
The Ordinary Life of Yan Bugui in Siheyuan
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A new book has been released. Watch me, Xu Damao, control the animals in the courtyard and live a peaceful life.
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Official(37)Scraped 7d ago
I don't like the character setting a bit! When did the TV series "Love in the Courtyard" come out? I'm not sure (I'm not interested in looking it up). According to your setting, the protagonist's predecessor was a person in the 1970s, so it's 1970, so he's about 50 years old! Calculate it as 50! In 2020, I Even Love the Siheyuan was released a long time ago. Have you not watched this drama if the protagonist's predecessor was in the 1970s? Even if you haven't seen it, you are a person in the 1970s, over 50 years old, and you don't have any sense of worldliness? Isn't it normal in this day and age for people to call each other "brother"? Aren't people in the 21st century even more shameless in chatting in the 1940s? It was good at first, but when you enter the courtyard plot, you don't feel that way! Secondly: They always say fate is fate, wouldn't the protagonist think too much about this situation? After all, people in the 21st century have lived until 2020! Or a man with a son and grandson, but no internet surfing? (Maybe I put my own thoughts into this comment, and I'm not sure whether people in their 50s use the Internet)! Also: Did the protagonist directly time travel to Yan Fugui, or was he directly reborn as a child and live in 1949? ? You, the author, are very vague on this point. Can't you write clearly on this point? Even the writing is vague! ! The only good thing is that if you look at the protagonist in the light of Yan Fugui, who is in love with the courtyard, he does have an aspect of ordinary life.
The second child is called liberation? How could it be someone born before liberation?
I suspect this is an AI novel, but the previous one was just okay and it probably wasn't AI. But after chapters 5-600, the more I read, the more headaches I get. The characters in the novel are confusing, their names are confusing, and there are many inappropriate words and wrong sentences. And it's not just one or two problems, it's all in the plot. Seeing people dizzy and confused.
From the first chapter, you know that it is a system flow again, and multiple-choice questions related to the system will occupy a large part of the chapter.
I have never seen a courtyard house written from this perspective. Looks ok, hope to update soon.
There is a problem with the setting. I am writing a fanfic but I don't know the plot. Ordinary life is not that easy (I have already provided for my son's house in my old age).
You can add talents to your juniors and create a few basketball stars.
Gift talents in football, basketball, sprinting, etc. To future generations. Anyway, as an old man, some of your talents are really unnecessary.
Don't those who write TV series fan fiction watch TV series?
Should you know the ages of the main characters in Siheyuan? Do you need to understand basic prices and currencies? You dare to write fan fiction without knowing anything?
The writing is very good and the updates are timely. Come on!
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Official(37)Scraped 7d ago
I don't like the character setting a bit! When did the TV series "Love in the Courtyard" come out? I'm not sure (I'm not interested in looking it up). According to your setting, the protagonist's predecessor was a person in the 1970s, so it's 1970, so he's about 50 years old! Calculate it as 50! In 2020, I Even Love the Siheyuan was released a long time ago. Have you not watched this drama if the protagonist's predecessor was in the 1970s? Even if you haven't seen it, you are a person in the 1970s, over 50 years old, and you don't have any sense of worldliness? Isn't it normal in this day and age for people to call each other "brother"? Aren't people in the 21st century even more shameless in chatting in the 1940s? It was good at first, but when you enter the courtyard plot, you don't feel that way! Secondly: They always say fate is fate, wouldn't the protagonist think too much about this situation? After all, people in the 21st century have lived until 2020! Or a man with a son and grandson, but no internet surfing? (Maybe I put my own thoughts into this comment, and I'm not sure whether people in their 50s use the Internet)! Also: Did the protagonist directly time travel to Yan Fugui, or was he directly reborn as a child and live in 1949? ? You, the author, are very vague on this point. Can't you write clearly on this point? Even the writing is vague! ! The only good thing is that if you look at the protagonist in the light of Yan Fugui, who is in love with the courtyard, he does have an aspect of ordinary life.
The second child is called liberation? How could it be someone born before liberation?
I suspect this is an AI novel, but the previous one was just okay and it probably wasn't AI. But after chapters 5-600, the more I read, the more headaches I get. The characters in the novel are confusing, their names are confusing, and there are many inappropriate words and wrong sentences. And it's not just one or two problems, it's all in the plot. Seeing people dizzy and confused.
From the first chapter, you know that it is a system flow again, and multiple-choice questions related to the system will occupy a large part of the chapter.
I have never seen a courtyard house written from this perspective. Looks ok, hope to update soon.
There is a problem with the setting. I am writing a fanfic but I don't know the plot. Ordinary life is not that easy (I have already provided for my son's house in my old age).
You can add talents to your juniors and create a few basketball stars.
Gift talents in football, basketball, sprinting, etc. To future generations. Anyway, as an old man, some of your talents are really unnecessary.
Don't those who write TV series fan fiction watch TV series?
Should you know the ages of the main characters in Siheyuan? Do you need to understand basic prices and currencies? You dare to write fan fiction without knowing anything?
The writing is very good and the updates are timely. Come on!










