
Huo Yuhao Was Succeeded by Erlang Shen at the Beginning!
by Burning Fff
About This Novel
A trace of Erlang Xian Shengzhenjun's spiritual thoughts attached to the young Huo Yuhao, and he was unknown until he was eleven years old. Huo Yuhao's mother's soul was secretly transported to the divine world, and the Zhenjun's true spirit awakened! "I am the Xiansheng True Monarch Erlang Guanjiangkou! Although I have no intention of interfering in human affairs, I cannot allow others to interfere wantonly in the destiny of the human world!" "Your mother is not dead. Her soul has been targeted and taken away by people from the upper world. Seeing that you and I share the same cause and effect, I will give you a mountain-breaking ax! I will teach you the power of reaching heaven! In order to cut down the world and save your mother!" From this! The real invincibility and pinnacle in the history of Douluo Continent was born from this!
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Official(28)Scraped 15d ago
If you don't go to Shrek, you don't know how to write, right?
I obviously refused, but in the end, I got an auditor and got into trouble.
Drive high and go low, I can't understand what's behind, I would have never bought it if I had known better
There are some basic Chinese grammatical errors from the first chapter, and the author doesn't correct them, no wonder no one reads them😑
It's too watery, a fanfic, and it actually advances even slower than the plot of the original work.
After writing so many pieces but not finishing them yet, do you want to stay and be a dog?
Cut three to save the mother.
In one sentence, Huo Yuhao saved his mother by killing three people.
It was really hard at the beginning. Douluo fandoms basically all have this kind of mindless plot, and the others are just mindless recruiting girls. This one is even more outrageous for letting oneself take risks in order to recruit girls. He also wants Ling to help fight against the White Tiger Mansion, so why? To put it bluntly, there is no shortage of Ling, a novice, when he can fight, and her help can only be together and become a community. Don't they have their own family? Why offend the Xingluo royal family? If you want revenge, can you take it yourself? 😐 #The most speechless novel plot#
The writing is pretty good, especially the part about killing Dai Huabin, which is simply the finishing touch. It's the first time I've seen such a dazzling plot in a Douluo fanfic, but the other chapters are a bit watery and the quality has dropped a bit, and after seeing such dazzling operations, the subsequent plots are a bit unbearable.
The writing style is so bad, why do you like to write and talk like this and think like this?
Huo Yuhao said so and thought so Gu Yuena said so and thought so Xuanzi said so and thought so Three-eyed Jin Ni said so and thought so Yan Shaozhe said so and thought so Dai Mubai said so and thought so Tang San said so and thought so Tianmeng Bingsi said so and thought so Ice Emperor said so and thought so Everyone is saying this and thinking this It's not me who says that the plot of your novel is okay, but the writing is so poor that I don't even know how to describe it. It's all said and thought like this.
The Falling Immortal Sword is the magic weapon of Tongtian Patriarch Shangqing Daozu. How could it be passed down to Master Yuding after the great catastrophe of becoming a god?
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Community(0)
Official(28)Scraped 15d ago
If you don't go to Shrek, you don't know how to write, right?
I obviously refused, but in the end, I got an auditor and got into trouble.
Drive high and go low, I can't understand what's behind, I would have never bought it if I had known better
There are some basic Chinese grammatical errors from the first chapter, and the author doesn't correct them, no wonder no one reads them😑
It's too watery, a fanfic, and it actually advances even slower than the plot of the original work.
After writing so many pieces but not finishing them yet, do you want to stay and be a dog?
Cut three to save the mother.
In one sentence, Huo Yuhao saved his mother by killing three people.
It was really hard at the beginning. Douluo fandoms basically all have this kind of mindless plot, and the others are just mindless recruiting girls. This one is even more outrageous for letting oneself take risks in order to recruit girls. He also wants Ling to help fight against the White Tiger Mansion, so why? To put it bluntly, there is no shortage of Ling, a novice, when he can fight, and her help can only be together and become a community. Don't they have their own family? Why offend the Xingluo royal family? If you want revenge, can you take it yourself? 😐 #The most speechless novel plot#
The writing is pretty good, especially the part about killing Dai Huabin, which is simply the finishing touch. It's the first time I've seen such a dazzling plot in a Douluo fanfic, but the other chapters are a bit watery and the quality has dropped a bit, and after seeing such dazzling operations, the subsequent plots are a bit unbearable.
The writing style is so bad, why do you like to write and talk like this and think like this?
Huo Yuhao said so and thought so Gu Yuena said so and thought so Xuanzi said so and thought so Three-eyed Jin Ni said so and thought so Yan Shaozhe said so and thought so Dai Mubai said so and thought so Tang San said so and thought so Tianmeng Bingsi said so and thought so Ice Emperor said so and thought so Everyone is saying this and thinking this It's not me who says that the plot of your novel is okay, but the writing is so poor that I don't even know how to describe it. It's all said and thought like this.
The Falling Immortal Sword is the magic weapon of Tongtian Patriarch Shangqing Daozu. How could it be passed down to Master Yuding after the great catastrophe of becoming a god?









