiction is that I haven't read enough of the original work, so I want to come to fan fiction to find out what I feel! Although the original work may seem like a roadside novel now! But I couldn't bear it. This setting of his is relatively novel and beautiful! Seriously! I also prefer to read Douluo fanfics, but most of what I read is his settings, martial arts, soul rings and other things! As for the general content, as long as it's not very abstract, embarrassing, or brain-shaking, I can usually watch it! Of course this is from the perspective of a normal person! I probably don't quite fit into the category of you geniuses who can write novels! So I think it's a bit disrespectful for the three stars to give you two more stars! After all, I have written it all, even though it is not that exciting!

But if you say that the protagonist has a purpose, but can't control himself? How old is your IQ? Even a child wouldn't say that, right?

Is the protagonist endorsing the traitor? What is the difference between Bibi Dong's situation and betraying the country? Let's talk about Bibi Dong herself, right? After reading the original work, I couldn't help but feel sick. But any normal person would kill her if he had the ability, right? Especially when we are in the same force, I don't understand why so many fans describe how beautiful and wonderful Bibi Dong is, and then keep whitewashing it. Are there no women in the world? Staring at a white-eyed wolf! Bitch! Or a third-hand product?

There are not many people who can send away two people. You, the author, are one of you. You are indeed a good hand, you are awesome.

The poison was introduced at the beginning, let alone Bibi Dong, after meeting Hu Liena... What is the difference between this dog licking and the original Yan? Simply: Hu Liena farted Protagonist: Senior sister, your fart smells so good Hu Liena pulled a bunch of Protagonist: Eat it up Stop insulting Moyundeng

For example, where did you, a six-year-old orphan, learn the theoretical knowledge beyond the upper limit of the soul ring, and you still quoted scriptures there? Are you a born prodigy or are you born with knowledge?

It's so toxic. I suggest you stop reading it. It's rubbish.