Douluo: Martial Spirit Amethyst Winged Lion, Burning the Sky and Refining the Sun

It's a bit toxic, I've only read Chapter 25 so far. Let's talk about what I think is poisonous! First, forcefully slap Yu Xiaogang in the face. Yu Xiaogang wants to teach a genius soul master to prove it for him, but you have to know what kind of genius soul master he wants to teach? He thinks that the genius soul master is the kind of obvious waste soul, but the innate soul power must be at least higher than the eighth level, and he must be the kind of soul master from the countryside who has no knowledge. However, the author allows Yu Xiaogang to appear in the team where the teacher is the protagonist, which is very unreasonable. After all, Yu Xiaogang is just a little conceited, arrogant and arrogant. He is not really stupid. Yu Xiaogang must understand. The protagonist's father's level must know the true level of his theories. Maybe the author wanted to add a slap-in-the-face and Xiaogang scene to make the novel more exciting, so I think this is acceptable to Xiaodu. The second one is about the forced marriage of the protagonist's mother. It was really an unexpected engagement! Healing-type auxiliary soul masters like the Ye family are destined to have both sides and will not take sides easily. It would be better for you to just write a marriage letter, skip the emotional description, and tie the Ye family into the motorcade. And you didn't explain a few days before Chapter 25 why the Ye family would agree. Is it because the protagonist's mother and the Ye family's mistress are good friends? It's really ridiculous. Forcibly adding such a setting is a poisonous point. The third point is the plot of forced marriage and slap in the face. What year has this been? Do you want to highlight the protagonist's crooked-mouthed dragon king character? Speechless

I have an idea. I wonder if the author has thought about fighting dragon warriors? Let's try the Tianyi Lion King's Demon-Breaking Fist👍

Before reading it, I still wanted to say, don't stress about the level, okay? The third young master of the Tang family is the originator of Douluo fanfic, and can also be said to be the originator of Douluo Shuangwen, especially the more he writes later, the more it looks like fanfic. What you are playing with now are all the leftovers from his play. To defeat certain soul beasts (Dark Gold Terrorclaw Bear...), You have to go out to possess the soul bone, and then you have to go to the Ice and Fire Eyes to get the fairy grass, and the protagonist's cultivation level will improve quickly. It can be said that the protagonists of many fan fictions cannot compare with the improved cultivation speed of the protagonists of the original works. This is very difficult to break down. Especially for Dou Er, Huo Yuhao spent a lot of time researching soul guides and became a god at the age of 26. It was not his original chance to become him (Ice Jade Scorpion Soul Bone, Dark Gold Terrorclaw Bear Soul Bone, Snow Emperor Embryo). Finally, I still hope you can write enjoyable articles.

This is a novel with no intelligence at all. There is a grandpa who worships in the temple. He doesn't know about it and keeps his grandson in danger. It's funny. It's not that the main character has died long ago. He jumps around repeatedly.

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The whole teacher still had to compete in martial arts, and Yu Xiaogang was brought in, and they fought for several chapters. The soul kings with formal soul ring standards and the nobles with some connections all knew that there was something wrong with Yu Xiaogang's master's name, otherwise he would have been hiding in Notting City? The century-old soul beasts have all caused soul shocks. The key is not the spiritual soul beasts. The complete information of the God Realm is almost complete. Everyone who participated in the Divine Examination knows it. At this time, one has not even broken through level 99. At this time, Bibi Dong and Qian Daoliu, who are still suppressing the evil thoughts of Rakshasa, can detect the descent of the God King.

I don't know why you like Dugu Yan so much, but you still want to become a god despite her talent. In the original work, she is so crazy when she can play poison, and I don't know what is so crazy about her. In the original work, her talent as a Titled Douluo is enough to make her disgusting.

Is this a 25-year-old article? Why does it feel like I have returned to more than ten years ago? The classic protagonist Long Aotian even made an engagement this time. The author's writing style is really bad. He can't write conflicts at all.

The protagonist is over level 50 Tang San is still level 30. Without the opportunity of fairy grass, what can Tang San do to compare with the protagonist? Doesn't it feel superior to fight against the inexorable Bluesilver Grass? How can he be burned down by a fire? Why do he have to wait for someone to become a god? Like Qian Renxue? Can you kill me or not?

Second setting, add a hidden world and lose sight of it