
The Ultimate Blade Shadow in One Piece Navy
by Orange, Banana, Orange, Pear And Pomelo
About This Novel
The original title of the book is "The Beautiful Swordsman Comes with Barbecue" __ On the Great Channel, a warship sailed. On the deck was a white-haired woman. She wore a black and white sword, one long and one short, on the sword case at her waist. She also held another famous sword in her hand. Watching the Warring States Period in hand, General Akainu and General Aoji compete for the position of marshal, and predict who will take the upcoming vacant general position. The woman sighed and murmured to herself: "It's impossible to be a general. It's impossible to be a general in this life. I don't know how to be a king. I can only live like this as a dove lieutenant general." After saying that, the woman picked up the big bone and meat on the side, took a bite, and shouted vaguely to the adjutant: "Return! If you continue cruising, you will encounter pirates!"
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Official(40)Scraped 19d ago
It was a bit ridiculous later on.
Whitebeard is one of the four emperors. According to the book, there is no problem that Whitebeard is now the best in the world. Then the author arranged for Whitebeard to be the gatekeeper of the new world. After that, he became a little confused. The protagonist's combat power was falsely reported, and then he defeated the Whitebeard Pirates (the protagonist at this time was not even a major general). All captains were defeated by the protagonist. It was just because it was set that Whitebeard did not want to accept and kill the protagonist, so the protagonist killed the protagonist (with difficulty). The opponent was defeated)... (It's such nonsense that the combat power has collapsed. A protagonist who may not even be able to defeat Luffy at the beginning of the new world directly braves the Whitebeard Pirates) is outrageous. Although it is to build momentum for the protagonist, this is really nonsense, but a big The Age of Pirates has appeared, and most of the sea areas in the New World are run rampant by pirates. (The Navy can retain its New World status or is being inserted.) The protagonist builds momentum for the Navy to enter the New World. Even if he gives Whitebeard face, other pirates may not give him face, right? It feels ridiculous that the combat power has collapsed... The protagonist, who has been practicing for several years, suddenly realizes the power of the swordsman, and suddenly realizes the power of the great swordsman. However, because the opponent has an order not to kill the protagonist, all the decades of training are in vain... He is killed by the protagonist every time (with difficulty)... It's very confusing.
Will the protagonist get married?
Will the protagonist change his original gender? I hope she gets married. Don't ask why, because I have a bad taste ( ̄▽ ̄)~*
Is the protagonist definitely a dove?
After reading it, I feel that the protagonist is not a dove, but a hawk, and it is a bit different from the description in the introduction. I don't know if I should continue reading.
Too everyday
I won't give it a rating, although it's not suitable for me, but it doesn't have a very toxic plot. For me personally, there is no need to write in a daily style when writing battle fanfics, as it feels a bit like a running story. Moreover, the strength of the protagonist is too mediocre. He may be the strongest among his peers, but the description gives the impression that his strength is mediocre. There is no specific description of training and fighting. It is always mixed with daily life. The content always mentions the strength in one stroke. It is impossible to see where he is strong or why he has become stronger.
So brave
Using the name of my Great Sword Emperor Yijue Jianhao to write Wu Mei is so courageous. 🐶
The cover is so beautiful
I'm really looking forward to meeting Zoro. I don't know what kind of development will happen if we both belong to the Three-Sword Style.
Let's briefly talk about the strength setting. Everyone is welcome to correct it.
I feel that the strength of the Four Emperors has been weakened. Strength is the most important balance of deterrence among pirates. Otherwise, the new world will not belong to pirates. The strength of the Emperor's Lieutenant should be slightly inferior to that of the generals, but a single general cannot be retained. The Four Emperors should be more than one level stronger than the generals, but there will be no generals who want to escape. In terms of strength accumulation, the combination of the ultimate overlord color, the armed color, the not weak seeing color, the top swordsman ability, the fully developed fruit, and the abnormal body is a complete emperor. Think about it, Whitebeard, who has physical problems on top, almost replaced Akainu when he was besieged. Has the combat power setting collapsed? No, it's because Whitebeard is so strong. Even if he has physical problems, he still deserves to be the number one! Only then can he be worthy of saying that he has shocked the world government and prevented the navy from getting involved in the new world.
1
Can the name not be so fancy?
Protagonist character
The recent chapters have become less and less exciting. How should I put it? The character of the protagonist is becoming more and more ridiculous.
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Official(40)Scraped 19d ago
It was a bit ridiculous later on.
Whitebeard is one of the four emperors. According to the book, there is no problem that Whitebeard is now the best in the world. Then the author arranged for Whitebeard to be the gatekeeper of the new world. After that, he became a little confused. The protagonist's combat power was falsely reported, and then he defeated the Whitebeard Pirates (the protagonist at this time was not even a major general). All captains were defeated by the protagonist. It was just because it was set that Whitebeard did not want to accept and kill the protagonist, so the protagonist killed the protagonist (with difficulty). The opponent was defeated)... (It's such nonsense that the combat power has collapsed. A protagonist who may not even be able to defeat Luffy at the beginning of the new world directly braves the Whitebeard Pirates) is outrageous. Although it is to build momentum for the protagonist, this is really nonsense, but a big The Age of Pirates has appeared, and most of the sea areas in the New World are run rampant by pirates. (The Navy can retain its New World status or is being inserted.) The protagonist builds momentum for the Navy to enter the New World. Even if he gives Whitebeard face, other pirates may not give him face, right? It feels ridiculous that the combat power has collapsed... The protagonist, who has been practicing for several years, suddenly realizes the power of the swordsman, and suddenly realizes the power of the great swordsman. However, because the opponent has an order not to kill the protagonist, all the decades of training are in vain... He is killed by the protagonist every time (with difficulty)... It's very confusing.
Will the protagonist get married?
Will the protagonist change his original gender? I hope she gets married. Don't ask why, because I have a bad taste ( ̄▽ ̄)~*
Is the protagonist definitely a dove?
After reading it, I feel that the protagonist is not a dove, but a hawk, and it is a bit different from the description in the introduction. I don't know if I should continue reading.
Too everyday
I won't give it a rating, although it's not suitable for me, but it doesn't have a very toxic plot. For me personally, there is no need to write in a daily style when writing battle fanfics, as it feels a bit like a running story. Moreover, the strength of the protagonist is too mediocre. He may be the strongest among his peers, but the description gives the impression that his strength is mediocre. There is no specific description of training and fighting. It is always mixed with daily life. The content always mentions the strength in one stroke. It is impossible to see where he is strong or why he has become stronger.
So brave
Using the name of my Great Sword Emperor Yijue Jianhao to write Wu Mei is so courageous. 🐶
The cover is so beautiful
I'm really looking forward to meeting Zoro. I don't know what kind of development will happen if we both belong to the Three-Sword Style.
Let's briefly talk about the strength setting. Everyone is welcome to correct it.
I feel that the strength of the Four Emperors has been weakened. Strength is the most important balance of deterrence among pirates. Otherwise, the new world will not belong to pirates. The strength of the Emperor's Lieutenant should be slightly inferior to that of the generals, but a single general cannot be retained. The Four Emperors should be more than one level stronger than the generals, but there will be no generals who want to escape. In terms of strength accumulation, the combination of the ultimate overlord color, the armed color, the not weak seeing color, the top swordsman ability, the fully developed fruit, and the abnormal body is a complete emperor. Think about it, Whitebeard, who has physical problems on top, almost replaced Akainu when he was besieged. Has the combat power setting collapsed? No, it's because Whitebeard is so strong. Even if he has physical problems, he still deserves to be the number one! Only then can he be worthy of saying that he has shocked the world government and prevented the navy from getting involved in the new world.
1
Can the name not be so fancy?
Protagonist character
The recent chapters have become less and less exciting. How should I put it? The character of the protagonist is becoming more and more ridiculous.
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Good grass It's pretty good. It's a story about transformation and naval route. I originally thought it was a sand sculpture style when I saw the title, but I didn't expect it to be quite good. Transformed into a beautiful girl, she failed to challenge Whitebeard with Crocodile, who was still a woman, and then went to the Navy Headquarters to become Garp's goddaughter. She was training at the Navy Headquarters, the swordsman route. The timeline is that Roger has just been executed, and it is about 20 years before the protagonist group appears.



