Douluo: Hang up and Become an Immortal

What are some things that I can't stand to watch so far? The protagonist is 12 or 13 years old, and he is over 50 levels, but he still goes to Shi Lai Ke, and asks Qin Ming for his achievements and qualifications, and gives him resources. If he succeeds in Shi Lai Ke, he will not be loyal, okay? Then there is Dugu Yan and Yu Tianheng. Dugu Yan has such high qualifications, can he still like Yu Tianheng? From now on, you will just help others support their wives, and is Yu Tianheng still worthy of Dugu Yan at that time? Even if you don't want to learn from Tang San, you can. If you don't write this paragraph, writing this is really stupid. I really can't stand it. Then there is the current magic circle. Is it useless to have that magic circle now? There is also an external soul bone. Just attach the soul weapon to the outside, or you can assemble the one-word battle armor and two-word battle armor. Why are you going to fix these? Is it useful? , Ugh, really speechless. I'm really speechless. You said that you want to improve your strength. I understand that this will not be of much use to you to improve your strength. What are you doing here? I originally wanted to give you a five-star rating, but I'll give you a pass.

It should be there. I searched many times and they all said it was there, but it was defective and could not break through the title Douluo.

I originally thought this book was quite good, although a bit bland. But! First, there is no need for the protagonist to go to Shrek when he is 12-13 years old and level 59, saying that Qin Ming has the qualifications to kidnap Qin Ming. In the end, not only that, they also cooperated with Shrek to provide funds for construction. Shrek required graduates to join the family, which was unnecessary. The loyalty of those who graduate from Shrek cannot be guaranteed at all (not to mention the sense of belonging after joining the clan, the sense of belonging to Shrek in the early stage must be higher than that of the broken clan, and there is the possibility of being bribed by threats and other kinds of separation), just take the original Qin Ming Speaking of it (using the original work just to explain the above-mentioned possible hidden dangers, I know the fan author will make a second guess), won't he leave Tiandou and return to Shrek later (although things happen for a reason), but there is no guarantee that he will not leave the Po clan because of "things happen for a reason". In my opinion, if you want to be a genius, it is better for the family to open its own academy. After all, Shrek was built by outsiders. Oh no, it can be said that it was not established. It has a broken courtyard with no resources. Second, the hook given to Dugu Yan is very unreasonable. Two magical medicines (that is, fairy medicine, one is taken when he is three years old, and one needs to be worn every time he obtains a soul ring. If I don't write about other herbs, I will treat them as non-existent). Not only can Dugu Yan's martial soul evolve (Jade Scale Snake → Emerald Dragon), but also make him a pseudo-innate soul power level 20 (directly level 20 after obtaining one ring at level 10). Upgrading is also fast. Dugu Yan is six or seven years younger than the protagonist. The protagonist is fifteen or sixteen years old and is over eighty years old. Dugu Yan is level forty (the protagonist is idle in the system to gain experience without training. After level sixty, he also incorporates the soul bone and soul ring of the Ice and Fire Dragon King). Third, the protagonist regards Dugu Yan as his sister, and Dugu Yan and Yu Tianheng are a couple. First of all, it's okay for the protagonist to regard Dugu Yan as his sister. It's understandable that he doesn't want to write about the deterioration of family ties like Gou San. However, even though Dugu Yan and Yu Tianheng were a couple in the original work, they are also described as a couple here, which is very jarring. The protagonist gives Dugu Yan a leap in qualifications, but Yu Tianheng cannot keep up and is not worthy. Whether Dugu Yan is worthy of it or not is another matter. I saw that I was going to sea to go to Poseidon Island (the protagonist played for Dugu Yan as Poseidon, so I stopped watching) and I brought Yu Tianheng with me. I guessed that he would bring various resources with him later. Is it interesting? Help Yu Tianheng support his wife and work as a nanny for Yu Tianheng. Not disgusting? Fourth, the protagonist couldn't bear that Qian Renxue was wasting his time and went undercover. When they met for the first time, the martial arts of both parties resonated (I didn't understand how a seraph would resonate with a gun, it was very baffling), and he revealed that he was a fake prince (without revealing his true identity). After a few days, he revealed that he was from the Wuhun Palace when they met for the second time and allowed Qian Renxue to recover. The real person also told her a bloody story about her parents (didn't say that her father was killed by her mother), and not long after they met for the third time (it seemed that she was given a magic medicine during this meeting, and she accepted it just because she was a friend, was it awkward?). Later, Qian Renxue used Xue Qinghe to steal Poseidon's treasure (what did Hanhai forget) and then pretended to be Xue Qinghe and disappeared. Later, I will take Qian Renxue with me to Poseidon Island. This photo is inexplicable. What is the relationship between the protagonist and Qian Renxue? Help her like this? Fifth, one year after the Qianxunji incident, Haotian sealed the mountain, and the Po clan broke away from independence. The protagonist's soul ring ratio was completely exposed (yellow, purple, black, black, red). The reaction from all parties was not great. Qibao clearly wanted to win over the Po clan and went to the Po clan. Lan Dian said that he should not offend the clan. Qian Daoliu was just surprised and ignored him, treating the protagonist as a stepping stone for Qian Renxue and letting her handle it. The description of this plot is too bland, and the protagonist's soul ring can be said to be unprecedented. After all, Qiandaoliu knows God, and if he knows this ratio, he will have some connection with God and take action (purely a personal opinion) I have only read about seventy chapters. Generally speaking, this novel is relatively plain, and the plot has no ups and downs.

I wrote it myself, it must be great

Is this novel pornographic? No one has commented!

You don't help me comment and raise the popularity. If I get cold, who will give you poison?

The details are also described well, and there is no forced wave. It is much better than those people who are in their thirties and forties who show off everywhere and still do it under the nose of their account.

Is it the single heroine Qian Renxue? The author is great

Very good article worth reading

I saw Qibao Xiancao and didn't send it to me. Qibao is not a good thing either.