Pirate: as Long as You Talk Tough, You Won't Be Beaten to Death

The ability to be funny, the serious plot, and... The speedy updates made the foreigners next door think we looked down upon it when they saw it! Give me updates, 10 updates a day.

There are many common sense errors. I couldn't find all the author information. If you don't know how to write, at least read a few more fan fictions.

Language fruit? Shouldn't it be to express the law in words or to express it in writing? Whether you are holding the Heavenly Constitution in your mouth or calling the wind and rain, this god-level fruit that combines words and sounds can become a god just by playing with it, right? Why do you have to make it a bragging fruit? You have described being able to resurrect with full health on the spot, is it possible to imitate the heavens and the earth? Referring to the ground becoming steel? Divide the land into a river? Five elements escape? Control the five thunders? Midas touch? Is King Kong indestructible? Flying to the sky and escaping to the earth? Shatter the void? Physical immortality? The soul is immortal? Traveling through time and space? Create the world?

I don't understand. It's a bit too fast to become a great swordsman after a fight between a weakling and swordsman Momo. Zoro's swordsmanship talent is at least in the top ten in the world of One Piece. He still has the most swordsman country, Wano Country's standard inheritance, and a great swordsman. It took more than ten years to teach personally to become a swordsman. If the protagonist upgrades at a speed that is obviously lower than the level after a few hours, the great swordsman's other physical domineering will go from being unsightly before the fight to the standard Yonko level. Is it reasonable for swordsmanship to be a great swordsman? The target of the Yonko-level swordsmanship should be the Supreme Swordsman. According to the author's setting, there are two levels above the Supreme Swordsman. According to the protagonist's leveling speed, it should be the penultimate level. In the end, it is still the Great Swordsman.

Has the author watched One Piece? When writing a fanfic, one must at least have a clear understanding of One Piece's combat power settings, why he is a great swordsman, and how old is the protagonist?

The protagonist should be bragging, not being tough-talking. Being stiff-necked means that when others doubt something, you always stand firm on what you say and believe, no matter what the truth is.

The combat power is extremely stretched, chaotic and disorderly

There's nothing wrong with the logic, but the plot is very boring. You'll know what's coming from the beginning, but I don't know what's so exciting about it?

The pace of the novel is too big and it's easy to get carried away. It depends on how you write it later.

It's great to watch without thinking, and of course it's not very brainless. It's concise and has a good word count, which is worthy of praise.