Douluo: the Golden Crow Falls from the Sky, and the Dark Feathers Dance Wildly!

This should be the third book I have written. The first Almighty Assistant has been unfinished, and the second Ice Butterfly died young and I collapsed while writing it. This third book Golden Crow is the longest one I have written. Although it has many bad points, I am able to write it until now only because of the follow-up and encouragement of several old readers. There are still some follow-up contents in this book, but the results are not very good, hovering on the edge of guarantee. I think it's because of the double edition, the update time of this book is a bit messy, and I'm trying my best to adjust the status. The protagonist of Golden Crow is the dark savior, and I buried a lot of foreshadowing. Some readers may be able to spot it, while others may not, and they may think that it is normal for me to write about it in the mist. There is also the issue of complaining about my having too many female protagonists, but in fact the setting of this female protagonist was added later, and I didn't think about it so much earlier (you can read the previous setting comments for this). As for the poisonous points, I am gradually deleting some of them, but some involve too much content. If I change too much, the preface and the follower will be inconsistent, and it requires some energy to work on it. This book should probably be finished next month. It was originally planned to have one million words, but the current situation seems to be unable to reach the expected number of words. It won't be unfinished (but judging from the data, it's almost the same). The outline is complete. This book must be finished. I think it will be my first officially completed book. The original plan was to have a trilogy: Jinwu, Baize, and Kunpeng, but in the current situation, Kunpeng may die (Dousan Tongren). Finally, I would like to thank those book friends who have continued to read and encourage me. Without you, I would most likely have stopped writing. Writing novels is a kind of love. I wanted to highlight the stories in my heart, but my writing skills were not good enough. In the end, I ended up in a mess. I just want to say sorry here.

The trial period is about to end. Now you can recommend the book after reading 50,000 words on QQ. If anyone likes this book, can you help recommend it? Thank you very much.

I want to know if the soul beast clan can do anything about it. Snow Ice Emperor and the other two could not take advantage of Huo Yuhao. The Emerald Swan Hell Demon Dragon currently has no target, so you can try it out, as well as Gu Yuena. Meng Hongchen Xu Jiujiu Jiang Nannan. Zhang Lexuan. Xiaoxiao. There is no wind in the sky. That's all for now, I can't remember many of them. I think the soul beast clan can also be organized into a few.

These two are characters in Throne of the Divine Seal, and they are relatively well-known supporting characters. The anime of Divine Throne is pretty good😘

I saw a lot of people asking me to add a heroine. I reiterate that Sheng Cai'er is impossible. I haven't thought about the specific plot of Jiang Nannan (to be precise, I haven't thought about how Xu Sanshi will die). I don't necessarily have to look at the later plot planning for Xu Jiujiu. As for the other ones, I haven't planned them yet. In the world of Divine Seal Throne, there are no others like Leng Xiao and Yue Ye. Qian Renxue will be resurrected and return in a special form. The protagonist will not join any force, not the Holy Spirit Cult, nor the Shrek Academy of the Sun and Moon Empire. If you have any comments or ideas, you can leave a message under this comment. I will reply when I see it. Finally, I would like to ask for further reading, recommendation votes and monthly votes. (If you are a member, please let me know so that I can remove the pictures and update them every month)

How to say it? The author is obviously screening readers and no one with weak resistance to poison is worthy of reading his book. Many of the plots are unreasonable, but there are a lot of fucking reminders in the comment area below, but they just ignore him.

Now I can only give four stars to this book. First of all, the content is too little. If you look at the works of the same period as yours, they are all in the testing period, but they are very good in terms of word count. They all have 60,000 words as a base. Then, the subject matter of this book is pretty good. The copy of Zhutian Liujia is very attractive, but if you want to choose this kind of flow, you have to deal with what the protagonist does between the various planes, and don't be wrong. Finally, I will give you some suggestions. There are some settings that I didn't understand when I was writing. I suggest you learn more from the original works, or make your own private settings, but the premise of your private settings must be reasonable. When I read many fan fiction, I often see that their private settings are wrong. You can ask for your writing to be as good as you want. I just ask you to be crazy during the trial period. If you do this, you can enter the new book list, and then you can enter the membership list later. You will have better motivation to write, and readers can give you more recommendation votes and monthly tickets.

There is a big gap between anime and manga. Anime is like a royal sister, and manga is like a girl. But I still think the manga is better. Does anyone have any private pictures? Share them.

You can do whatever the system tells you to do, and there will be penalties for mission failure. This setting feels bad.

It feels so-so, with too much leveling and combat power, and the character design of the protagonist is not that good (this protagonist is like a tool, everything is arranged by the system, and I am not punished), the soul master is able to rob Xu Jiujiu, I call you the protagonist among the protagonists (the princess of a country is still the most talented soul hunter, let alone the title, at least there is a soul saint in Contra, not to mention that Xu Jiujiu is also a quasi-soul master, you can rob her) Why? Just because you are the protagonist) The key is that the protagonist kidnaps her. Not only is she not afraid of anger and fear, but she is blushing. I am embarrassed. God of love, you are not the Douluo who fell, but the Douluo who evolved on your own.