All Things Sissy System

Many people are good at writing gorgeous words, and articles piled up with gorgeous words can only be described in two words: flashy... However, this can also reflect the depth of the author's literary skills. A truly good article should be able to touch people's hearts and arouse people's resonance. This requires the author to maintain a sensitive heart, touch and comprehend life, carefully observe the people or things around him, and then use the moments you feel moved to turn them into words and write them into your article. Also, the plots of most of the novels you mentioned are old-fashioned and vulgar. I think life is like this, the same story is always going on over and over again. We are also people in this world, how can we not fall into the cliché? However, I still believe that those touches will still touch our hearts. Finally, I sincerely hope you can write a good article as soon as possible. Expect......

After all, this is the first book, so the author just needs to practice, and then find out his own shortcomings by comparing his own writing with other good works. I can't accurately describe the shortcomings of this book. I can only say that the opening chapter is not attractive and cannot let readers get involved, and the fourth chapter should be the first chapter, right? Anyway, when I saw this, it became very messy, and it is even more difficult to write a story that readers like with this kind of invincible novel. If you want to write an invincible novel well, it is best to write about daily life, and the main line of your novel is not clear, and it does not say what the protagonist wants to do. Generally speaking, the novel at least knows that the protagonist wants revenge, becomes strong, survives, and is a sister. Or just for fun and then do something, you suddenly infiltrate the system, but the system does not have any requirements, and then randomly enter the main god space. Anyway, in general, readers cannot be substituted into it. If they cannot be substituted into the plot of the novel, reading the novel will seem dry. It took me 30 minutes to read these chapters of yours. Come on! The more you practice, the better you will be at writing.

After reading this book, I took a long breath, closed the book gently, and caressed the smooth cover. The soft sunlight shone gently on the top of my head, forming a circle of light. Facing the bright sunshine, I closed my eyes and returned to the various plots in the book. It seemed like a misty mist, leading me to the front of time and space.

Speechless and choked! Speechless and choked! Speechless and choked! Speechless and choked!

If you have any comments, you can comment below. After all, the author is still a novice, and the author can make corrections easily if you submit your opinions. The author will try his best to modify these messy settings so that everyone can understand them. Thank you for reading.

I don't even know what you are writing about, and the protagonist's parents are not introduced. It's so confusing that I can't understand it.