Taoist Master Wants to Live Forever
by Q
About This Novel
"The world we see may not be all it is!" "The past years were cut off by unknown beings. Our history does not only last for five thousand years. Perhaps infinite years ago, immortals and gods appeared in the world, and the heavens were eternal. The first emperor really lived forever and lived forever. Zhang Jiao really rebelled against the sky and wanted to establish the yellow sky." Wen Lianggong, who had eaten his hands green, looked up at the sky. The real world that had been cut off in the past appeared in front of him. Immortals and gods died violently, peeping secretly, and the whole world seemed to choose people to eat. My spirit began to weaken and I couldn't control my body. I... Can get skill points and become stronger by killing people? ! Can you still contact the incomplete memory and fall asleep every week? ! "Fake, everything is fake!" In reality, when Wen Lianggong heard this, he woke up with his eyes wide open, showing his back, and said angrily: "Shu Zian dares to break my Taoist heart?!"
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Official(24)Scraped 2mo ago
The first three chapters are bullshit, with illogical logic and confusing sentences. This is a piece of shit for a serious person. I was immediately persuaded to quit, and I didn't care about the rest of it. Just like the first three chapters, the rest of it wasn't that good either. I thought this was an old author? That's it? If you know how to cook, practice more. If you don't know how to cook, learn more.
In the first ten chapters, there is no plot, and I am completely confused. The protagonist is making crazy jokes on the Internet, and the author is crazy about the word count. I don't see any point in it at all. The plot doesn't advance at all.
When you see how you can make money by making short videos, you should quit.
What are you writing about? The protagonist is the same as the original animal, with nothing but hooks.
After going around and around for a long time, it's the third way!
What the hell, I thought the real world was going to be a big deal. It started with moving the mountain to a blessed place and it laid the foundation for about 20 chapters, and then it ended in one chapter. . . I looked lonely.
It's a game that opens high and moves low. The sense of immersion is okay in the front, but the combat power collapses in the back, and even the original world becomes a world of high martial arts. I can't even imagine that the historical development of the world of Gaowu is the same as that of Blue Star. It's really fascinating.
Practice narrative writing more
The sentences are not fluent, and the front and back are severely separated. The previous paragraph is still talking about something, and suddenly jumps to other places without any foreshadowing. It is randomly interspersed.
There's so much nonsense. You have to talk about it for a long time when you can clearly explain it in one sentence.
One thing to say! It really sucks! It doesn't end well! ! I can only say barely!
In fact, I can continue writing! The realm after the saint! The story behind! It's better for the protagonist to break through again! Come to the real world! Most functions of the system are disabled! It's like a Greek myth! Only when the san value is lost can humans see the truth of the world! I can only say regret and pity
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Official(24)Scraped 2mo ago
The first three chapters are bullshit, with illogical logic and confusing sentences. This is a piece of shit for a serious person. I was immediately persuaded to quit, and I didn't care about the rest of it. Just like the first three chapters, the rest of it wasn't that good either. I thought this was an old author? That's it? If you know how to cook, practice more. If you don't know how to cook, learn more.
In the first ten chapters, there is no plot, and I am completely confused. The protagonist is making crazy jokes on the Internet, and the author is crazy about the word count. I don't see any point in it at all. The plot doesn't advance at all.
When you see how you can make money by making short videos, you should quit.
What are you writing about? The protagonist is the same as the original animal, with nothing but hooks.
After going around and around for a long time, it's the third way!
What the hell, I thought the real world was going to be a big deal. It started with moving the mountain to a blessed place and it laid the foundation for about 20 chapters, and then it ended in one chapter. . . I looked lonely.
It's a game that opens high and moves low. The sense of immersion is okay in the front, but the combat power collapses in the back, and even the original world becomes a world of high martial arts. I can't even imagine that the historical development of the world of Gaowu is the same as that of Blue Star. It's really fascinating.
Practice narrative writing more
The sentences are not fluent, and the front and back are severely separated. The previous paragraph is still talking about something, and suddenly jumps to other places without any foreshadowing. It is randomly interspersed.
There's so much nonsense. You have to talk about it for a long time when you can clearly explain it in one sentence.
One thing to say! It really sucks! It doesn't end well! ! I can only say barely!
In fact, I can continue writing! The realm after the saint! The story behind! It's better for the protagonist to break through again! Come to the real world! Most functions of the system are disabled! It's like a Greek myth! Only when the san value is lost can humans see the truth of the world! I can only say regret and pity
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