Douluo: Heavenly Prison Yan Teng, Shen Yun Jiuxiao
by Zhesong
About This Novel
The new book "Douluo: Martial Soul Saint Yanlong, the Holy Light Shines!" >>Released! The martial soul is lacking, because this world cannot tolerate his integrity. Everyone knows that Ma Hongjun's evil fire phoenix is domineering and invincible, but he needs to constantly accumulate evil fire to become stronger. If he loses his virginity, he is no different from a chicken. Luo Sanpao looks like a pig, but after finding the right soul ring, he can evolve into a golden holy dragon. But who remembers the number one martial spirit on the mainland - Thunder Hell Vine. ..... Traveling through Douluo, he became Yun Ting, the son of Thunder Sect Yunyao Sect, and awakened the martial soul Thunder Hell Vine. The sect was in ruins, the secret method was missing, no one could practice to the level of a great soul master, and they all died tragically from the thunder disaster. Don't you see, even Nezha, who resists the thunder, will end up being shattered to pieces. Yun Ting was unwilling to be ordinary and resolutely embarked on the road of soul master. Thunder Tribulation was a sharp blade hanging above his head and the most powerful weapon. A few years later, Yun Ting controlled the sky thunder and could suppress contemporary soul masters with a snap of his fingers. The thunder from the sky shakes the world with supreme power, and I hold the strongest light in the universe. .... Qian Renxue: "It is actually more powerful than my Seraphim. He is worthy of Yun Ting." Tang San: "My Blue Silver Emperor is invincible, how could he be like mud? I can't even touch the corners of his clothes." Tang Hao: "He is a devil. Soul Lord almost killed me. What should I do now - run away!"
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Official(83)Scraped 8d ago
Just watch it for now
I just hope that Qian Renxue and Bibi Dong don't get reconciled. As a saint, she failed to fulfill her responsibilities as a saint and carry forward the Wuhun Palace. As a mother, she failed to fulfill her responsibilities as a mother. This was the mistake Qian Renxue and Qianxun made (someone may want to complain again, saying what an idiot Do you agree with rape? The problem is that Douluo Continent is in the feudal era, and every force grows up in a bloody world. Ordinary people may be killed if they offend a soul master. Don't bring the current laws into it.) But the question is, should we take a look at what Bibi Dong did before? He leaked the secrets of the Spirit Hall to Yu Xiaogang, and also betrayed the Spirit Hall and defected to the Blue Lightning Tyrant Dragon Sect with him. After investing so many resources to cultivate a White-Eyed Wolf, the best way is to use it as a breeding machine to give birth to martial arts talents. Those with good talent will be cultivated. The heroine does not need Fox Na. Bibi Dong's master and apprentice are directly White-Eyed Wolfs. They eat and use the Spirit Hall. They leak the secrets of the Spirit Hall and rebel against the Spirit Hall. It is simply inherited.
Can the author write less scenes where he pretends to be fake and gets slapped in the face? In the last second, the protagonist said that he should concentrate on training to avoid failure later, but in the next second, it turned into a plot of pretending to be a slap in the face... Isn't it good to concentrate on training to improve your strength? You have to slap me in the face, but the protagonist is caught by Juhuaguan for eating immortal products... The protagonist's power is extremely weak now. At most, he only has Dugu Bo and his father to protect him. If he still shows off his strength like this, is he afraid that he won't die quickly enough? The other protagonists were all just doing what they could before they had the strength, but when you were only at level 2, you jumped out and slapped you in the face without thinking, and you didn't even know why you were beaten to death...
As long as the characters' interactions are logically consistent, the heroine can be anyone. The fanfic is a new story, and it does not have to be completely consistent with the original work. The most important thing about Douluo fanfiction is that there are three correct views, repaying kindness, and a people's view of history.
In Chapter 13, Pig's Feet meets Qian Renxue and there's a lot of inner drama! One look writes half a chapter! Take a look and explain half of it! It's all inner drama
After being fed a big fat, the second ring is jumping around here, not concentrating on cultivation, participating in some bullshit birthday party, and going up to fight souls to cheer up everyone. You are afraid that others will not know that you are a genius with extraordinary talents. What is the use of replacing others? If you die, you will die.
Is there a book club? QQ and WeChat are both available.
There are too many plots where bro pretends to be a brat and slaps you in the face, right?