On the Great Channel, a warship sailed. On the deck was a white-haired woman. She wore a black and white sword, one long and one short, on the sword case at her waist. She also held another famous sword in her hand. Watching the Warring States Period in hand, General Akainu and General Aoji compete for the position of marshal, and predict who will take the upcoming vacant general position. The woman sighed and murmured to herself: "It's impossible to be a general. It's impossible to be a general in this life. I don't know how to be overbearing. I can only live like this as a dove lieutenant general." After saying that, the woman picked up the big bone and meat on the side, took a bite, and shouted vaguely to the adjutant: "Return! If you continue cruising, you will encounter pirates!" --- This is the story of a time traveler on this sea after he obtained the ultimate attainment of the poisonous milk powder character - Blade Shadow inheritance.




Pirate seedlings are okay (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡ ✧*. ٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧*. (∩ᄑ_ᄑ)⊃━☆Love magic (இ﹏இ`。)I am single...




Recommendation index: 🌟🌟🌟🌙 It's pretty good. It's a story about transformation and naval route. I originally thought it was a sand sculpture style based on the title of the book, but I didn't expect it to be pretty good. She transformed into a beautiful girl and failed to challenge Whitebeard with Crocodile, who was still a woman. Then she went to the Navy Headquarters and became Garp's goddaughter. She was training at the Navy Headquarters on the swordsman route. The timeline is that Roger has just been executed, and it is about 20 years before the protagonist group appears. You can take a look. 34













