After Traveling Through Tokyo for Twelve Years, I Found Out That Qingmei is Shijie
About This Novel
[Day 1 of time travel, Japan, Tokyo, I have just turned five years old, good news, my family is very rich, and the little Ome in kimono is very cute. ] [Day 3, bad news. In 1983, Japan's bubble economy was about to collapse. It happened that my family was engaged in real estate...] [Day 10, damn! There is a system! My childhood is saved! Learn this skill to make money! This skill improves intelligence, learn it! This skill can see through lies, learn it! And combat skills? The price is too expensive, and using it will only increase the cost of medical expenses and compensation, and do not learn. ] [In the sixth year, the real estate economy collapsed and many companies went bankrupt. However, my family's business was booming, investing in schools, building bridges, and even taking over the bankrupt clan's industry. It was time for us to separate and feel proud! ] [In the sixth year and three months, a woman from the Zong family remarried her father. The new cheap cousin was very cute. ] [In the fifteenth year, at the opening ceremony of the university, I met Qingmei, whom I hadn't seen for a long time. She said her name was Liangli. ] Is it too late to learn magic now? No one told me earlier that this was Xingyue!
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Official(7)Scraped 8d ago
How to say it? In fact, as the first author, the writing is okay, but there is a problem. I always like to weaken the protagonist, and then the things the protagonist has to do are too weak and incompetent. This kind of inconsistency makes everyone feel uncomfortable, especially when a plug-in with the same origin comes out and the front and rear are too divided.
To be honest, I feel uncomfortable reading your novel.
The emotional rendering is not intense enough. To be honest, this book does have the heterogeneous writing style of Nasu Mushroom, but there is almost no emotional rendering. As a result, when reading, you cannot feel the beyond-life-death stimulation generated by the heterogeneous impact of Xingyue's cognition. To be honest, this is not the effect that the author wanted to achieve when writing. It feels like the character chef is writing a love letter to his favorite character. That's right, It's You Two Ritual. It's just for this vinegar that the dumpling of Xingyue's world view is made. The author's creative desire should be satisfied, but as a reader, it is really exhausting. Hey, forget it, this is the author's book, it is good to satisfy yourself. If I have to say the real shortcoming, it is the portrayal of the protagonist, who is almost wantless. All the actions only give a perfunctory reason to save the tragedy, but they do not depict the real feeling of saving others. In other words, it is too nihilistic. This kind of protagonist really can't feel happy after being involved in emotions. This is why I said that I was exhausted watching it. There is not much positive feedback, so I can only chew hard.
The update is so slow. Is this a mistake?
Author, are you serious about this introduction? No matter how slow the reaction is. You should also know where you are when Fujino comes.
The first chapter of the opening chapter is very abstract.
It can only be said that in the past, it was only barely visible, but now it is ordinary food. Looking forward to the next book
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Official(7)Scraped 8d ago
How to say it? In fact, as the first author, the writing is okay, but there is a problem. I always like to weaken the protagonist, and then the things the protagonist has to do are too weak and incompetent. This kind of inconsistency makes everyone feel uncomfortable, especially when a plug-in with the same origin comes out and the front and rear are too divided.
To be honest, I feel uncomfortable reading your novel.
The emotional rendering is not intense enough. To be honest, this book does have the heterogeneous writing style of Nasu Mushroom, but there is almost no emotional rendering. As a result, when reading, you cannot feel the beyond-life-death stimulation generated by the heterogeneous impact of Xingyue's cognition. To be honest, this is not the effect that the author wanted to achieve when writing. It feels like the character chef is writing a love letter to his favorite character. That's right, It's You Two Ritual. It's just for this vinegar that the dumpling of Xingyue's world view is made. The author's creative desire should be satisfied, but as a reader, it is really exhausting. Hey, forget it, this is the author's book, it is good to satisfy yourself. If I have to say the real shortcoming, it is the portrayal of the protagonist, who is almost wantless. All the actions only give a perfunctory reason to save the tragedy, but they do not depict the real feeling of saving others. In other words, it is too nihilistic. This kind of protagonist really can't feel happy after being involved in emotions. This is why I said that I was exhausted watching it. There is not much positive feedback, so I can only chew hard.
The update is so slow. Is this a mistake?
Author, are you serious about this introduction? No matter how slow the reaction is. You should also know where you are when Fujino comes.
The first chapter of the opening chapter is very abstract.
It can only be said that in the past, it was only barely visible, but now it is ordinary food. Looking forward to the next book
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