It can be said that of the 110,000 words written, 100,000 words are either pretending to be a slap in the face or on the way to pretending to be a slap in the face. Do they only write pretending to be a slap in the face? Also the Rasengan is a crappy job. And if I'm not mistaken, Ye Qingcheng is the sister of the protagonist's mother, right? If that's true, then don't assign Ye Qingcheng to the protagonist's father. Anyway, I think that's what you wrote. It's disgusting.
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Although I didn't read it, looking at the introduction, Soul Lord almost defeated Tang Hao. I can only say that it is too conservative. Soul Lord should just beat Shura God!
Why did Dou Yi add Gu Yuena's history? Di Tian rescued Silver Dragon from the God Realm. Several ferocious beasts protected her for tens of thousands of years. During the time they protected her, the soul beasts were almost wiped out by humans. As soon as she was born, she gave birth to humans.
Seeking placement, apply for an alias with 100,000 words
Have any bloggers seen it? If you think it's good, I'll update it quickly. It'll be 100,000 words soon.
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Official(83)Scraped 8d ago
Just watch it for now
I just hope that Qian Renxue and Bibi Dong don't get reconciled. As a saint, she failed to fulfill her responsibilities as a saint and carry forward the Wuhun Palace. As a mother, she failed to fulfill her responsibilities as a mother. This was the mistake Qian Renxue and Qianxun made (someone may want to complain again, saying what an idiot Do you agree with rape? The problem is that Douluo Continent is in the feudal era, and every force grows up in a bloody world. Ordinary people may be killed if they offend a soul master. Don't bring the current laws into it.) But the question is, should we take a look at what Bibi Dong did before? He leaked the secrets of the Spirit Hall to Yu Xiaogang, and also betrayed the Spirit Hall and defected to the Blue Lightning Tyrant Dragon Sect with him. After investing so many resources to cultivate a White-Eyed Wolf, the best way is to use it as a breeding machine to give birth to martial arts talents. Those with good talent will be cultivated. The heroine does not need Fox Na. Bibi Dong's master and apprentice are directly White-Eyed Wolfs. They eat and use the Spirit Hall. They leak the secrets of the Spirit Hall and rebel against the Spirit Hall. It is simply inherited.
Can the author write less scenes where he pretends to be fake and gets slapped in the face? In the last second, the protagonist said that he should concentrate on training to avoid failure later, but in the next second, it turned into a plot of pretending to be a slap in the face... Isn't it good to concentrate on training to improve your strength? You have to slap me in the face, but the protagonist is caught by Juhuaguan for eating immortal products... The protagonist's power is extremely weak now. At most, he only has Dugu Bo and his father to protect him. If he still shows off his strength like this, is he afraid that he won't die quickly enough? The other protagonists were all just doing what they could before they had the strength, but when you were only at level 2, you jumped out and slapped you in the face without thinking, and you didn't even know why you were beaten to death...
As long as the characters' interactions are logically consistent, the heroine can be anyone. The fanfic is a new story, and it does not have to be completely consistent with the original work. The most important thing about Douluo fanfiction is that there are three correct views, repaying kindness, and a people's view of history.
In Chapter 13, Pig's Feet meets Qian Renxue and there's a lot of inner drama! One look writes half a chapter! Take a look and explain half of it! It's all inner drama
After being fed a big fat, the second ring is jumping around here, not concentrating on cultivation, participating in some bullshit birthday party, and going up to fight souls to cheer up everyone. You are afraid that others will not know that you are a genius with extraordinary talents. What is the use of replacing others? If you die, you will die.
Is there a book club? QQ and WeChat are both available.
There are too many plots where bro pretends to be a brat and slaps you in the face, right?
It can be said that of the 110,000 words written, 100,000 words are either pretending to be a slap in the face or on the way to pretending to be a slap in the face. Do they only write pretending to be a slap in the face? Also the Rasengan is a crappy job. And if I'm not mistaken, Ye Qingcheng is the sister of the protagonist's mother, right? If that's true, then don't assign Ye Qingcheng to the protagonist's father. Anyway, I think that's what you wrote. It's disgusting.
abstract
Although I didn't read it, looking at the introduction, Soul Lord almost defeated Tang Hao. I can only say that it is too conservative. Soul Lord should just beat Shura God!
Why did Dou Yi add Gu Yuena's history? Di Tian rescued Silver Dragon from the God Realm. Several ferocious beasts protected her for tens of thousands of years. During the time they protected her, the soul beasts were almost wiped out by humans. As soon as she was born, she gave birth to humans.
Seeking placement, apply for an alias with 100,000 words
Have any bloggers seen it? If you think it's good, I'll update it quickly. It'll be 100,000 words soon.
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