
The Legend of Kirigakure Kisame
About This Novel
The new book "Sasuke's Trajectory of Indra" has been released. Welcome everyone to take a look at when the samurai reappeared in the world of ninjas, and when the natural energy continued to revive. A hundred ghosts walk at night, and the gods seem to be more than just legends. Goldfinger? That's not all I am. --Dried persimmon Kisame. Book club group 1087527180, please give me some advice. Thank you everyone for liking Kisame.
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Official(15)Scraped 16d ago
The first few dozen chapters, which I thought were pretty good, started to suck later on. The main character didn't even appear in more than ten chapters, and all the chapters were devoted to supporting characters. It was very boring. Then there are the extra chapters. The extra chapters are interspersed with the main text, and then more than a dozen extra chapters are released. Later, the extra chapters are even more than the main text, and the extra chapters also appear in several worlds.
Kisame
When I think of Kisame, I think of his "girlfriend" who was killed. When I think of her, I know that there is Mizukage behind him, and there is Madara (Obito) behind Mizukage. I have to give Samehada's ex, "Sage Power" is very powerful, Kishimoto tricked the protagonist.
Make a book club
It doesn't matter if you really can't continue writing. This book is too popular. You can change it to another one.
The story of Demon Sword felt boring as soon as it started.
Divide it into sections
The content is generally okay, but the paragraphs in the article look annoying.
What you wrote doesn't even look like Naruto, you wrote a samurai biography.
Written by Samurai
What a Muramasa
I seem to have seen Muramasa in many anime.
Smash Varudo
The wood is big, the wood is big, the wood is big, the wood is big.
This section
What about your writing? Compositions don't have such paragraphs, right?
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Community(0)
Official(15)Scraped 16d ago
The first few dozen chapters, which I thought were pretty good, started to suck later on. The main character didn't even appear in more than ten chapters, and all the chapters were devoted to supporting characters. It was very boring. Then there are the extra chapters. The extra chapters are interspersed with the main text, and then more than a dozen extra chapters are released. Later, the extra chapters are even more than the main text, and the extra chapters also appear in several worlds.
Kisame
When I think of Kisame, I think of his "girlfriend" who was killed. When I think of her, I know that there is Mizukage behind him, and there is Madara (Obito) behind Mizukage. I have to give Samehada's ex, "Sage Power" is very powerful, Kishimoto tricked the protagonist.
Make a book club
It doesn't matter if you really can't continue writing. This book is too popular. You can change it to another one.
The story of Demon Sword felt boring as soon as it started.
Divide it into sections
The content is generally okay, but the paragraphs in the article look annoying.
What you wrote doesn't even look like Naruto, you wrote a samurai biography.
Written by Samurai
What a Muramasa
I seem to have seen Muramasa in many anime.
Smash Varudo
The wood is big, the wood is big, the wood is big, the wood is big.
This section
What about your writing? Compositions don't have such paragraphs, right?

















