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Jiang Yan interceded with Shouhou and caused trouble for the male protagonist, but he seemed to be unaware of it and would only make peace among the male protagonist and his disciples. The male protagonist is portrayed as a man who is decisive in killing and has a bright mind, so Jiang Yan intercedes with Shouhou several times just to advance the plot, and it feels like the logic collapses. The male protagonist competed twice, leading to the Upper House chasing him. The problem was that Han Li knew that he was not strong enough, so he basically kept to himself. The male protagonist doesn't know what he can rely on to be so carefree. In the end, I still relied on the support and opportunities provided by the hospital owner. Although the logic of sending out immortality seems to be logical, without the original plan of the hospital master, the male protagonist would have been just a martial artist for the rest of his life. And the male protagonist's apprentice looks like a cocky little rooster who has never experienced hardship. How many times has the male protagonist run for the secret book? This rooster is a family member who was rescued and then relied on it, so he is lucky. It's quite a failure here. The male protagonist himself used force to suppress the gang and used it to his advantage, and now he has an apprentice, and the relationship is unclear. But it's no wonder that if you are saved by Ma Yun, you can take advantage of the opportunity to worship Ma Yun as your adoptive father and build a relationship. Who would not count this kind of good thing that reaches the sky in half a step. Pity the brothers who fought hard beside the protagonist, but in the end they were not as lucky as the rooster who clung to him halfway. In addition, the description of the relationship between the protagonist and his senior brothers always gives the impression that although there is a bunch of mud, no one can use it, so just close your eyes and wipe the wall. That Qin or something held an unobstructed conference, and the protagonist was angry and refused to argue, which gave people this feeling. There is also the protagonist's marriage. The protagonist has no brains on his own, and he has to rely on his 14-year-old apprentice to help him. Even a 14-year-old understands this. This rooster must have eight hundred tricks. I don't know when it became popular to be coy. I don't do anything on my own, I have to ask my parents, brothers, sisters-in-law, aunts, and even apprentices to come to ensure the matchmaking. I am afraid that the protagonist will be empty, lonely and cold at night. In the part where the protagonist gets the fate of immortality, and the master brother gets the inner demon, and each reveals his or her inner feelings, I feel very speechless. The protagonist, the eldest brother, is quite a failure, and they basically have no intention of returning. Is it for the sake of cutting off the so-called mortal connection later. But he also accepted a disciple with a deep connection with the world, which is really hard to judge.

In my conscience, I like the ones released after chapter 90😘

It's going very well from now on, keep up the good work

I can't stand it anymore... O_o I don't want to read it anymore

How do people see this name and profile? If they are unclear and unclear, they will not want to come in and take a look. How can we retain people?

Ah, that's it. I'm a bit unsatisfied.

After reading the first ten chapters, I can see that it is a masterpiece. The author has good writing skills and has done a lot of research on ancient Chinese prose. It's worth reading carefully, I hope the standard will be maintained in the future. The author should have read Journey to the West and Water Margin, and there is a strong shadow of Water Margin in the front. But really speaking, Water Margin and cultivating immortals are not compatible. Cultivating immortals requires freedom and freedom, so most good cultivating immortals are mostly freehand, focusing on describing the psychological changes and life experiences of the supporting characters to set off the protagonist's strong Taoist heart. Seeking immortality is essentially going against nature. Without firm belief, you will definitely not be able to achieve enlightenment. If you rewrite Jiang Hu and write about love, resentment, love and hatred, then it is not a fairy tale.